like how it starts m8.
thanks for the feedback man... when you say you would make that main synth part deeper, do you mean making it a little less high end sounding and a little bit more low/mid sounding? cuz I've been thinking about doing that...decklyn wrote:Yeah it's wonderful man.dignan wrote:Soundcloud
some feedback would be cool for this tune, I'll hook whoever does with some feedback as well.
The mix could use some attention to bring out the percussion and if I were mixing it down for you, I'd put that synth that sits ontop of the mix a bit deeper into it.
This is a tremendous tune though. Really really nice work.
c'mon people i give feedback for your tunes, if you could return the favour that'd be good !!!big d 90 wrote:quick one ive been working on, could do with very critical feedback as i am still quite new to everything production-wise
http://www.divshare.com/download/8759578-858
cheers in advance
Somebody as frustrated as me about giving feedback and not getting shit in return.big d 90 wrote:c'mon people i give feedback for your tunes, if you could return the favour that'd be good !!!big d 90 wrote:quick one ive been working on, could do with very critical feedback as i am still quite new to everything production-wise
http://www.divshare.com/download/8759578-858
cheers in advance
cheers bruv, ye i know i gotta get round to proper sorting the drums out lol just too lazylowpass wrote:Somebody as frustrated as me about giving feedback and not getting shit in return.big d 90 wrote:c'mon people i give feedback for your tunes, if you could return the favour that'd be good !!!big d 90 wrote:quick one ive been working on, could do with very critical feedback as i am still quite new to everything production-wise
http://www.divshare.com/download/8759578-858
cheers in advance
It's pretty cool, All I can say so far is maybe add a crash cymbal/other percussion at the start (I just do that normally for dj purposes) but yeah I can really add much sorry. I guess thats a good thing?
http://www.zshare.net/audio/66488508724fb34e/
This is mine, I'm just looking to see if it's got any potential, I haven't written this style in a while and want some feedback on it
In my opinion I think the drums are going along nicely, . The laser pistol sound was kinda cool, but I wouldn't recommend it through the whole tune however. I'd go for your synth bass next, but thats just me.borrowed wrote:This is what I got so far. Basic/shitty, I know, but I have no idea where to go from here. Some producers said make the drums and hats listenable on their own, and i tried to do that.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/6653319233f5be0c/
the intro needs more to it, plus the drop needs more punch and add a little reverb to the bass cause it should sound more live cause atm it just sounds like a machine. pretty sick automation though.deadly habit wrote:inspired from the doa grid thread a place to show off those work in progresses
my latest
Drunken Drummer
http://www.zshare.net/audio/53570458dd3d86e9/
you need more drums on the intro so people can tell where its going if you get me. the drop is big on my speakers but its full of treble so cut the mid down a bit and make the hihats less clattery but overall this is pretty good mate. nice onepyro_racy wrote:Entry for the most original title, I was goin for a sorta melodic ravy type thing but it ended up a little darker than i imagined. Intro still needs a lotta work and I need a better transition into the drop + voice samples on top.
Dubstep03.mp3 - 2.10MB
Anyone?arktrix wrote:Soundcloud
i know what you mean about the drums.Lwrabbit420 wrote:Sorry moderators for not reading the stickies, won't happen again, anyways here it is.
I need some suggestions on the drums, could anyone help? The drums i'm using now feel to stale to me.
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It's a very mellow ambient track. I think it would sound better if you put some more melody into it however.... thats what I would do with it, but this is not my track, it's yours. I was however feeling the effects that you put into this. Keep on keepin on man, I can see the track comming along nicely!Kid Kuduro wrote:i know what you mean about the drums.Lwrabbit420 wrote:Sorry moderators for not reading the stickies, won't happen again, anyways here it is.
I need some suggestions on the drums, could anyone help? The drums i'm using now feel to stale to me.
Soundcloud
u wanna start off with sum good samples. sounds obv i know, but its how most people do it.
but feelin the track thereafter... nice one...
looking for feedback on a new one of mine btw.
Discrimination... http://www.myspace.com/KidKuduro
thank for ya comments man. i tend to make tracks that go nowhere n have no melodyLwrabbit420 wrote:It's a very mellow ambient track. I think it would sound better if you put some more melody into it however.... thats what I would do with it, but this is not my track, it's yours. I was however feeling the effects that you put into this. Keep on keepin on man, I can see the track comming along nicely!Kid Kuduro wrote:i know what you mean about the drums.Lwrabbit420 wrote:Sorry moderators for not reading the stickies, won't happen again, anyways here it is.
I need some suggestions on the drums, could anyone help? The drums i'm using now feel to stale to me.
Soundcloud
u wanna start off with sum good samples. sounds obv i know, but its how most people do it.
but feelin the track thereafter... nice one...
looking for feedback on a new one of mine btw.
Discrimination... http://www.myspace.com/KidKuduro
Oh and thanks for the feedback!
lol.I have zero idea where to go from here, I suck at programming melodies.Lwrabbit420 wrote:In my opinion I think the drums are going along nicely, . The laser pistol sound was kinda cool, but I wouldn't recommend it through the whole tune however. I'd go for your synth bass next, but thats just me.borrowed wrote:This is what I got so far. Basic/shitty, I know, but I have no idea where to go from here. Some producers said make the drums and hats listenable on their own, and i tried to do that.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/6653319233f5be0c/
Do you have a piano/keyboard?borrowed wrote:I have zero idea where to go from here, I suck at programming melodies.Lwrabbit420 wrote:In my opinion I think the drums are going along nicely, . The laser pistol sound was kinda cool, but I wouldn't recommend it through the whole tune however. I'd go for your synth bass next, but thats just me.borrowed wrote:This is what I got so far. Basic/shitty, I know, but I have no idea where to go from here. Some producers said make the drums and hats listenable on their own, and i tried to do that.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/6653319233f5be0c/
kotku wrote:if something sounds like shit and is not pop then it's techno, or is this definition flawed aswell?
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