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sub7 · Post by **sub7** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 3:02 pm

MiretZ wrote:New track:
http://soundcloud.com/miretz/miretz-five-bell

I must say that's a pretty solid track you got there.....Very deep joint that's for sure. The drum switches and everything are solid, you've really done your homework.....Nice work man....

sub7 · Post by **sub7** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 3:11 pm

Dav.id wrote:hey people, just finished this track today, my goal was to make is very dynamic and robotic, I used massive to create all the basslines, I splitted the bassline in three layers so I could give it alot more variation

It has a very robotic rolling sound to it, my inspiration for this track was Excision, Datsik - Boom

you can download it here:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/64702634c0baa711/

320 kb/s

I'm looking forward to here some feedback

If my english is fucked up it is because I'm dutch , so sorry for that hehe

I feel the intro is a bit too long, even for the dj. I think you should chop it in half, add some things to the intro, it's a rather "epic" intro and probably deserves more than just the pad you are giving it. Some cymbal work would help liven it up I feel. The hihats seems rather low on the mix down, maybe boost them a db or 2....

More variation in the body of the track will attract more attention to the overall track, the sound are good but maybe try a couple different notes.?

Having it end like that with the long pad is a bit rambletastic and I would imagine most dj's would cut that out pretty quick....

Give a bit more to the body of the track, cut the simple pad ending down a bit and give some variation to the synth and drumline....

Keep at it! -Cheers

timelapse · Post by **timelapse** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 5:19 pm

trike12 wrote:
timelapse wrote:Easy guys... Been producing for a number of years and finished a dubstep track the other day. I thought i'd come seek some thoughts and opinions.

Its a deep, dark, abstract number. Deep subs and sexy pads.

just uploaded it to my myspace - first track, top of the list

Timelapse - Expired (existence without a purpose)

http://www.myspace.com/soundlanguage[/url]
Thats a good tune mate, overall good. Missing some variation in the drums and some more buildups. feeling the simple good melodic drop and the didgeridoo like, ambient sounds.

Heres a new tune ive done

"Layback"

www.soundcloud.com/triky12
www.myspace.com/triky12

320's
www.mediafire.com/triky12

would like to know it if you download any tunes

Hey, cheers - I hear what your saying. Am going to look into it.

Just about to check your beats now. Will let you know what i think

miretz · Post by **miretz** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 8:10 pm

sub7 wrote:
MiretZ wrote:New track:
http://soundcloud.com/miretz/miretz-five-bell
I must say that's a pretty solid track you got there.....Very deep joint that's for sure. The drum switches and everything are solid, you've really done your homework.....Nice work man....

Thanks man!

dav.id · Post by **dav.id** » Sat Aug 29, 2009 1:31 pm

sub7 wrote:
Dav.id wrote:hey people, just finished this track today, my goal was to make is very dynamic and robotic, I used massive to create all the basslines, I splitted the bassline in three layers so I could give it alot more variation

It has a very robotic rolling sound to it, my inspiration for this track was Excision, Datsik - Boom

you can download it here:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/64702634c0baa711/

320 kb/s

I'm looking forward to here some feedback

If my english is fucked up it is because I'm dutch , so sorry for that hehe

I feel the intro is a bit too long, even for the dj. I think you should chop it in half, add some things to the intro, it's a rather "epic" intro and probably deserves more than just the pad you are giving it. Some cymbal work would help liven it up I feel. The hihats seems rather low on the mix down, maybe boost them a db or 2....

More variation in the body of the track will attract more attention to the overall track, the sound are good but maybe try a couple different notes.?

Having it end like that with the long pad is a bit rambletastic and I would imagine most dj's would cut that out pretty quick....

Give a bit more to the body of the track, cut the simple pad ending down a bit and give some variation to the synth and drumline....

Keep at it! -Cheers

thx for checking it out and to give some proper feedback, I'm gonna work on those things, and indeed the intro is a bit too long and it also needs some more variation, and that also counts for the outro, maybe some shakers for some more rythem and variation....

thx

ogunslinger · Post by **ogunslinger** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 12:00 am

hey guys, could you take a listen to my first remix? it's at http://www.myspace.com/nazizombiebeats ? and it's the Day and Night Remix

Thanks, and if you could give me some feedback that would be great

zeder · Post by **zeder** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 1:34 am

Hey!

http://www.myspace.com/zederdnb

Could you listen and give me some feedback please?

Cheers!

gnome · Post by **gnome** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 1:53 am

@Zeder. I liking it nice instrumentation and delays. Was gonna say would have liked a bit of a breakdown around the 3.35 mark even if only for a few bars to vary the beats a bit. I love the way it picks up after that. Overall a nice production sounds sonically just right!

zeder · Post by **zeder** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:00 am

Thanks for the tips Gnome! Cheers

benh · Post by **benh** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:09 am

YO.

my remix of temper trap & killa kela

http://soundcloud.com/benh/sweet-dispos ... benh-remix

feedback PLEASE!

spiritbased · Post by **spiritbased** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 8:26 am

Hi all

Put two tunes up on Soundcloud, take a listen and share your thoughts please!

http://soundcloud.com/minusthirteen/tracks

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 10:04 am

spiritbased wrote:Hi all

Put two tunes up on Soundcloud, take a listen and share your thoughts please!

http://soundcloud.com/minusthirteen/tracks

Had a listen to both of your tracks.

The vibe of underlay is cool, almost playful. I think that it needs a little bit more variation though. Possibly some drumwork to change it up a little? And the bass sound im not a massive fan of. It sounds a bit weak at the moment.

However, 'The Recipe', is a different story. The track is oozing in atmosphere and real melancholy roller. The hats are sick, but i would maybe turn them down a lil or eq them so theyre not so sharp at points. I cant really make out the vocals and you could add some breaks style variation into the track just to break it up a little. And the hat sound on the left channel could maybe be panned from left to right. But im probably nit picking haha. Overall, banging tune. Could i get a 320 of this track please?

Also check out my track 'London's Broken'. Latest version is on the myspace and not the soundcloud because soundcloud is just a massive fail and refuses to work!

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 10:10 am

ZEDER wrote:Hey!

http://www.myspace.com/zederdnb

Could you listen and give me some feedback please?

Cheers!

Listened to 'The net' and i agree with gnomes comments. I also think the snare at the moment is weak and could do with some layering and eqing the treble up. And the double snare on the fourth beat could be used every second bar instead of every bar. But as gnome said, a nice sounding track. Hope that all makes sense!

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 10:26 am

Dav.id wrote:hey people, just finished this track today, my goal was to make is very dynamic and robotic, I used massive to create all the basslines, I splitted the bassline in three layers so I could give it alot more variation

It has a very robotic rolling sound to it, my inspiration for this track was Excision, Datsik - Boom

you can download it here:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/64702634c0baa711/

320 kb/s

I'm looking forward to here some feedback

If my english is fucked up it is because I'm dutch , so sorry for that hehe

banging bassline, can definitely see where you got your inspiration from. Ditto other peoples comments about ur lengthy intro though. I think it could do with a mini break and build up mid tune just to add another element. And turning the hats up wouldnt hurt! Really feeling this one though.

mg civet · Post by **mg civet** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 5:48 pm

New track on myspace; Cognitive Research!!

http://www.myspace.com/mgcivet

Party dubstep and something else;) I'm very interested in hearing what you guys think!

ogunslinger · Post by **ogunslinger** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 6:22 pm

Hi, Just added the song that I wanted feedback on to a soundcloud so it's easier or more convenient?

anyways check it out here, http://soundcloud.com/ogunslinger/day-n-night-remix and let me know how you like it please?

neonproductionsnotts · Post by **neonproductionsnotts** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 6:56 pm

Heres a few finshed tunes ive done recntly for download.

http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=a815 ... eaa7bc68bc

resist_ · Post by **resist_** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 9:01 pm

So I haven't really put anything up on the forums until today, but got a couple tracks up on myspace. I'd be very appreciative of some feedback. Thanks.

www.myspace.com/resistdnb

resist_ · Post by **resist_** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 9:05 pm

Zeder -- I'm digging your tunes by the way.

stinjee · Post by **stinjee** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 9:48 pm

ogunslinger wrote:hey guys, could you take a listen to my first remix? it's at http://www.myspace.com/nazizombiebeats ? and it's the Day and Night Remix

Thanks, and if you could give me some feedback that would be great

tbh mate it sounds more like the original than i would like, maybe i would drp the vocal a bit to make it sound different, still a decent tune in its own right,

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