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HangManDubstep
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Post by HangManDubstep » Sun Jul 12, 2009 12:50 pm

hey guys my new track thats finished could do with feedback and im throwing 320s out cos noone will release..lol
samples from the WU TANG CLAN.....checkit out link is below
SAFE
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Post by hotgrott » Sun Jul 12, 2009 10:04 pm

Eops wrote:Bit of feedback - I left some comments on the soundcloud users

@hotgrot Sounds like a sort of wonky dubstep thing - which is kinda interesting it needs more of a lead line tho as everything is kind of on the bassline and its not able to move around enough to really hook you in. Nice to hear a happy sounding DS tune
Cheers bud, will definitely bear that in mind on my next venture!
Loving that post office track by the way.. nice eerie reverb on the synth, reminds me of "beware the friendly stranger" by Boards of Canada :)
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Post by major zero » Mon Jul 13, 2009 12:43 am

X-Fyah wrote:hey guys my new track thats finished could do with feedback and im throwing 320s out cos noone will release..lol
samples from the WU TANG CLAN.....checkit out link is below
SAFE
Some nice ideas but I think there is a bit to much going on here at once at times? There are quite a lot of sounds here, trying stripping them back and introducing them gradually as the tune progresses rather than throwing them all out at once, because there's not a huge amount of variation going on as the song goes on.

Also, reckon the drums could do with a bit more phattening, maybe try layering a couple of kicks together and some compression?
Eops wrote:At last the humble post office worker gets his tune ...

http://soundcloud.com/eops/the-post-office-1-3-320
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Dedicated the Posties around the world ... indeed to anyone who has ended up trapped in a job the don't like with people they wish they had never met, petty, cruel people who wouldn't know art if it bit them.

The sample is from Bukowski and I hope some of the darkness of his book the Post Office comes through.

Only a demo so feedback would be great although I do realise its not going to be everyone's cup of tea but - you know ... I like it moody.

Ill pick out some tunes and get yall some feedback in kind :D
Very dark vibes, I like. Wouldn't play this out myself in the club but very good to listen to. The drop at 2.02 could do with some work, the mid range wobbles sounds fine but there's nowhere near enough sub bass in the mix! Or maybe they're not coming through on soundcloud.


Anybody that fancies giving me feedback on my new tune, that would be most appreciated!

http://soundcloud.com/major-zero/ringfinger

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Post by HangManDubstep » Mon Jul 13, 2009 9:09 am

thnx man for the feedback...i shall look at that and give it a go...safe
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Post by rubixdub » Mon Jul 13, 2009 3:48 pm

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tune - "heaton massive"
any feedback would be spot on
Last edited by rubixdub on Wed Jul 15, 2009 9:17 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by thierry_le_dj » Tue Jul 14, 2009 11:51 am

[quote="Eops"]Bit of feedback - I left some comments on the soundcloud users

@Thierry_Le_Dj Strange mix of sounds on this one - I thought it had a wierd 80s feel in terms of the drums and synth sounds (the snare is like cameo on word up - ie massive) - maybe you should get into that more electro sound of Joker and such like? Interesting but a bit more detailed production work is needed to make it really snappy.


thanks for the feed back!
will work on the track...
was my 1st attemp to this style,
hopefully will sound alot better soon.

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Re: Beep lush/dark vocal garage tune

Post by HangManDubstep » Tue Jul 14, 2009 8:45 pm

[quote="sparse"]Its the first garage style beat i have made in a long time, influenced by burials production. The track is called "here with me" and is up on the myspace. if any1 is into this syle and wants to give feedback, i'll be more than happy to listen to there tracks in return.

I feel this tune..very burial like and almost a sort of chase and status underline bass(this is a complement cos i like em)...only critiscm is the bass should be louder..other than that i can see this gettin a release...
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Post by nick fury » Tue Jul 14, 2009 9:15 pm

Peep out the 1st track in the myspace player called "Beautiful". Good or bad feedback will be well deserved.. :D
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Post by freq juggler » Tue Jul 14, 2009 10:44 pm

New tune up! Feedback would be appreciated.
And to all you dj's if you like it, play it as much as you like. Lett me know if you do.

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Enjoy! :wink:
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Post by jg beats » Wed Jul 15, 2009 6:23 pm

I had a 9 minute Dubstep mix up on Soundcloud

Along with a newer track I call Make a Sound (Club Dub).

Many beats I have sample artists like Dr. Dre, MIA, Radiohead, and some others.

Definately packed with variety in wobble and all the good stuff.

Check me out and give feed up on soundcloud

Thanks

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Post by melodik » Wed Jul 15, 2009 7:33 pm

new ting up, "the others"..... any crit and feedback would be bless!!!


http://soundcloud.com/melodik/the-others-1

onetime in advance!!!!

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Post by HangManDubstep » Wed Jul 15, 2009 7:48 pm

Freq Juggler wrote:New tune up! Feedback would be appreciated.
And to all you dj's if you like it, play it as much as you like. Lett me know if you do.

Freq Juggler - Freq Jugglin

Enjoy! :wink:
hey mate i did enjoy the track..i love the wobble arpegi8....tbh i think u could have a better wobble sound...but the track is really gd...really interesting...
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Post by horsie » Wed Jul 15, 2009 8:29 pm

hope this time i posted correctly

anywaes ive been working for a while on these tunes and i need some feedback ... or some sugestions ... would really appreciate it .. peace out and thanks a lot

http://soundcloud.com/ionpop77

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Post by freq juggler » Wed Jul 15, 2009 9:22 pm

X-Fyah wrote:
Freq Juggler wrote:New tune up! Feedback would be appreciated.
And to all you dj's if you like it, play it as much as you like. Lett me know if you do.

Freq Juggler - Freq Jugglin

Enjoy! :wink:
hey mate i did enjoy the track..i love the wobble arpegi8....tbh i think u could have a better wobble sound...but the track is really gd...really interesting...
safe

Thanx bro!
It´s all edited by hand though, no arpegiator there :wink:
I appreciate the onesty and feedback, might look into the wobble sound (even though it´s a personal opinion, i like it)

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Post by JimmaJamJamie » Thu Jul 16, 2009 1:20 pm

Freq Juggler wrote:New tune up! Feedback would be appreciated.
And to all you dj's if you like it, play it as much as you like. Lett me know if you do.

Freq Juggler - Freq Jugglin

Enjoy! :wink:
Song sounded good, i felt like the snares could do with a little reverb maybe and the song could be abit more bassy.



If anyone could check my song and give me some feedback, good or bad it will be much appreciated.

http://soundcloud.com/etikut/the-arrival-3

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