feedback sharing thread anyone?

gambledub · Post by **gambledub** » Wed Nov 26, 2008 1:48 am

would anyone be keen for a feedback sharing thread? the only rules are to post a track to recieve feedback, you must give feedback on somebody elses track (maybe comments, suggestions, construstive critisism etc.) to avoid looking like im trying to shamelessly self promote myself the first person to reply can post their track up for feedback (you will still have to give feedback to someone else though

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any takers?

gambledub · Post by **gambledub** » Wed Nov 26, 2008 2:18 am

oh yeah i forgot to mention it can be at any varying stage of production

irregular foundation · Post by **irregular foundation** » Wed Nov 26, 2008 2:35 am

sure , ill take a listen

dont have anything to post though , i tried making a song for the contest and couldnt tell whether my bassline sounded better backwards or forwards

nova.k · Post by **nova.k** » Wed Nov 26, 2008 2:44 am

yeah.. i'm happy to give feed back... a bit nervous about posting tracks though, for some reason nothing I do ends up sounding like dubstep

gambledub · Post by **gambledub** » Wed Nov 26, 2008 10:43 pm

haha swt you should post your songs maybe you could get some recommendations on what to do

chrish · Post by **chrish** » Wed Nov 26, 2008 11:02 pm

If this thread can get going it would be dope. We had a thread titled "One Of Those Tunes" that lasted all of a week. Seems like most people aren't into sharing feedback, offering constructive criticism, putting themselves out there to be criticized, etc

I'm game though. Lord knows I need help, and I am happy to help others.

gambledub · Post by **gambledub** » Fri Nov 28, 2008 5:20 am

I'm game though. Lord knows I need help, and I am happy to help others

haha dont we all

you should post your tracks up and get it started. if no one does i might post one of mine to try start it up. either that or bump it indefinitely lol

Disco Nutter · Post by **Disco Nutter** » Fri Nov 28, 2008 8:05 am

Let's get this started then

This is something I did quite a while ago, fucked around with an acapella of another track we made.

Not properly mixed and not properly everythinged lol

http://www.zshare.net/audio/51954891bc651cdd/

chrish · Post by **chrish** » Fri Nov 28, 2008 9:24 am

Insomnia I started Wednesday night, and M4SS1V3 I threw together quickly tonight so that I would have at least 2 newer tracks up there with half way decent percussion, at least in comparison to the other tunes up there

......

Feel free to tear them apart, all I ask is that you give some constructive stuff to go on.....

-Chris

http://www.virb.com/2410464737369413

chrish · Post by **chrish** » Fri Nov 28, 2008 9:31 am

Johnny Beat wrote:Let's get this started then

This is something I did quite a while ago, fucked around with an acapella of another track we made.

Not properly mixed and not properly everythinged lol

http://www.zshare.net/audio/51954891bc651cdd/

I don't think I have much to critique on that one, at least nothing that stands out to me. The only thing that feels different to me is that the vocals feel like they belong on a much darker tune than this.

Sorry I don't have more for you.

manray · Post by **manray** » Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:47 am

http://resonant.org.uk/clockwork.mp3

That was done Sunday night, about two hours worth. It's finished now just gonna finalise the mix tonight for playing tomorrow.

Appreciate thoughts on the power of the bass/beat if anyone has got a serious system. Tested it in the studio and in the car and it's sounding strong as fuck.

Brisance · Post by **Brisance** » Fri Nov 28, 2008 11:26 am

manray:
The percussion is really nice, the bass, while heavy, is pretty standard.

Johnny Beat:
The vocals are awesome! Bringing back memories of my hardcore fanship. This sort of thing could sure use some 'evy grimey bassline tho.

ChrisH:
My mates computer must be missing some codec/FF plugin, but I was not able to listen to your tunes:(

Here's a tune i made a long time ago, I am still lacking ideas and inspiration to finish it off tho:
http://www.speedyshare.com/823665385.html
Particularly(sp?) pleased with the last 16 bars, which should be the part before the 2nd drop.
EDIT: whoops, forgot the m in "manray"

manray · Post by **manray** » Fri Nov 28, 2008 11:38 am

Brisance wrote:anray:
The percussion is really nice, the bass, while heavy, is pretty standard

Cheers, Yeah I know the bass is a bit over done already but fuck it

Like the beat on your track, very different, like the clicky and shuffling of it but I would re-arrange it a bit.

Take those last few bars and make that the intro because your current intro is a bit boring. That glitchy vocal sound I think would be a very interesting intro. You can then use it again before the second drop but play around with it some more.

Dunno if this is a low bit-rate mp3 or something but alot needs doing on the sound quality, its way too mushy in the mid-range if you ask me

blip · Post by **blip** » Fri Nov 28, 2008 12:21 pm

irregular foundation wrote:couldnt tell whether my bassline sounded better backwards or forwards

Hahaha, I feel you son

rendr · Post by **rendr** » Fri Nov 28, 2008 12:34 pm

http://soundcloud.com/rendr/trackie

different link:

http://www.sub-bassmusic.com/profile/Rendr

Some constructive criticism would be nice on this one, and I was wondering if everyone (using decent speakers) can hear the 45 Hz Sine wave?

edit: Brisance i'll have a listen to your tune properly when not using macbook speakers but it sounds pretty filthy. like the warped vocals reminded me right near the end of that JSRF game, or old skool hardcore from '91

Brisance · Post by **Brisance** » Fri Nov 28, 2008 8:33 pm

the 45Hz sine is barely audible, but the sub is chilling my feet with wind tho:) Can't really come up with any critique(other than for my taste it should be a bit darker

) would fit awesomely as a soundtrack for something, it would look awesome accompanied by some weird, artistic video.

Since I already wandered to this thread, I will post something too

http://www.speedyshare.com/245780501.html
was trying to do something different with my friend today, the name is a keyboard mash:)
EDIT: btw we tried to avoid using wobbles, but guess, what we ended up with

chrish · Post by **chrish** » Mon Dec 01, 2008 5:30 am

Added a new song that I worked on for much of the day "Are you high?". Feedback is appreciated.

http://www.virb.com/2410464737369413

manray · Post by **manray** » Mon Dec 01, 2008 10:40 am

New tune - 58 Weight

http://www.resonant.org.uk/58weight.mp3

Or

http://myspace.com/manraylondon

manray · Post by **manray** » Mon Dec 01, 2008 10:44 am

ChrisH wrote:Added a new song that I worked on for much of the day "Are you high?". Feedback is appreciated.

http://www.virb.com/2410464737369413

I like much of the elements of the track but it gets boring quite quickly as there isn't much variation and seems to move along too slowly.

I think it could do with a bit more variation in the beat pattern, bring the different elements in and out a bit quicker, chop it up so it doesn't sound like a big loop if you see what I'm saying.

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Mon Dec 01, 2008 10:45 am

bottom of player
http://legendary.co.nr/

first attempt of breaking outta 140, only managed to get to 145 without getting scared

feedback sharing thread anyone?

feedback sharing thread anyone?

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