FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

[reloukkz]

hi guys, i'm new in this forum, and really like this system that we need post feedback for posting own track.

first of all: a lot of good track here.

@TRaffikz: dat pokelover video was hilarious and the remix is sounding fine too, but the music in your sign is way better.

@arisemprex: it would be a good track if your bass would sound better. love that guitar

@narrator: sicktune! the master will help a lot to this track, grats

@weedcali: man. this track is so sweet. everything perfect.

and now here is my track. so what do you think about this one?
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[dj seizure]

@Reloukkz - This isn't my style of production, but I see what you're trying to do, I don't really have anything to say to help you with it, because I completely have no idea to make stuff like that, but I suppose the only general observation I can make is that it lacks rhythm. I see you're aiming to make generally commercial stuff, so perhaps try to make a killer riff instead. And I don't particularly like the snare, sounds a bit off, but still, a good track all in all.

@Hayze- Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. All I could say is rerender it and this time increase the volume of the whole track by about 5db! It's tooooo quiet!

@PurePhase - This isn't my style of production but I absolutely love the darker stuff, mainly because I can't make it! My god, what a dark beaut! Huge huge huge track! Don't watch that! If you keep making absolutely huge bangers like that you'll definitely get signed up man!

@Conflux - I really really enjoyed your track. It is genuinely a great smooth roller although the longer it goes in, the more it doesn't change about! I think all it needs is a real good mix down to make things sound more professional, ya get me?


Another one from me?
2nd drop is MUCH bigger than the first one.

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[Noonyez]

@bigfootspartan very relaxing track. great samples.

@Sinisterbeats good track man love the dark style.

@dj seizure feels like im in india. i am impressed.

I guess Drumstep is still pretty frowned upon at the moment. But I fixed my tune G Man. Everything should sound better. By the way HQ (320) download available.

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[+3]

Thanks everyone.

@+3 Another cool track but way too short.... I feel like you could do some great progression with that track. Production sounds good. Keep working on it in my opinion.

I have this thing where I can't move on creatively until I either delete or publish my old tunes, I'm never going to finish Threnody, but I didn't want to delete it because I loved the samples. LOL It's un-mixed, so the levels aren't right, but I appreciate all the responses. Thanks DSF

@hayze99:
The fish pic goes perfect with that tune. LOL

[bradicle]

@ nooneyez. Reminds me of a game theme song or something, liking the intro! Pan on that sound is cool! Oh LOL the sample is from a game. Dope drums bro, kick sounding deep. That bass on the drop, i was expecting more. Kinda something more in your face, non wobble maybe. Am liking though.

@ seizure. Mad drums! Intro i should be sitting in jamaica sipping a drink. Then busts into some middle eastern synth, digging this for sure. Drums are tight as! Bass nice aswell, good job on that!

@ reloukkz. Digging man. Bass sounds a little muddy though. Also bass sounds like its over powering your drums hard. Just tone it down a bit. Else got that shit going on!

I did a bit more work on this. Won't be everyones type, it's a bit of vocal melodic dubstep.

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[reloukkz]

thx the feedbacks guys.

@bradicle: yeah you are right, and i will master it correctly (as i can). and i think i will cut that electro house thing in the ending, and remake the track to full dubstep.
your track sounds nice, and the atmosphere is great too.

[zonetrooper5]

@dj seizure Nice beat man, digging the drums especially the bongos. Drums and synths work well together and with a nice meaty sub-bass underneath to top it off. When is the track being released?

@reloukkz Sounds like your track is clipping, also suggest turing down the snare somewhat since it seems too distorted. Bass could do with turning down as well since it overpowers everything else. Nice track though, just needs a better mixdown and it will be even better.

@bradicle Great track, personally would of put a bit of reverb on the single closed/open hi hat so it isn't too loud in the mix. Otherwise I like the track and I've downloaded it.

Here is a new track, bit of jungle/dnb something which I made in the last couple of hours on and off.

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[dj seizure]

@dj seizure Nice beat man, digging the drums especially the bongos. Drums and synths work well together and with a nice meaty sub-bass underneath to top it off. When is the track being released?

It'll be in the FentPlate Evolution Vol.1 compilation which has over 20 artists and is completely FREE!

3 weeks or so from now, it'll be in the releases section man.

[kri8ive]

WHAT DO YOU THINK?

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[dj seizure]

WHAT DO YOU THINK?

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[Debaser1]

Zonetrooper: Good to see the return of some jungle! I think its a pretty sick tune to be fair. Maybe the beta gets a little lost when it kicks in, you need something with less verb and more punch there. Otherwise its top notch.

Bradicle: Very Mt Eden. Could you ask for more of a compliment? Think not. I love how much atmosphere youve crammed into this. All i'd say is that triangle/ ride bell sticks out in the mix like a sore thumb. Blend it with some verbs or simply turn it down. Top top top tune though.

Noonyez: I think with your 2 basses in the main section - the first one (sub) is way too distant and quiet, and the second one (harsher) is too loud. I like the style of it though. After that stop halfway through, those atmospheric noises are really cool man.

Started this tune this morning, just about got it to this stage now. Who'd have thought Ricky Gervais and dubstep would've met. Well they have here:
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[A-List]

@ seizureeeeeeeee - i see you managed to sort the sub bass problem! sounds niceee man! i like the drums alot.. like that snare aswell.. and the perc... and the panned hats... big up on tis one bro!

@ noonyez - Not TOO big on the intro to be honest... but it does build tension. which is the sign of a good intro. the drums are decent... i wouldve maybe gone for a better kick, but the snare is nice.. not really digging the main bass sound too much either.

@ bradicle - more like my kinda intro! i liek this one alot.. really nice vibes! could see it getting a good reception live... maybe needs a little work on the mixdown/master but other than that.. i like it alot!

@ zonetrooper5 - im not really the biggest jungle/dnb fan, so i cant really critique. But, i think the drums oculd do with some work to get them pumping abit more, and more clear inthe mix.. im not digging that vocal over the top either.. or the fx over the top, i would maybe opt to take them out.

and a new one from us, tell us what you think!

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[impey]

[harlrayner]

WHAT DO YOU THINK?

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Wicked tune, love the way the wobbles are chopped, makes it sound like they're being played on an instrument. I think the intro is twice as long as it should be but there are some cool noises right at the beginning. Also the drum rolls are sick, especially just before the drop
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Not really my type of tune but production is good. I think it needs a key change somewhere or a bit of melody to break up the tension a bit.
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Love this tune bro, sick!! This could be a classic. Nice melody and it just feels good... Nice and minimalistic. Love the deep bass too. Any chance of a download?

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[harlrayner]

Some feedback please:

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Both tracks are unmastered!

[larzol]

@noonyez : i like it dunno why, usually i dont really like this kinda stuff but good job.

@reloukkz : liking that bassline and the drop, but the film samples a the start are too choppy is doesnt quite sound right.

@ dj seizure : likin the sitar sounds but not my kinda dub, it does make me feel like im in india tho

and heres mine, its my first proper track let us know what you think.

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[Debaser1]

feedback lease people its only fair ^^^

[TaikiOfficialUK]

@Larzol Very nice sounds try beefing the drums up abit

@sinisterbeats NICE dark man

@Debaser1 Very nice melodies Keep it up!

heres mine just finished!
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[narrator]

Nice one again for the feedback so far guys, it's been a great help..

[dj seizure]

Nice one again for the feedback so far guys, it's been a great help..

Cheeky bit of Sarcasm I sense?