WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011

nnny · Post by **nnny** » Fri Feb 04, 2011 11:28 pm

@Astral Love the drums in this, and their patterns. Nice. Bass is lovely, awesome tune!

@COKNI Great vibes from this mate! Love it. Sounds well chill. <3

@Fbac Liking both them tracks man. Something dfferent. I did like housestep one better, but both are good!

My latest two:
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antipode · Post by **antipode** » Fri Feb 04, 2011 11:32 pm

cheers guys

nibzdub · Post by **nibzdub** » Fri Feb 04, 2011 11:34 pm

hey guys, took the feedback I received, and edited things here and there. so here is the version I am most happy with!! hope you guys enjoy!!

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Alt Fire · Post by **Alt Fire** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:48 am

@NNY (Horizon 1) - Nice dark track, the bass could trail off a bit rather than end abruptly

@Nibzdub - Didn't hear 1st version, but this is nice

@Prince - That sound is sick

This is my second attempt at song creation. Working on aspects, trying things out. All opinions and critizisms are appreicated.

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tek_selecta · Post by **tek_selecta** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 7:31 am

@ alt fire nice sounds trippy shit reminds me of some wonky i would say the drums could bang a little more

@ nny nice soundscapes drums seem a little lost in the mix might i suggest sidechain to those huge pads

some garage

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Debaser1 · Post by **Debaser1** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:41 am

@tekselecta: Intro is absolutely sick! I seriously love this man. Beat is drop dead awesome. Vocal sample does it for me too. Maybe a tad more bass could come through in the mix, i think anyway. But you sound like you really know what youre doing with this one aha. Great to hear some proper garage.

Bloodandmud · Post by **Bloodandmud** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:12 pm

@nibzdub
really like how this track started out, bassline sounds great, but as it goes on it feels like there's something, missing, perhaps a high/mid melody of some kind?

@alt fire
really like this, some nice sounds and synths in there, I feel the it gets a bit repetitive at the start though, perhaps modulate your lfo's a bit?

@tek_selecta
im not really a garage listener so cant think of much useful criticism, but I really liked the ambiance in this track, very spacey and smooth.

anyway this is my first post on the forum which is probably a bit risky but I've been reading this forum for a loooooong time and only just decided to actually post a track

its very much a work in progress, the basslines and end definitely need some work.
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oprs · Post by **oprs** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:22 pm

tek selecta- vibe is so on point man. would love to have a 320 of this.

bloodandmud- its really cloudy when everything comes together, i like the beat alot. but i would like to hear it all completed.

alt fire- i like the idea but, it needs work, the random movie samples seem a little out of place too.

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stepped out of my box again tryin some different shit

nibzdub · Post by **nibzdub** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:29 pm

@bloodandmud, yeah I feel you totally. I was think the exact same thing after listening through headphones. gonna sort some sort of melody out when I get home and hit the forum again lol. thanks for the feedback!!

RatRaceProducing · Post by **RatRaceProducing** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:41 pm

Astral/ love the intro sounding nice a big. Nice crisp production here. nice pace and rythm. Bit different this as well. Like the vocal bit in the "break". Only quibble is maybe your bass synth need a bit more mid/high or something? just feels a like it needs to be a bit wetter and bigger you get me? real nice stuff though mate keep it up!

Bloodandmud · Post by **Bloodandmud** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:47 pm

@oprs - yeah i get you, will get working on that, cheers. I am loving this track though, looking forward to hearing more of it.

@nibzdub - no problem looking forward to hearing it !

oprs · Post by **oprs** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:45 pm

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progressed along pretty well and gave a teaser of whats to come lol

Cyberex · Post by **Cyberex** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 2:10 pm

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Free tune !! Voices final !!

oprs · Post by **oprs** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 4:02 pm

cyberex. ussually dont dig the whole ya yoi yee but u used it pretty well in that

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still not done tinkering but might as well be

Asterix · Post by **Asterix** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:05 pm

nibzdubz -- damn that is sick loving that wet wobble great

oprs- That glitchstep stuff is awsome its not used too much and the voice sample are nice but i would put more a tad bit more enfasis on the drums i like the style bro

Cyberex- i see that you like modertalking haha..the intro is nice and heavy maybe have the breakdown in the middle a little longer it came fast a finished
fast but im liking the basslines man good job

Here is something i have been playing with tell me wat you think and to be honest i think the 2nd drop is heavy

pls comments and followers on soundcloud thx

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Debaser1 · Post by **Debaser1** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:39 pm

Asterix: Sick sample at the start man! Plenty of tension in this. Kick seems to lack power though, unless that's what you're going for? Ahh when it dropped it all makes sense! Snare could have more low end power mind. Basses are cool. Maybe bass 1 is a bit loud? Sub is fucking DEEP too. Good work!

Oprs: Intriguing start. Buzzy sub in cool. And those drum textures are nice. This is very original, I love it. Very electronicy, but your drums are nice and organic. They just need to be a touch louder.

Nibzdub: Production is spot on here man. Love it, just think that really your intro could build this so much more effectively! Seriously that drop would be ten times better with a lovely atmospheric intro. I absolutely love this tune though. reminds me of this Switchdubs tune that I cant remember the name of aha. Top work though

I know I'm back again so soon, but I've had a crack at a DnB tune for the first time ever:
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So bear with it, and also forgive the long silence at the end, I exported it like a fucktard.

Cheers for feedback in advance people!

oprs · Post by **oprs** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:09 pm

debaser man, thats sick. for a first time attempt its mad nice. ive been trying to branch out into some dnb but i just cant get it to sound right

Fbac · Post by **Fbac** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:43 pm

Thanks all for your time n fb il be back later to listen to your tracks ^^ and the others that have cropped up.

@oprs: whats not sounding right? try doin one at 140 and make it sound like its at 175 perhaps?

oprs · Post by **oprs** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:48 pm

i just need to practice with it, im so anal about my drums. ill get it eventually.

arisemprex · Post by **arisemprex** » Sun Feb 06, 2011 12:37 am

@bloodandmud - i love your kick drum, like seriously. GIMMIE haha. the end has an awesome grove, maybe adding a little more hi hats would give it a bouncier feel, over all great track

@Asterix - the track sounds good, i like the feel it gives off.

@@RatRaceProducing - i was lost in the track, good job. i would like to hear your snare a little more more though.

Heres my latest, not really going for much, just whatever came…came

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