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[Ascian]

My newest WIP - Earlyish stages - All feedback welcome! edit: Oh and ignore the little part at 1min 23 - That will be changed!

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ctang - Love the vibe of this one, great drums and I love the compressed sound to them - Breakdown is lovely.. Very summery.. Is gagging for a vocal definitely though! Yes.. Love this, great drop! Needs more sub bass on the stabs though for sure. Could also with just being more 3d in general, a bit more stereo spread too. Great work though!! Get a vocal on that and it'll be big.
Second tune you posted: I like this one too! Are you using breaks or programming your own drums? Very impressed if it's programmed! Similar feedback to your first tune, I really like it - Needs beefing up though!

Darj - Haha, like this! Very Ruskoesque, kinda playful and comical - Great cowbell!! haha. This will definitely benefit from a bit more variety imo.. In the percussion and bass sound

Voodeedoo - Mental! Love the granular bass at 24 seconds.. I mean, as a whole it's not usually the kind of thing I'm into but I respect the work you have done on the drums and the intricacy behind it - Great work!

RandoRando - Crazy vibes on this one, I really like it! First section after drop - Insane, couldn't really fault it tbh! Maybe change up the percussion a little bit more..? After the change at 25 seconds I'm not sure that bass is too 'pleasing', maybe try layering a dry version underneath?

Narrator - Love the drum break right before the drop, gives it a good sense of anticipation and the drop after doesn't disappoint at all! Great sounds, well put together, sounds very 'glued'.

raxcal - Hah! Love this! Where did you get that vocal from? What comes after the drop fits the intro perfectly, great musicality if you can call it that haha! Can imagine this tune being big on the blogs. I think the wobbles need a bit more 'grit' and depth to them, maybe duplicate and pitch down an octave or make a different sound to sit beneath it?

[E-Mission]

Ascian - really digging the mood on this track. believe or not music is all about mood and emotion. title for the track also fits it very well. All i would say is to change up the drumming after a bar into the drop or so because it can make it more interesting that it already is. big up tho, really feeling it.


andobey - firepower is nice. the build does work but you might want to tweak that....maybe add some kicks on the build to complement the rise. and when drops it definitely seems like it needs more of a 'punch'.


Budspencertron - sartdani I am definitely feeling. like how the vocal seems to fit well. seems like it could use some double time on the drumming. might give it a more hype jumping feel.


Filthtroniks - 3rd D'Gree - Battle 4 Respect is plain great! Looking really forward to hearing the mastered copy. bass tones are PRIME. nice one.


Hi all,

Here is a summer vibe tune I have been working on. Feedback apprecaited! If ya get a chance check out some of the other tracks up on my soundcloud. Big up the listeners!

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[ctang]

@ Ascian I Really like how this makes me feel lol, i eman i dont really listen tot his stuff alot but i may start to like it alot. oh and ya all my drums are original

[Aufnahmewindwuschel]

@raxcal what the fuck i love this style for real haha stepping on nerves big up

@ascian love the few drums which are set at the right spots oh and the stab that comes in with the filter

@e mission love the groove of the track real dub maybe a little bit less crush on the melody

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[hudson]

I started a couple things today, the first is a little ambient interlude-type thing, and the second is a remix. Soundcloud isn't working for me right now so they're on divshare, but you don't have to download anything to hear it, just hit play in the little preview box. Thanks

Whisper


Sky High

[narrator]

Hey guys, thanks alot for the great feedback, it's really helpful to hear what other experienced ears pick up at first impressions.

[Ascian]

Thanks everyone for the feedback

E-mission, yeah changing the drums up is a good shout!

BudSpencertron - That midbass at 38secs is ridiculous.. So original. How did you make it sound so vocal? Mainly synth noise or processing?

[Aufnahmewindwuschel]

@ascian mainly what i did was finding a mean lion sample or someting like that putting it in a sampler layering it like 5 times but everytime with a different start and then putting a subsound sample under it after that i started filtering the shit out of it haha

[Ascian]

Well great job man I like it

Just wanted some quick feedback on this.. Need to know which vocal is best or whether it should just be an original with no vocal:

Vocal 1
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Vocal 2 - for some reason it won't embedbut if you click the link it'll open in browser
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hudson - Whisper is amazing, very relaxing and I love the soundscaping work.. The vocal fits perfectly.. Nothing to fault really!

Sky High - Great piano, vocals are panned and integrated extremely well, production is top notch.. The only thing I don't like about this tune is the hats.. It sounds like it has a weird groove on that makes it a bit too messy for me. In the chorus I think it'd sound great with a thick reverb with a decent decay and a massive predelay paralleled on the kick but then again, may sound crap haha

E-mission - Love the synths at the start and the deep 808.. The ride is nice although could maybe benefit from a little reverb/stereo widening delay.. Nice builder.. Hah! Sick.. Am liking this, can imagine playing it at a BBQ with a few beers - good job!

[BevOh]

Thanks for the feedback guys il have to start working on this again :O haha
I just realised it's not a good idea to post at the end of a page because you get limited feedback as opposed to if you wait for a spot at the top of the next so you dont get overlooked. But ta for the feedback anyway

[BevOh]

raxcal - Hah! Love this! Where did you get that vocal from? What comes after the drop fits the intro perfectly, great musicality if you can call it that haha! Can imagine this tune being big on the blogs. I think the wobbles need a bit more 'grit' and depth to them, maybe duplicate and pitch down an octave or make a different sound to sit beneath it?

Vocal is just from a vengeance pack. Yeh i know i needa give it more depth but it was just a quick thing so il have a look at that when i get home.

[RandoRando]

@ DMisreal that synth in the beginning basiccaly kind of killed me (not it a good way) lol. the drums are nice though, i like the wobble though, has some nice groovyness, pretty decent though for a first time though man. work on mixing a bit better, like that shaker on the left is a little to loud, but PLEASE take out that annoying saw lead lol. good job though man

@ [and]obey

lol i was like this is some chill regeaa inspired dub, then i was like holy shit why is it builiding up? this is chill dub?
then those wobbles basically raped my face lol, add that sub bass man! mix sounds good, nice and fat kick, maybe try some more processing on the wobbles to give them more definition in the lower frequencies. good shit though man

@ budspencertron some seriously nice sounds you got going! nice a futuristic, those drums just arent powerful enough though to go with those sounds though, i think you need a crispier kick and poppyier snare. keep the gun sample but try out a different snare with a little bit of reverb, btw what vst did you use? FM8?

@ bevoh you already got my input, lol maybe just shorten that intro to 4 bars instead of 8, or is it 8 isntead of 16? idk lol u know what i mean

@ Ascian seriously sick shit!!!! but after the drop i got kind of dissapointed, i can bearly hear em man (the wobbles), is that first sound in the drop from a kontakt sample pack? sounds familiar, but the whole intro was PERFECT imo, i love that arrangement (eeire dark vibes, then the snappy drums, then the random vocal sample) dont know what it is but i love that kind of buildup haha

@e-mission man this is mellow and relaxing, i love this relaxing kind of music with deep sub bass, great work on the subs! all i can really say is maybe add some break in the drums with fills, or add more elements around 2:30 to keep it intereting, good shit though dude

Here is my first collab with Raxkal (Bevoh ^^^)
were having a little trouble about HOW to collab exactly, our internets are too slow to send 100mb stem files :/
oh and btw bevoh is the name "circus trip" cool? lol cause you said that sample was like a circus
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[MrAural]

@BudSpencertron Nice. I'm really liking the drums

@Ascian Really nice tracks. Could be the start of something sweet.

@E-Mission I really like what you've done with the track, it's weird. But I like it!

Here is my track. If I can make it sound really good. I will sell it on bandcamp or something..

My producer name is "Rudeboyproductions" and the track is called "Flutestep" (Name is in the works)..

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[hudson]

Thanks for the love Ascian I'll try out some of your suggestions tomorrow.

[Ascian]

Rando Rando - cheers for the feedback man, glad you enjoyed! Yeah definitely need to beef up that drop a bit! Which tune was it for? "Enemy"? If so, could you please have a listen to the two other WIP's I have a couple posts up, can't decide which vocal is better

Your tune is absolutely insane - Intro: Fun, playful, intruiging, well balanced.. First synth that comes in, psy trancey, crazy, tuneful, melodic, perfectly ingegrated.. Love it

Drop is insane, fits the tune perfectly and I don't think I could actually fault it. Well, at least not the synth work.. After a while that ride cymbal became a bit of a drag.. It definitely adds to the loopyness of the track but maybe change up little

edit: The tune in your sig is insane too!

MrAural - Cheers mate, appreciate it

[RandoRando]

Rando Rando - After a while that ride cymbal became a bit of a drag.. It definitely adds to the loopyness of the track but maybe change up little

edit: The tune in your sig is insane too!

MrAural - Cheers mate, appreciate it

thanks man for FF, but yeah, i knid of just half assed those High hats, cause i was sending the file back to bevoh and i wanted it to have more structure in the drop, but yeah i know the ride is repetitive but yeah ill definately follow you on SC and leave comments on your tracks on there!

[Skratch]

Hey guys, i just got reason (i have experience with it in the past, though) and ended up making a Cookie Monsta-esque sound. The melody is from his track "R0807 D06"

Tell me what you think!
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[BevOh]

There is a WIP sticky!

[Skratch]

There is a WIP sticky!

Well.... This is sorta a WIP, but more just like "hey, look what i did" thread

[lyons238]

sounds good