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Post by lowpass » Sun Oct 04, 2009 6:25 pm

Sub Warrior wrote:
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Njamimars wrote:My second DS, I think it's the better music I made so far.

It's messy I know but I always make things first then making a long nice intro and somethings between them.

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this tune is bad !!

feelin the digi bit at the start , an the bass is nice aswell
Indeed, keep working on this one.
I'm another fan for the intro, sounds really smart, just needs tidying up and you're set

http://www.zshare.net/audio/66488508724fb34e/

Here's my 2nd tune I'm trying to write in logic, would like to know if anybody see's this going anywhere,

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Post by soupdogg » Sun Oct 04, 2009 7:07 pm

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Darker ting with some arpegiation, what do you think?
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Post by tripwire22 » Sun Oct 04, 2009 8:08 pm

soupdogg wrote:Soundcloud

Darker ting with some arpegiation, what do you think?
i like it nice and heavy but i think it needs something extra
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Post by hurlingdervish » Sun Oct 04, 2009 8:10 pm

http://www.box.net/shared/395xr5gea7

yep... some parts are off time i know...gotta do that
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Post by saint7 » Sun Oct 04, 2009 9:17 pm

https://download.yousendit.com/Y1RyTGs5R0Y1aWJ2Wmc9PQ
Here is a track that I'm just not sure about. I like it elements in it but i dont know if i like the sounds ive used. Ive tryed using a diff synth for the main riff but it just doesnt sound right. let me know what you think.
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Post by dignan » Sun Oct 04, 2009 9:20 pm

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some feedback would be cool for this tune, I'll hook whoever does with some feedback as well.
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Post by hurlingdervish » Sun Oct 04, 2009 9:23 pm

dignan wrote:Soundcloud

some feedback would be cool for this tune, I'll hook whoever does with some feedback as well.
i dunno what to say about it except that its sick...good work
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Post by dignan » Sun Oct 04, 2009 9:30 pm

hurlingdervish wrote:http://www.box.net/shared/395xr5gea7

yep... some parts are off time i know...gotta do that
I really liked this track man, it was really original IMO. drums sounded nice, and I liked the amount of variation you put into it, I didn't lose interest once, big up!
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Post by hurlingdervish » Sun Oct 04, 2009 9:32 pm

dignan wrote:
hurlingdervish wrote:http://www.box.net/shared/395xr5gea7

yep... some parts are off time i know...gotta do that
I really liked this track man, it was really original IMO. drums sounded nice, and I liked the amount of variation you put into it, I didn't lose interest once, big up!
thanks man, i appreciate that...this song has been giving me a headache tryin to finish it :u:

the bold is what im always worried about...

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Post by the-devo » Mon Oct 05, 2009 2:13 am

Hi guys, could someone criticize this crap I'm working on?
Thanks! :D
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It had time to develop naturally into the complex subculture it is today. Dubstep didn't have a chance.
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Post by the-devo » Mon Oct 05, 2009 2:27 am

dignan wrote:Soundcloud

some feedback would be cool for this tune, I'll hook whoever does with some feedback as well.
Dude, this is beautiful. I love it's nice'n'slow flow. :i:
The track ends too suddenly for me, but I'm only saying this because if I didn't say anything negative, I'd sound like kissing your ass. :D
Keep it up! ..really. :wink:
Hip-Hop had the advantage of being born before the age of information (the internet).
It had time to develop naturally into the complex subculture it is today. Dubstep didn't have a chance.
If Hip-Hop was a fully developed husky feared by millions, then Dubstep is the inbred chihuahua on steroids incapable of living but adored by billions.
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Post by dignan » Mon Oct 05, 2009 3:34 am

the-devo wrote:
dignan wrote:Soundcloud

some feedback would be cool for this tune, I'll hook whoever does with some feedback as well.
Dude, this is beautiful. I love it's nice'n'slow flow. :i:
The track ends too suddenly for me, but I'm only saying this because if I didn't say anything negative, I'd sound like kissing your ass. :D
Keep it up! ..really. :wink:
lol thanks for listening to it man!

I checked out your tune - I know it's a work in progress but it was too short to lend itself to some criticism. only thing I can say is that I liked your glitchy drums, it sounded quite interesting so I'd love to hear it when it's completed... :t:
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Post by bradicle » Mon Oct 05, 2009 3:40 am

dignan wrote:Soundcloud

some feedback would be cool for this tune, I'll hook whoever does with some feedback as well.
Really liking this man. Really chilled out. Alot of elements to it that sound great. Keep that shiz up :D. Thats the kinda style I go for, more chilled than raping facelol.

Here's mine, been updated a bit. Feedback from anyone ta.

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Post by marsonebeatz » Mon Oct 05, 2009 3:51 am

hey everyone, just finished workin on the rough draft of this track and would really like some feedback! thanks, GOOMS

http://soundcloud.com/gooms/requiem-dub
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Post by lowpass » Mon Oct 05, 2009 6:31 am

http://www.zshare.net/audio/66488508724fb34e/

Feedback please
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Post by Arshaw » Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:39 am

new track up called discrimination...
Myspace.com/KidKuduro

only managed to get it on myspace

used up my soundcloud :(

plz giv feedback... will return :wink:
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Post by decklyn » Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:40 am

dignan wrote:Soundcloud

some feedback would be cool for this tune, I'll hook whoever does with some feedback as well.
Yeah it's wonderful man.
The mix could use some attention to bring out the percussion and if I were mixing it down for you, I'd put that synth that sits ontop of the mix a bit deeper into it.
This is a tremendous tune though. Really really nice work.
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Post by lowpass » Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:44 am

Kid Kuduro wrote:new track up called discrimination...
Myspace.com/KidKuduro

only managed to get it on myspace

used up my soundcloud :(

plz giv feedback... will return :wink:
From what I could hear there was no bass, (pretty sure my speakers aren't that crap)

I'd turn the kick down, (sounded like a stereo, maybe want to mono it)
Filter out from 60hz downwards and add a sub, even if it's just something bobbing away on the root note, I think it would sound a lot better.

The atmosphere was really nice though mate, well done

http://www.zshare.net/audio/66488508724fb34e/

Still looking for feedback on this please
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Post by Arshaw » Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:45 am

marsonebeatz wrote:hey everyone, just finished workin on the rough draft of this track and would really like some feedback! thanks, GOOMS

http://soundcloud.com/gooms/requiem-dub
chucked you a comment m8...
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Post by Arshaw » Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:49 am

lowpass wrote:
Kid Kuduro wrote:new track up called discrimination...
Myspace.com/KidKuduro

only managed to get it on myspace

used up my soundcloud :(

plz giv feedback... will return :wink:
From what I could hear there was no bass, (pretty sure my speakers aren't that crap)

I'd turn the kick down, (sounded like a stereo, maybe want to mono it)
Filter out from 60hz downwards and add a sub, even if it's just something bobbing away on the root note, I think it would sound a lot better.

The atmosphere was really nice though mate, well done

http://www.zshare.net/audio/66488508724fb34e/

Still looking for feedback on this please
yeah there is a sub somewhere under there :?: god knows

likin your tune tho m8... sum noisey bass shit goin on :P
like how the drums n things fit nice b4 the bass, fat choon
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