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Post by Augment » Wed Jun 08, 2011 11:17 am

@Crakasteven Wow, dude. Really nice, but it needs a better mixdown. ;) And would be cool if u changed up the hats now and then :)

@atticuh Very nice, diggin the lead that comes in after a while. But as mentioned, maybe introduce the different elements a bit better? And i would turn down the decay on the reverb a little, as I feel the piano almost drowns in it.

@thelmbrjck Cool song! I don't know it it's just me, but it feels like the wobblez are a bit sloppy? Like, they are not cuttin through. (Really don't know how to describe it, lol) That's the main thing i can come up with. ;)

@NorCoDubstep Really diggin the cutted voices in the beginning, dude! ;) Nice drop too, but I would maybe layer the 2nd wobble with something, since it feels kinda empty compared to the first.

@Voodeedoo Very nice! Diggin the guitar riff. I don't really know what to say about it :P

@Nickelwound Yeah, u do indeed sound like a skrillex ripoff :P But the drums should be changed, or atleast layered, cus the kick aint got no punch, lol. And maybe layer the snare with someething that fills out the higher freqs a bit better ;)

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Post by mistayif » Wed Jun 08, 2011 12:15 pm

@z6z: stay on the clouds, feeling the track. nice laid back vibe and percussions and drums work very nicely together, the main synth line reminds me of ltj bukem - atlantis

@ atticuh: really nice melodies throughout the intro. really liking those subtle high piano notes, you've disguised them quite well. that high synth in the drop playing that melody is nice but can't say i'm too big a fan of that midrange wobble one

@ blinkesko: the kick you used on that track sounds very tinny and has no weight to it at all, i also can't hear your snare very well so you should bring your drums out a lot more, use a little compression for that added oomph. the rest of the track works well

here's my one that i would like some more feedback on. not dubstep but a sub heavy melodic track at 100bpm

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Post by RmoniK » Wed Jun 08, 2011 1:43 pm

been a while since i posted here :D

@mistayif - goddamn first tune i listen to and it's already one of the best ones i've heard here yet. This is the music i study to or just chill with friends. Damn nice. The piano can go up a liiiiiil bit. i love how you played with the delays. I'm getting quite a good stereo spread too. I love it man. I'm impressed. And i don't have a subwoofer here but i get the feeling maybe the sub can go up juuuuuust a tiny tad.
@blinkesko - Nice stuff! Love the melody on the lead, except for the kinda wobble thingy you've put over it, i'd make it more consistent. Also, your snare man. I love your bass, but that snare is way to small and distant, drowned in the bass. Layer that bitch and make it louder! Other than that, no real remarks. Good stuff.
@Nickelwound - Wow! Nice drop and vocal chopping, i didn't too much like the sidechain on the kick though. Also, maybe your drop is a liiiittle bit too much bitcrushed. Full tune soon? :D
@Voodeedoo - nice to hear some other stuff on here once in a while! when the drums came in it kinda made me think of Gorillaz, which i'd take as a great compliment! Good stuff.
@Norcodubstep - Weird vocalling, but i like it! The drop is nice, but that hollow synth is a bit too hollow compared to the other filthy synth. Maybe layer it with a consistent saw or something.
@thelmbrjck - i don't like faded in intro's. Nice drop, but your wobble goes a bit out of sync when you change notes. Also, where's your snare? Other than that, nice track!
@atticuh - the drop was a long wait, when you do things in the intro, it's barely noticable because it's drowned in the reverb, but that's great sounding, it just needs to build up a more. Nice drop man :D
@crackasteven - Holy cow. When i was 10 seconds far i knew already i was listening to some nice stuff. I LOVE your percussion man. Impressed i is. I'd vary a bit though, maybe add more stuff in there, but the stuff that is already there is friggin nice.

Alrajt, so, you guys are all a hell of a lot better than i am, but i decided to give it a try anyway and ask for feedback. Most basses are made in Massive, everything is processed in reason. Go easy on me (but don't be scared, i won't cry)
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Post by Augment » Wed Jun 08, 2011 2:46 pm

RmoniK wrote:been a while since i posted here :D

@blinkesko - Nice stuff! Love the melody on the lead, except for the kinda wobble thingy you've put over it, i'd make it more consistent. Also, your snare man. I love your bass, but that snare is way to small and distant, drowned in the bass. Layer that bitch and make it louder! Other than that, no real remarks. Good stuff.


Alrajt, so, you guys are all a hell of a lot better than i am, but i decided to give it a try anyway and ask for feedback. Most basses are made in Massive, everything is processed in reason. Go easy on me (but don't be scared, i won't cry)
http://soundcloud.com/r_monik/newwwwwwwwww/s-1JcTX
it's a private track so you're gonna have to click it. :)
Thanks dude :) The lead thing, is it about the one that comes in about 2 min?

As for your track, wasn't exacty what I would call my style, didn't like the yoi's :P But your drum sequence is nice! :D
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Post by crakasteven » Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:36 pm

@Nickelwound thanks for the feedback, yeah im definitely gonna try to add leads and or synth and work on variation of alot of things.
Your clip has a pretty decent intro, it might be more effective it it had a sweep leading up to the drop (to also fill in that gap before the drop) Your bass sounds and structure are pretty good they could just be more full with layering and EQ. Your kick and snare are small sounding maybe eq and maximize with compression. Good work tho does sound a bit skrillex inspired haha 8)

@blinkesko definitely will be working on variation for it and adding synths, thanks for the input!
Your song has a nice lead and feel to it at the intro, great kick pattern and build up with the kicks right before the drop. Felt like the drop was nicely build up but it should have been louder, maybe beef it all up drums hats and bass with some EQ and a little verb. Your bass was really nice and the 2nd drop was nicely spiced up with some wave form. great production and good variation over all well structured just needs to sound fuller maybe some layering and EQ would help.

@mistayif Nice vibes, everything sounds really well produced, every sound is pretty chrisp and effective. Great use of reverb and all the levels sound pretty good. I thought the subtle hats were great they add alot to the rhythm and overall feel of the track, I say bring them out more because they were effective just too subtle. Great melodys, chords, and arps are good. Nice leads also the pitch bend or porto sounded nice. Also the percussion at the very end was very nice, nice use of panning also.

@RmoniK Thanks for the kind words and tips, i am gonna be working on variation and some more EQ and subtle reverb.
I dont know if i listened to the right track if u said its private. I went on your soundcloud and listened to the first one, "wip" Your drums sound eq'd nice and your snare has nice reverb. I felt the build up was pretty decent. the drop was pretty good, your bass structured well and the sounds were pretty good. That good ol massive filth, although i think it would be beefed and EQ even better if u sampled it in massive and tweaked it in reason just a thought. I also though some of your bass wobbles could have been made fuller with layering or just making it in reason altogether with maelstrom or subtraktor. Good production over all nice work man

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Post by DubMikey » Wed Jun 08, 2011 11:44 pm

@mistayif - Wow... Long time ago I've heard such a chilly track! I've would actually love a copy of that when done, lol! Great job! :)

@blinkesko - I really like that beat, it's awesome. But if I were you I'd make that bassline more phat and louder to make that final touch!

@crackasteven - Sound really good, love the reverb on that thing. Though I find it getting a bit boring after a while, If I were you I'd change it up at little more, but maybe that's just me! :)

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Post by ralfzilla » Thu Jun 09, 2011 12:21 am

Thanks for the feed back guys. Here it is again for anyone else that'd like to leave some feedback :D

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@budsteq: its a good start, but i feel like the vocal samples could use some more reverb, idk, it feels like they just cut off too soon. (not sure if that's what you were going for)

@cheeky: liking the spacey feel to it. i would say change up your patterns a little, because it seems a little too repetitive. i'd suggest messing a little with the melody, maybe adding something more to it?

@crakasteven: i feel like the highs are wayy too overwhelming,(specifically the hats) and i can barely feel/hear that sub, it would sound a lot better if it was more pronounced. structure is pretty good!

@atticuh: that intro is awesome man, one thing i'd say is that your snare sounds really muffled at times and gets lost in the mix,

@thelmbrjck: nice intro, especially diggin' your kick drum which sounds really nice and punchy. i think it would benefit from some variations on the synth you used, or maybe just add another synth sound altogether.

@RmoniK: haha awesome samples. i felt like the bass came in out of nowhere though, but i still liked it. wonder how it'd sound with a build up or two? btw the basses you used sounded pretty good!

@dubmikey: i'm feelin' the sounds you've got going on there, but i'd mess around with the lfo, that'd give it some good variation

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Post by NorCoDubstep » Thu Jun 09, 2011 4:07 am

@mistayif: Really awesome track. Really relaxing. I like the subtle piano vibes going on in it. The perc is sparse but you keep it interesting with different patterns. There really isn't much negative stuff to say about it. I don't know if you're willing to go in this direction but it would be awesome if you kept the same feel you have going but built it up into a huge epic loud song of awesomeness. Like build it up really big so it's super dramatic and chilling. That would be pretty cool

@Dubmikey: Those are some nasty sounds you've got going on there, I love it. I think you could make the crash cymbal at the beginning a touch quieter and maybe spread it out a bit with a stereo spreader or something. Your lead bass sounds are great but the sub layer could use a bit of a boost. I think your snare could be a bit louder and fatter too, try adding some layers and using a little bit of distortion.

@blinkesko: Sounds like you blended in those hats a bit. I'm really impressed with all the glitches and stutters you have in your track, they are really awesome. I particularly like the drop at 3:39ish. They only thing I can think of is that your drums could be a bit fatter. Maybe at a lower, flabby layer to your kick and sidechain a bit to keep it in line. I think a snare that is a little bit longer would fit in well. The snare could be louder too. Cheers though, that was an awesome track to listen to.

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Post by Pony_Boy » Thu Jun 09, 2011 5:26 am

hey hey

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heavy, diggin the melody you use for the bassline. carries the song nicely. turn up the snare alittle? and maybe get the kick alittle less subby. maybe have the basses wobble quicker in the somewhere for a bar or two. nice work

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wicked sub! id put some white noise or something in the intro, but damn that sub is lowww. normally this kind of tune isnt really my style but i dig the vibes. head nodder for sure.

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i would add some white noise in the intro, but nice work. the drums need to stick out more during the drop. esp the snare. and personally, the moder talking bass isnt doin it for me. i really like where you're taking this tho, wanna hear the final version.

here's a clip of the tune ive been tinkering with.
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Post by antipode » Thu Jun 09, 2011 11:17 am

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Will edit my post and post some feedback once I've listened a few of your guys' tunes. :Q:

@Pony Boy: Peace to the I! Not really my style, but I do like it. Bassline is grimy without being silly, good job! Serious tune, can't really think of anything to change.

@NorCoDubstep: Pretty cool man. The chorus'd out midrange bits are a bit too heavy on my headies, could maybe center them a bit or turn them down. Love 1:50. and the vocal samples.

@ralfzilla Real sick. The snare is kinda lacking, could do with a bit more hi's on it, really doesn't stand out, especially contrasted to the hats. Getme? Will be a beast once you've got the mixdown sorted though. Also maybe widen the midrange bline a bit.
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Post by Mannyyyyy » Thu Jun 09, 2011 11:38 am

@epochalypso - awesome shit, very... i dont even know words i just love the song great sampling there :D

@Pony_Boy - no comment on this cause its pretty much perfect, awesome synths reminds of bolodfire and eptic :D. it does sound like the bass is a little revered to much maybe just tone it down but overall awesome

@NorCoDubstep - the bass sounds really dry and small, process them so more and grit them up with little hints of distortion. track itself and the idea is good though so i like it just try to make the basses seem bigger cause theyre small right now.

@ralfzilla - nothing here i like the song and its very deep with a hint of midrange overall its good nothing to change here from my perspective.

@DubMikey -same thing as norco. add more grit to the bass and lower the reverb. other then that its good bro drums are punchy as well.


now for me, ive been hooked on neurofunk and my idols koan sound so im making some 100bpm shit. :D

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Post by Voodeedoo » Thu Jun 09, 2011 2:39 pm

@Mannyyyyy - fucking wicked intro. i have pretty much no complaints... but a lot my neighbors do. keep at it man.
@epochalypso - liking it. interesting style, love the sampling. the vinyl adds a lot of depth to the track. its good to have a break from all these farse software synths haha.
@Pony_Boy - hot damn, you nailed the bass just right. i love the diversity in the wobbles, unlike most i've heard it has direction!

This is one I began earlier last night and it's nearing completion, but since the artist is the worst judge of his works I need some critique. It's not dubstep, btw.
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Post by hudson » Thu Jun 09, 2011 6:11 pm

Mistayif - Amazing! I can't think of anything you could improve honestly, this song is perfect. I wish I could download it :P

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Post by lightshapers » Thu Jun 09, 2011 7:27 pm

another from me. will leave some more feedback later. my remix of hulk & sickorwell 'organized crime'
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Post by infestedpasta » Thu Jun 09, 2011 10:37 pm

Voodeedoo - sounds great! I like it alot! I don't even know what you could improve on. But it sounds like it would sound good with an acapella over it or something.

Mannyyyyy - This is awesome! very original. once again I don't even know what you could add to it.. Maybe some more high noises?

Pony_Boy - Love it, has an old school dub / dubstep meets new-school dubstep. Sounds great keep it up.

Here is mine, I'm not quite as skilled as y'all. But I'm trying and getting better. :P Trying to have this song done for a show this weekend... definatly wanna tweak / add alot more stuff with it. Any help / ideas much appreciated as usual.

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Post by DubMikey » Thu Jun 09, 2011 11:20 pm

@Infestedpasta - First I'd like to say; wicked name, haha! For the tune: This tune is sick as fuck, damn! Only thing I would add to that shit would be more random samples to fill out the empty spaces, but maybe that's just me, cus I love random samples. Oh, and when it drops the second time I was really excepting something crazy to go down, but then I got a little disappointed, would have loved it to go nuts!

@lightshapers - That was a hella wicked drop I gotta say! The basslines are fucking sick and the breakdown is just pure love. You hit the right spot on this one tbh.

@hudson - I would change it up a bit more, it's getting too boring, for me at least. Though it's not really my style, so dunno. Keep it up! :)

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Post by infestedpasta » Thu Jun 09, 2011 11:23 pm

By the name did you mean "test1"? or did you see the other clip on there of it being called "whompin in a room"?

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Post by DubMikey » Thu Jun 09, 2011 11:26 pm

infestedpasta wrote:By the name did you mean "test1"? or did you see the other clip on there of it being called "whompin in a room"?
By the name I mean Infestedpasta :D

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Post by amphibian » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:21 am

Okay, this is from several pages back up to now, so if you've done shit before then, I haven't re-listened and skipped over your post. If you've done a new one since then, slow the fuck down :P

@therebel730 - I find it hard to respond to such short clips that are so far from complete it's not funny - reason being is it's so hard to know what you're actually going to work on, that you may have already fixed things.etc. Anyways - drums need a lot more presence, some layering wouldn't go astray. A little new york compression would help also.

@hudson - that intro is freakin' awesome, love it. Sounds like you have a lot of reversed samples going on? Works very nicely. If anything, that cymbal/ride sounds a little out of key, try pitching it up a little. Drums need some work - they're very flat. I'd layer a clap over that snare as well to give it some more top end, and a little saturation.

@clsh - love it. Bass sounds a little muddy though - try taking some out around the 400-500hz range. Really like the kick/snare combination. Hat groove is also very nice.

@Specimen-Yarp - far too repetitive. I'd change up that bass some more, and you need a little variation in the sub, which you seem to lose once the wobbles come in.

@sawtoothsoldier - you should get around those vocal samples. It gives the impression that some lyrical content is coming, but it never does. Otherwise I rather like the tune on the whole. Snare is very weak, I'd swap it for a better sample.

@Voodeedoo - well done matching the synths with the vocals. Gorgeous intro. Not my kind of music - a little -too- soft, but the production quality is clearly there. Great work, really well done. I really have nothing bad to say :)

@budsteq - I'm really quite critical of wobble-heavy tunes, but the synths you've created are very soothing, I like it. Vocals don't fit the tune I don't think - and I think you'd be better off creating another sound to fill in those gaps. Otherwise I like the almost nerdy nature of the tune (that's not meant in a bad way). It's different, it's unique. Keep at it, good stuff :) Drums need a little attention - kick lacks real punch, and the snare sounds a bit too loud.

@cheeky - big fan of dungeonstep, and the intro synths you've got going on are nice. Especially love the industrial sample every now and then. I feel like the tune is missing -something- however.

@crakasteven - for a first go, very nice. I'd probably ease off on the panning however of the congo - it's a little too hard left/right. You want some panning, but not 100% either way. Very nice sounds throughout. I think the mid of your snare needs to be replaced, sounds like it's a separate sample? Really love that synth around 1.12. Track has some really nice energy and progression, keep it up :) Also, listening again - sounds like you have like a fire alarm in the background at some points? Whatever it is, fits beautifully!

@atticuh - you write all those notes? If so, beautiful work. Bass doesn't really fit though. Also - it's too heavy in reverb/panning - which will create issues for you in mono.

@thelmbrjck - you got the right idea in general, but the drop really loses something... that initial note is awesome, but then you lost me. Whole tune is missing a lot of high end, try bringing it up on your eq, add some saturation.etc. I'd also get rid of the bitcrushing, but that's my opinion.

@blinkesko - your drums need some serious work, incredibly weak. Bring them up in the mix, add compression - completely change that snare sample and layer some more. Kick needs more punch also. Lead is good, liking that, maybe a touch more reverb. I'd probably tone down the reverb on the bass, or send it to a channel and reverb there, 100% wet and bring it down.

@mistayif - absolutely gorgeous. Really nothing bad to say, keep it up :) Very relaxing song, I like.

@DubMikey - you'll have to excuse me if I sound a bit harsh - I am sooooo sick of that kind of bass sound. Drums need to be brought up a bit - again, layering if you haven't, becuase they're rather weak. I'd also look at the groove/arrangement of your hats, they're not pushing the tune along at all, in fact I feel like they're holding it back. Listen to your favourite tunes and pay attention to how good hat arrangements kind of "shuffle" along...

@ralfzilla - drop the reverb down a lot on that bass - it makes the whole mix muddy. Also, it might just be me but all those clicks/beeps.etc. you got going on actually irritated me (as in emotionally). I found it rather annoying and so was unable to really enjoy the tune at all. I'm not sure why - could be a certain frequency they're hitting.

@Pony_Boy - that intro was soooo good... then you dropped that high-pitched bass and ARGH, lost it. Really lost the vibe it had imo. Remove it, now! (lol) Seriously, this tune could be so badass but those synths... *sniff* Awesome samples, great reggae vibe, but destroyed with sounds that don't gel (ps - seems I'm alone in this opinion :P). Technically, it all sounds really good - drums are on-point. I'd probably remove a touch of reverb on the snare, hats are perfect. The really high-pitched synth, if you must keep it (:P), maybe bring it a little more forward in the mix?

@Mannyyyyy - god I wish I knew how to make those basses. Please advice, add me on aim: pHybian :P Really like the flow of the tune and overall synthesis. Drums are on-point. I think the tune needs "more" though, something else in the background kinda pushing it along, possibly well connected with the hats?

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Post by ogunslinger » Fri Jun 10, 2011 1:46 am

@phybian - diggin the tune, nice n dark! imo the hi hats don't really fit the vibe though, to me it sounds like those hats would be in a more upbeat dance tune if you see where I'm gettin at! but anyways nice :P

@dubmikey - I think you need to spend some more times on your drums, get a groove in there... Other than that try changing it up a lil bit :P

@Voodeedoo - I liked it, maybe just mix it up a bit with the drums and ish! lets see this thing a lil longer, interested to see how it comes out!

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