FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

[Njamimars]

@Semihedonist - Love the vibe man, relaxing atmosphere u got going in that song!
@kidstrange - Try improving your drops is all I can say.
@johnny6 - Lots of distortion, but it still sounds good, keep 'm coming

Here's some of my.
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[nylle]

@Njamimars: intro is nice and trippy, drop is heavy as hell, and that sub is even heavier. few parts of the song seem like the volume just escalates for no reason, could be compression. i love this kind of dubstep tho. nice sine waves man.

@johnny6: really liking the sci-fi intro and the vocals. the yuhyuh synth seems a little overdone. likin the ideas keep at it

@ninthy4: this is some ridiculous neuro man. nice vocal samples as well. id totally play this in my car and probably get another speeding ticket but i just noticed it doesnt really have a sub ): would make the track a little bigger i think if you had a sub. fucking sick production tho nice 1 (:


i think this one is kinda done
on a garage binge

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[ElSonido]

@nylle

Love the vibe. The tamborine could sparkle a little more though. It feels like it's being played under a blanket. Love the sub and the overall presence the track has in my room though. Fantastic.

@johnny6

I like that syncopated string sound that's going on in the intro. The kick could punch harder over the 'yoy' synth. Good use of samples and vinyl sound. I'd layer a less distorted instance of the 'yoy' over for a bit of depth. But good stuff. Well composed and sounds good.

@Njamimars

Rhythm pulses, kick punches, upper end drums sparkle. I love it. I love the little bleepy synth stabs as well. You've got talent man. In terms of constructive feedback, the mid range wobble in the second half is a bit too loud in the mix and is ducking the rest of the elements out. That sine wobble needs to be king of the track. I'd love to drop this in a mix though.




As for mine, polished up version number one.


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[nylle]

gonna try fixing that tamb youre right

[kidstrange]

@kidstrange - Try improving your drops is all I can say.

as in how?...

[nylle]

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If we don't stick up for each other as dubstep producers assisting dubstep producers, who will? :/

well that's one sick tune you got there! i cant find any faults in it for what it is. that synth melody and that intro were delicious. heavy track! make moar!

[nylle]

@kidstrange - Try improving your drops is all I can say.

as in how?...

let the track breath for a second before you drop it
as in try to structure the drops so that there's a bit of delay between the last instrument and the next loop

i think thats what i would do to improve them

here's an article on using silence in music if anyo f you are interested http://www.allaboutjazz.com/php/article.php?id=16481

[Semihedonist]

@ElSonido - Fish-Fingers - it's a crazy good track But IMO you should work with a pre-mastering... there's no enough separation for sounds. But feeling is good!

@Njamimars - Bus Bas - nice sound ideas here and this track got nice manner! good hihitas-shaker work....basss is raw but it creates this track atmosphere.

@nylle - decisions - another nice track mate! this one also got unique soul, nice rolling with the rims! minimalistic piano and tamburine!

nylle - i got a question, what do you use to create subs? and what's your trick to make them sound so good?

[MyndControl]

@semihedonist loving the dark atmosphere youve got going on with this track, almost like a glitch/tribal beat, keep it up!

@nylle loving the beat and that sin that kicks in, really flows nice together

@siberun some nice sounds you got in there man, loving the almost metalic wobs youre using!

just finished this track, had alot of fun making it, the drop around 2:00 is pretty tight :p
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[djwom]

First of all, nice1 4 piping up Debaser1 about the amount of lazy asses that don't feel they have 2 feedback first... We're all the same here! I made a point at the start of this month of giving a shite load of feedback, I gave feedback to 16 ppl! Do you know how many I got in return... 3!!! It's like if its not on the page at the end of the list, it doesn't get a look in! If you've spent so much time writing a track, is it really that hard 2 spend an extra 15-20mins listening 2 others and giving more than a sentance feedback first??
Rant over, I hope ppl take some of that in... :-/

@Debaser1 - Great track, really reminds me of stenchman 4 sum reason... Nice melodys, vocal cuts, and top work on the drums, its good to see more than 1 snare in a bar! keep up the good work!

@nylle - Beautiful keys in the intro... Cannot fault this track at all, spot on! Real feeling behind this, which is what I dig... Soulful music! Downloaded and will b drop in a chilled set soon mate! keep it up

@siberum - Change of name?? No change to the high quality filth tho! Loving that melody in there 2, really adds a creepyness to an already dark track!

@NorCoDubstep - Think some1 else said it, not really my cup o' tea, couldn't listen 2 it again, but not bad production, only tips i'd give would be loose the cheesy alien Theramin synth, or if you don't make a bit more space in there for your snare.

@Biggls - Lovely track mate, real good vibes, only thing i'd do, personal pref tho, would be to add a bit of verb to your snare, there's loads of room in there for it, plus it'd go really well with the vibes of the track! Downloaded, and like nylle, will b drop in a chilled set soon!

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[dj seizure]

@Wom - Straight perfect. Honestly, great build and drops just right. No over use on the high pitch bass and good amount of low end. The hats coming in add pace. Generally well done!

@Myndcontrol - I can tell you're probably a new one to production. What tempo is it? I swear it's like 120 or even slower!? The bass needs a HUGE amount of work. Learn to make a sub bass, it always adds oomph with every drop!

@Nylle - Beautiful. Just needs a bit more low end that really hits through. Altogether a good track though man. Nice future garage vibe going on.

And mine.

I've uploaded 3 new tunes, but here's one for the lols.


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[ninthy4]

Please let me know what you guys think I've given feedback to others but only one in return
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[PROG3CT-MAYH3M]

@ninthy4 : wow! excellent tune m8, very Noisia, Spor ish. Beats are crisp and hard as nails and i love the bass and everything else really. Only thing i would maybe do is vary the lfo on the bass a little more and bend it about a tiny bit more. Top, top, track tho

right heres a remix i did for a m8 of mine

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[Debaser1]

First of all, nice1 4 piping up Debaser1 about the amount of lazy asses that don't feel they have 2 feedback first... We're all the same here! I made a point at the start of this month of giving a shite load of feedback, I gave feedback to 16 ppl! Do you know how many I got in return... 3!!! It's like if its not on the page at the end of the list, it doesn't get a look in! If you've spent so much time writing a track, is it really that hard 2 spend an extra 15-20mins listening 2 others and giving more than a sentance feedback first??
Rant over, I hope ppl take some of that in... :-/

@Debaser1 - Great track, really reminds me of stenchman 4 sum reason... Nice melodys, vocal cuts, and top work on the drums, its good to see more than 1 snare in a bar! keep up the good work!

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You couldn't have paid me a higher compliment that saying it reminded you of the Stench. Much appreciated, and yeah we need to get this community of it's arse again.

Anyhow, as for YOUR track Wom: Voice sample sets this up perfectly. Claps are mixed very well with the stereo delay. Bass isn't too in your face! There's a time and a place for bass in your face (yes, I would be a SICK emcee ). That sequencer thing with the melody carries the rhythm very nicely too. Your atmosphere's are the most impressive thing here though. The vox, the sweeps, verbs, delays, filters. Very impressive. Sounds pro to me. Most of all - a perfectly mixed sub.

[MyndControl]

@dj seizure thanks for the review! yeah that sub bass gave me some trouble, ive been producing for 4 months now, its at 120, i liked the flow i got dropping the tempo a bit on this one (:

and Im loving the sub bass youve got going on in your track, really got it pumpin

[kidstrange]

@kidstrange - Try improving your drops is all I can say.

as in how?...

let the track breath for a second before you drop it
as in try to structure the drops so that there's a bit of delay between the last instrument and the next loop

i think thats what i would do to improve them

here's an article on using silence in music if anyo f you are interested http://www.allaboutjazz.com/php/article.php?id=16481

I do get what your saying ..i have to say i did have a slight feeling everything was being rushed..that and i was stoked to get this track done both that and tired of working on it. also real nice article on silence. It made me think..and its so true.. thanks for the help!

[ElSonido]

@ Mynd control

The start seems louder than the rest of the track? That hat is also skewing the whole mix over to the right.

But it's nice and thick. I like the synths over the top, gives it a good vibe. It all fits pretty well together. As for the drop at 2, I'd say fade that distorted lead out a bit because the volume isn't dynamic enough to make it really pop. Then it'll be huge.

@dj wom

I love trance/house chord stabs, so that wins me over. Great sample usage, great drop. Nice low sound. Good stereo image. Fantastic drums. Clever usage of silence. It's a nice dynamic track. Really well produced.

@dj seizure

My ears just exploded with sub. Very nice. The kicks sounds a little acoustic though. Just doesn't seem to have that electro punch. Nice musicality and overall sound though.

@ninthy

Nice trancey intro. Really nicely done on the drop. I'm liking the break/dnb style drums too. It's intense. Real high energy track. The mix sounds great.



Next slightly more polished piece. Got the snares to come through a bit more and snap better.

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[nylle]

hi, reposting this because i fixed some major flaws in it and added a bit more to the track. i think it's near perfect, but i'd like one final listen by a few critical people if that's alright.

i already gave feedback to more than 3 people but ill continue giving more back to individual tracks as i lurk/surf the forums.

here it is:

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[Frenk_Dublin]

Hi guys, first post on this forum! My name is Frenk Dublin, Dutch Dubstep producer/DJ.

@Elsonido: Nice intro, good percussion. Nice drop! Maybe your tracks needs some more variation.

@Nylle: I expected the drop to be louder, but its a nice chilling vibe in your track. Also on this track there could be more variation in it! use some more sounds!

This is my last track, some nasty shit if you ask me.. hope you like it! Please follow me and leave a comment!
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[vdbproductions]

Hello everyone, got a new remix
up, was wondering what you guys think
of this one, i tried to keep it classy, and not to filthy,
i hope it worked out!
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grtz The Devil's Advocate