FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by reignstep » Tue May 11, 2010 5:14 pm

donpablo wrote:Soundcloud
Needs a proper mixdown m8, when your drop kicks in it kinda soaks everything else. Track seems nice apart from that.

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Feedback would be welcome, especially on the mixdown :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by donpablo » Tue May 11, 2010 5:20 pm

thanks for reply reignz! anyone esle think the mixdown is bad lol ?

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Psythe » Tue May 11, 2010 5:29 pm

Whats a guy gotta do to get some feedback around here tell me what you think thanks. :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by continuumdnb » Tue May 11, 2010 5:59 pm

Psythe wrote:Whats a guy gotta do to get some feedback around here tell me what you think thanks. :)
Reading the OP and giving other people feedback would be a good start, but because nobody bothers to read the OP even that probably won't help you.
goodeh wrote: is that good? cause it was accidental, i just copied the drum midi clip and pasted it into the bass channel....
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Psythe » Tue May 11, 2010 6:02 pm

continuumdnb wrote:
Psythe wrote:Whats a guy gotta do to get some feedback around here tell me what you think thanks. :)
Reading the OP and giving other people feedback would be a good start, but because nobody bothers to read the OP even that probably won't help you.
Well I have if you read the earlier posts

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by donpablo » Tue May 11, 2010 6:08 pm

not bad tune mate,but i think the wobble bass is dynamicly needs to fit better in the mix,also i would take off that reverb from the snare,layer it with something to get ir sound more interesting,or just boost a lower end to make it hit harder,and yea that reverb weakens it imho,i would take if off,ir use another reverb settings,smaller decay f.e

p.s hope you understood what i mean,my english skills arent very good,sometimes i want to say more,but i just cant find the right words :D

p.p.s this is just my thoughts,my opinion :) cheers

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by LordBid » Tue May 11, 2010 6:32 pm

Hey I finished it tell em what you think I am extremely pleased with this song and proud of myself for actually finishing something!

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Could somebody plz explain why soundcloud is only putting 28 seconds of my track on here?

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by wobbinhood » Tue May 11, 2010 7:52 pm

heres another
i still suck at this haha

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by prime|evil » Tue May 11, 2010 11:08 pm

Finally getting my style down and my production a little tighter. Obviously there is always rooms for improvment and I do value your guys (and gals of course!) opinions. So as per, feedback is appreciated!! Ta!!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by +3 » Wed May 12, 2010 3:35 am

Sig : )

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Isturite » Wed May 12, 2010 4:33 am

Just finished this one, mixing could use some work... Something needs to be added but I'm not sure what. Feedback would really appreciated.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by karmacazee » Wed May 12, 2010 2:20 pm

+3 wrote:Sig : )

Really nicely done mate :D:
Isturite wrote:Just finished this one, mixing could use some work... Something needs to be added but I'm not sure what. Feedback would really appreciated.
Yeah, mixdown's a bit all over the shop some of the snare hits are way louder than the rest,. I think, if you were going to do anything to it, add another hihat or high end rhythm to it - it feels a tad clunky to me :) Keep at it man!



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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by +3 » Wed May 12, 2010 3:54 pm

karmacazee wrote:
+3 wrote:Sig : )
Really nicely done mate :D:
Thanks : )

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Akoma » Wed May 12, 2010 5:22 pm

@ donpablo - Chinatown2 : I really like the lead sound in this the oriental feel is there but i´m not sure you maxed it out enough a few extra bits of oriental percussion would make this more suitable to it´s name. I also agree with reignz in that the drop is overpowering every other sound, it´s insanely noticeable especially when you are expecting it lol.

Great work though, you deffo have a track there :)

@reignz - Badman Sound : Heavy beat, really feeling this one, bassline is duuurrrrrttyy could do with a sub over it though to add a little something extra to it. Apart from that can´t really knock it great work!!!

@psythe - Predators : Hmmmm you really need to work on your sound´s dude, you have the essentails in place but your sound´s let you down. Everything seems flat and lacking punch. Also the wobble goes off at certain points which bugged me a little.

Keep at it man, not sure if you have monitors, if not get some :wink:

@LordBid - Alone : Nice & Mellow really chilled out vibe with this I like it. Would like something else in there i´m just not sure what. Can´t knock it though I enjoyed what I heard :lol:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by a.paul » Wed May 12, 2010 6:34 pm

@Akoma really liking the darkness in Rainman, reminds me of dmz kind of. would love for it to get a release. would buy it!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Akoma » Wed May 12, 2010 6:39 pm

a.paul wrote:@Akoma really liking the darkness in Rainman, reminds me of dmz kind of. would love for it to get a release. would buy it!
Cheers dude, thats quite the statement :D

I wouldn´t even know how to go about it, I´ve just been making tracks and sticking them on Soundcloud. Any ideas?

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by a.paul » Wed May 12, 2010 6:46 pm

@Akoma I have no idea either haha. I've been doing soundcloud too, but mine aren't that good. only been producing for a few months. I think you could get a release though, just listened to the track again, absolute fire. love the vocal sample too

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by damnyoumongolians » Wed May 12, 2010 6:51 pm

No love for any of mine on the previous page? Will gladly return the favour with comments!

Cheers!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by LordBid » Wed May 12, 2010 6:53 pm

[quote="Akoma"]Keep at it man, not sure if you have monitors, if not get some :wink:

@LordBid - Alone : Nice & Mellow really chilled out vibe with this I like it. Would like something else in there i´m just not sure what. Can´t knock it though I enjoyed what I heard :lol: [/quote="Akoma"]

hey thanks dude I know what u mean i too have a feeling like I don't know whats missing from that one...

do you want feedback on either of your two tracks in your sig?

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