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Lojik - Shapeshifter

Post by lojik » Sat Aug 30, 2008 8:50 am

Here is my first ever dubsteppy type tune, I posted this up before when it was in its early stages but I guess alot of people got put off by it being a yousendit link.

So here it is on my also brand new virb page!

Check it out and please do leave feedback, I need all the help I can get with this genre :D

http://virb.com/lojik

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Post by DFRNT » Sat Aug 30, 2008 1:47 pm

Well, I'm impressed.

Athmospheric a nice drumloop, things in all the right places.

The snare is a bit weak, or slightly lacking. I'd consider giving it a bit more length, and remember you can layer 2 or 3 snares all EQd to get the right sounds.

The drop was good, but your bass felt slightly low in the mix, so if you want to highlight it - I'd say bring it up a bit.

This track could be a cracking debut if you re-worked it a little.

EDIT: - gave this a mention on www.sittingovation.com

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Post by lojik » Sat Aug 30, 2008 5:28 pm

Cool, thanks for the mention on your site, appreciate it! :)

I'll take a look at the things you mentioned, a few people mentioned the snare and I beefed it up a bit but obviously not enough :P

Talking about the bass, is that the sub or the mid? I don't have a sub with my monitors so all I have to go on is how I think they sound and a spectral analyzer lol.

Anyone else?
Out Now:
DD005 - Retrospect
MRS029 - Connected/Lovin' You
DAR010 - Santogold - Shove It (remix) 12"
SET003 - Bob Marley - Is This Love (remix) 12"
Echodub Loves Volume 2 - White Room
FTW Records Digital - Panic Room
FTW Free Compilation - Get Up (a.k.a Symphony)

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Post by lojik » Sun Aug 31, 2008 12:30 pm

Bummpety Bump ;)
Out Now:
DD005 - Retrospect
MRS029 - Connected/Lovin' You
DAR010 - Santogold - Shove It (remix) 12"
SET003 - Bob Marley - Is This Love (remix) 12"
Echodub Loves Volume 2 - White Room
FTW Records Digital - Panic Room
FTW Free Compilation - Get Up (a.k.a Symphony)

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Post by DFRNT » Sun Aug 31, 2008 1:25 pm

I think both the sub and the mid. Worth boosting them a little. Do you have headphones to listen on - that might help? I'd advise a good solid pair, or stick the track on a CD and play it on a nice system to get it right.

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Post by drama(urbannerds) » Sun Aug 31, 2008 2:54 pm

Same comment as above,

Snare needs to be beefier... Reallllly nice track for a first track.

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Post by lojik » Mon Sep 01, 2008 4:33 pm

Cool I'll get on that :D

At the moment I'm using Alesis Monitors (with no sub attached) and Sony DJ700 headphones to mix on so I can't really get an accurate response!

Cheers Drama, glad you like it!

I'll post another link up when I've made the edits but it might not be till the weekend coz I work full time :P
Out Now:
DD005 - Retrospect
MRS029 - Connected/Lovin' You
DAR010 - Santogold - Shove It (remix) 12"
SET003 - Bob Marley - Is This Love (remix) 12"
Echodub Loves Volume 2 - White Room
FTW Records Digital - Panic Room
FTW Free Compilation - Get Up (a.k.a Symphony)

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Post by hxdb » Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:33 pm

Hey! I checked this tune out after reading the review over on Alex's blog.

I'm def liking the overall vibe of the tune, the atmospherics are spot on and the effects used were executed very well.

As others have stated would like to hear some more work on the drums.

Nice job m8!

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Post by lojik » Sun Sep 07, 2008 10:29 am

New updated version on the Virb page, made it look a bit nicer too!

Cheers for request HxdB.

As ever, all comments are welcome!
Out Now:
DD005 - Retrospect
MRS029 - Connected/Lovin' You
DAR010 - Santogold - Shove It (remix) 12"
SET003 - Bob Marley - Is This Love (remix) 12"
Echodub Loves Volume 2 - White Room
FTW Records Digital - Panic Room
FTW Free Compilation - Get Up (a.k.a Symphony)

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Post by lojik » Mon Sep 08, 2008 1:53 pm

OK last bump then I'll let this die the death that it obviously wants to :(

http://www.virb.com/lojik
Out Now:
DD005 - Retrospect
MRS029 - Connected/Lovin' You
DAR010 - Santogold - Shove It (remix) 12"
SET003 - Bob Marley - Is This Love (remix) 12"
Echodub Loves Volume 2 - White Room
FTW Records Digital - Panic Room
FTW Free Compilation - Get Up (a.k.a Symphony)

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Post by cixxxj » Tue Oct 21, 2008 4:48 pm

good tune, so dark it hurts! Technically I agree with the comments above, but u got fire, i bet that wheelin sub kills it in a big system if you'll properly get this mixed/mastered!
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Post by lojik » Tue Oct 21, 2008 8:36 pm

Same as White Room, I'll sort the 320's out tomorrow after work ;)
Out Now:
DD005 - Retrospect
MRS029 - Connected/Lovin' You
DAR010 - Santogold - Shove It (remix) 12"
SET003 - Bob Marley - Is This Love (remix) 12"
Echodub Loves Volume 2 - White Room
FTW Records Digital - Panic Room
FTW Free Compilation - Get Up (a.k.a Symphony)

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Post by veil » Tue Oct 21, 2008 8:41 pm

Nice tracks Lojik...keep em coming.

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Post by cixxxj » Tue Oct 21, 2008 8:48 pm

list me up for dis too
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Post by chrish » Wed Oct 22, 2008 1:14 am

I'm into this :D. Nice track! Can I get in the 320 line as well?

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Post by lojik » Sat Oct 25, 2008 1:44 pm

320's sent!
Out Now:
DD005 - Retrospect
MRS029 - Connected/Lovin' You
DAR010 - Santogold - Shove It (remix) 12"
SET003 - Bob Marley - Is This Love (remix) 12"
Echodub Loves Volume 2 - White Room
FTW Records Digital - Panic Room
FTW Free Compilation - Get Up (a.k.a Symphony)

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Post by zorq » Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:40 pm

Oi, that shapeshifer's the business! definately feeling that one. I really like de vocal snippets used for atmos.

keep m coming!

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Post by doctor nimble » Sat Oct 25, 2008 4:01 pm

Not bad at all. Production seems pretty tight.

The snare could benefit from a bit of 3-5000Hz 'crack'.

If you can use VSTi's then download Voxengo span and use it to analyse the frequencies in each track to help you get the perfect mixdown.

Duncan.

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Post by darkmatteruk » Sat Oct 25, 2008 5:31 pm

yea very nice work, deep sounds.

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Post by selektah » Sat Oct 25, 2008 8:23 pm

Really nice track...would LOVE a 320 sir!

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