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Dropkick_Kid · Post by **Dropkick_Kid** » Sat Aug 22, 2009 3:48 pm

Just a preview of my first attempt at writing a track, don't be too harsh..

http://www.zshare.net/audio/64496022e4e25ecb/

Dropkick_Kid · Post by **Dropkick_Kid** » Sat Aug 22, 2009 4:25 pm

IanFM wrote:http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/deft

New sketch, more 135 2step business. Sampling Noel Ellis. Tell me what you guys fink!

Drums are sweet, think the bass gets a little repetitive though.
Just my opinion, doesn't count for much lol
Overall nicely mellowing

Dropkick_Kid · Post by **Dropkick_Kid** » Sat Aug 22, 2009 4:58 pm

Some feedback sharpish would be nice, wanna crack on just want some opinions on how I could improve it first

big d 90 · Post by **big d 90** » Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:07 pm

One Dubby Tune bout 1:34 of it ,

would like to know whether anyone thinks i should scrap it or has any advice for it

http://www.divshare.com/download/8262030-6c8

cheers

stappard · Post by **stappard** » Sun Aug 23, 2009 2:45 am

This is one I've been working on tonight. A jungle bootleg for a bit of fun. Kept it lo-fi sounding, I think it works well like that.

Let me know what you think...

http://soundcloud.com/stappard/sensi

stappard · Post by **stappard** » Sun Aug 23, 2009 3:12 am

Dr-Zitbag wrote:Some feedback sharpish would be nice, wanna crack on just want some opinions on how I could improve it first

It's a cool track, especially for a first time, the levels are there really (although my personal taste would be for a slightly quieter kick) but my main concern is the 32 bar intro.. I found myself losing interest as the tension wasn't keeping me interested up until the drop.

Also it's crying out for a melody over the bass. The overall impression of the track in my mind is one with a lot going on in the low frequencys but little taking up the space up top.

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Sun Aug 23, 2009 2:31 pm

trying to set this eerie vibe, this part should be the "main" part of the track, nice and slow. intro/outro/break is gonna be about pad buildup, effects and bass effects. I think the bassline kinda sucks at the moment...

whaddayathink?

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6455374829a168d0/

sectionattack · Post by **sectionattack** » Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:41 am

Just put a work in progress up on myspace. Stop by and have a look... cheers

klown theory · Post by **klown theory** » Mon Aug 24, 2009 2:24 pm

Heres my latest work in progress, see what you all think. Comments and feedback please.

http://soundcloud.com/klown-theory/wip2-no-name-yet

HangManDubstep · Post by **HangManDubstep** » Mon Aug 24, 2009 2:35 pm

I NEED U

my track chase the shadows some say has a good bassline and some say rubbish..

i really need ya help for this..is the bassline cack..if so how can it be done better

link in the sig

xzazael · Post by **xzazael** » Mon Aug 24, 2009 9:22 pm

Klown Theory wrote:Heres my latest work in progress, see what you all think. Comments and feedback please.

http://soundcloud.com/klown-theory/wip2-no-name-yet

I like it, good job on that one!

I NEED U

my track chase the shadows some say has a good bassline and some say rubbish..

i really need ya help for this..is the bassline cack..if so how can it be done better Very Happy
link in the sig

I don't know where your track chase the shadows is...it's not in your sig. However I did listen to the rest of your stuff and it's pretty good. Needs a little bit of eqing and cleaning up I'd say, but it's good stuff

silentmike · Post by **silentmike** » Tue Aug 25, 2009 8:27 am

http://silentmike.radioglitch.com/silent%20wobbles.mp3

A new bounce from me.
Ill never finish any tunes

One problem i am having is when i export a tune from flstudio the low sub bass seems to be artefacting. Is it because of the bitrate i am exporting at?

HangManDubstep · Post by **HangManDubstep** » Tue Aug 25, 2009 8:57 am

@silent mike..

quite possibley...u export at 320 kbps and 16 bit..thats what i tend to do...u ever upload into another program..eg.audacity..etc...if so export as wav into that other program

stimps · Post by **stimps** » Tue Aug 25, 2009 12:28 pm

This is my first tune so any feedback would be massively appreciated, regardless of how negative.

http://soundcloud.com/stimps

my_fickle_eye · Post by **my_fickle_eye** » Tue Aug 25, 2009 2:23 pm

Stappard - really digging this tune, could do a change with the bassline notes after every 8 bars just to one another harmonizing note a bit lower, but love the lo fi sound, not sure if it needs to be as long as it is.

Klown theory - I like your style, love the bass sound seems to fit into the mix really well. Sounds like Sea shanty haunted house dubstep haha. Maybe more of the bassline but thats just personal taste.

Hangman - like the bassline but i dont think you need to have the side chain from the kick on it on it possibly making it sound weaker to some folks. I recon it would be worth having a sub playing along with it.

Can someone tell me how i can make the drop in this tune phatter, what am i doing wrong? Track is influenced by moderat amongst other things. Advice on the track pllleeeease

www.myspace.com/myfickleeye

manray · Post by **manray** » Tue Aug 25, 2009 4:11 pm

manray · Post by **manray** » Tue Aug 25, 2009 4:16 pm

SilentMike wrote:http://silentmike.radioglitch.com/silent%20wobbles.mp3

A new bounce from me.
Ill never finish any tunes

One problem i am having is when i export a tune from flstudio the low sub bass seems to be artefacting. Is it because of the bitrate i am exporting at?

I cuss 80% of the tunes I hear but I really like this one.

Love that little synth sound at the start of every bar. Tune has got some nice progression, keeps me interested. Snare seems a little harsh compared to the rest of the track, could just be my ears but I find alot of producers wack their snares up too loud for impact and then they lose out because the rest of the elements can't stand up properly. Especially with a kick underneath the snare, one of the two probably needs to come down a bit.

manray · Post by **manray** » Tue Aug 25, 2009 4:21 pm

Klown Theory wrote:Heres my latest work in progress, see what you all think. Comments and feedback please.

http://soundcloud.com/klown-theory/wip2-no-name-yet

When the bass comes in it absolutely washes out the whole track and you are losing all the high end frequencies. Probably got some mad compression on it doing that. Reign the bass in and watch that compression because it's fucking the track.

In general as well feels like the track needs a bit definition on the high end, i can't hear any high-hats, feels like the track is missing them a bit inbetween the percussion.

Otherwise I quite like the idea of the track, it's got a nice kinda off/key positive feeling to it.

manray · Post by **manray** » Tue Aug 25, 2009 4:57 pm

roodbwoy wrote:trying to set this eerie vibe, this part should be the "main" part of the track, nice and slow. intro/outro/break is gonna be about pad buildup, effects and bass effects. I think the bassline kinda sucks at the moment...

whaddayathink?

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6455374829a168d0/

Right about the bass, it's got far too much mid-range muffle drowning out the rest of the track. I think it would be better with more sub/mid ratio, maybe a bit of those highs, but cut the mid range right out of that bass and you might have a bit of a clearer sound.

manray · Post by **manray** » Tue Aug 25, 2009 4:59 pm

stappard wrote:This is one I've been working on tonight. A jungle bootleg for a bit of fun. Kept it lo-fi sounding, I think it works well like that.

Let me know what you think...

http://soundcloud.com/stappard/sensi

Reminds me of some of them oldskool jungle tunes, sound quality completely fucked. I kept waiting for the melody to disapear and some SICK jungle break to hit with some serious sub

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