Check me New Track fubar - Savaged

fubar · Post by **fubar** » Tue Dec 06, 2005 10:43 pm

Hello everyone, jus finished a track, tell us if you're liking it

all feedback welcome, cheers!

Link

http://rasclatt.image-upload.org/Savaged.mp3

if you want a wav jus ask, cheers

ed.

fubar · Post by **fubar** » Wed Dec 07, 2005 3:25 pm

bumpyer

deepfreeze · Post by **deepfreeze** » Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:34 pm

it's ok,.. don't realy feel it thow,... sorry

and i can't realy hear the bass on my laptop..

andythetwig · Post by **andythetwig** » Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:46 pm

I'm not surprised you can't hear bass on your laptop... unless it's equipped with subwoofers... now there's an idea

I'm definitely feeling the second bit, when the initial straight breakbeat dissolves into the slower halfstep beat... liking some of those drifty samples at this point.

Some of the synths sound a bit twee, and the melodies are a bit conventional. The last note of the 4bar bassline goes up, not sure i like it... In general, more FX all around!

I reckon you can get it 100% more sinistre!

fubar · Post by **fubar** » Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:42 pm

cool, cheers for feedback, back to ze drawing board

dubweiser · Post by **dubweiser** » Thu Dec 08, 2005 3:20 am

Nice. But the tune's a bit empty in some parts and you need a stronger kick IMHO.
I agree with andythetwig you can get it more sinistre. Keep up the good work.

Check me New Track fubar - Savaged

Check me New Track fubar - Savaged

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