Big track, in terms of what could be improved, everything is sitting nicely but the kick and especially the snare could use more punch, try to distort your drum hits or layer them with more, or even look into parallel compression. Try not to dwell on the volume of your tracks compared to pro artists as they have had their tracks professionally mastered.
@Thrilla
Definitely a keeper! i would say make a breakbeat/Jungle drop with a large sub and its on its way to being a banger. Judging by the drum rolls before the drop im sure thats where you were gonna go with it anyway?
@Weedcali
Pulsating tune ! the sub is so heavy, i like how you kept it toned down till the second drop, that midrange bass in the second drop need beefing up a little, maybe even just needs to be louder
@darkdubz
The intro was sounding sweet and then when the vocal came in it was not tempo synced, this threw me off a little, it seems that you have tried to construct the track around this but you can still tell its off, again the drop sounds like Datsik, there's definately an audience for this track, just sort out the vocal

Thanks everyone for the feedback, its much appreciated
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