PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Rickmansworth · Post by **Rickmansworth** » Wed Oct 28, 2009 7:26 pm

yo thanks for the feedback...

i checked your tune only on crappy headphones i use at work... but im digging the beat, its fat.

the bass sounds a bit garbled and like it needs some more sub (though this could just be my headphones) also, i would add some variation to the kicks. there are several parts where the higher freq melody does not seem to be in key with the bass (maybe it is in key, but the structure doesnt sound right)

i think you have a good start here though... especially the way the tune is structured.

last & least · Post by **last & least** » Wed Oct 28, 2009 7:56 pm

Rickmansworth wrote:yo thanks for the feedback...

i checked your tune only on crappy headphones i use at work... but im digging the beat, its fat.

the bass sounds a bit garbled and like it needs some more sub (though this could just be my headphones) also, i would add some variation to the kicks. there are several parts where the higher freq melody does not seem to be in key with the bass (maybe it is in key, but the structure doesnt sound right)

i think you have a good start here though... especially the way the tune is structured.

cheers mate, yeah i think there is definitely alot of sub there : p

yeah upon listening i think i put in Dm where it should be a D... or something like that....

garbled means????

Rickmansworth · Post by **Rickmansworth** » Wed Oct 28, 2009 8:13 pm

last & least wrote:
Rickmansworth wrote:yo thanks for the feedback...

i checked your tune only on crappy headphones i use at work... but im digging the beat, its fat.

the bass sounds a bit garbled and like it needs some more sub (though this could just be my headphones) also, i would add some variation to the kicks. there are several parts where the higher freq melody does not seem to be in key with the bass (maybe it is in key, but the structure doesnt sound right)

i think you have a good start here though... especially the way the tune is structured.
cheers mate, yeah i think there is definitely alot of sub there : p

yeah upon listening i think i put in Dm where it should be a D... or something like that....

garbled means????

it sounds messy to me.. haven't heard it on my monitors though so i could be wrong.

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Wed Oct 28, 2009 9:27 pm

Soundcloud

some feedback would be greatly appreciated on this one - don't worry, I'll return the favor!

the-devo · Post by **the-devo** » Wed Oct 28, 2009 10:40 pm

the-devo wrote:Hi guys, I'm working on a ssllooww and sad song at the moment, and I am so effing tired, I'm afraid I'm going to ruin the song.. but I don't want to go to sleep yet.
It is a work-in-progress, and this is really just the beginning of the song.. this isn't even a sketch.. it's just the first couple of lines on the paper.
You can be as harsh as you wish, just don't flame..
Thank you!

Soundcloud

Me got no feedback.

UPDATE: I added a bassline to it.. you can hear it after the "horror and moral terror are your friends" quote.

last & least · Post by **last & least** » Wed Oct 28, 2009 11:58 pm

the-devo wrote:
the-devo wrote:Hi guys, I'm working on a ssllooww and sad song at the moment, and I am so effing tired, I'm afraid I'm going to ruin the song.. but I don't want to go to sleep yet.
It is a work-in-progress, and this is really just the beginning of the song.. this isn't even a sketch.. it's just the first couple of lines on the paper.
You can be as harsh as you wish, just don't flame..
Thank you!

Soundcloud
Me got no feedback.

mate no.1 fucking go to sleep and do it in the morning!!! I did that, except for 1 week and so much shit in there that needed changing

also you are slightly being a forum izan without a hell of alot posts which kind of makes people not want to give you feedback

anyways to the song

from the short part which i can here, it has a really good vibe, you got what you want right on the spot

there is absolutely no bass but i'm guessing youll add that in later

low cutting your verbs would be quite good too, there a bit too in your face i reckon

and adding more layers to your back ground noise, slowed down samples of people talking etc and more rain, but reaaaaally quiet just to build up tension

First sort of ambience producer that hasn't totally copied burial

love to see what you thought of mine.... its up top...

demure · Post by **demure** » Thu Oct 29, 2009 1:02 am

so this is my second attempt at dubstep so far still unfinished but its a bit of a strange tune

, i have recently been converted from producing dnb to makin dubstep and have been really enjoying just doing what i want as opposed to what i think i should be lol. i signed up here ages ago but wasnt sure whether i wanted to pursue the whole dubstep thing, but im enjoyin it so im gonna stick with it. this is only 4 hours work ish so its not fantastic but i hope i got enough in there for you to have a chuckle at. it is only my second serious attempt at dubstep though so dont expect anythin fantastic. sorry about the long intro but i felt a bit cheeky just postin a track and not sayin anythin

anyways i will be checkin out some of the other bits in here as it really seems a million miles away from other forum comunes. really great site you got here:)
Soundcloud

the-devo · Post by **the-devo** » Thu Oct 29, 2009 2:07 am

last & least wrote:
the-devo wrote:Hi guys, I'm working on a ssllooww and sad song at the moment, and I am so effing tired, I'm afraid I'm going to ruin the song.. but I don't want to go to sleep yet.
It is a work-in-progress, and this is really just the beginning of the song.. this isn't even a sketch.. it's just the first couple of lines on the paper.
You can be as harsh as you wish, just don't flame..
Thank you!

Soundcloud
mate no.1 fucking go to sleep and do it in the morning!!! I did that, except for 1 week and so much shit in there that needed changing

also you are slightly being a forum izan without a hell of alot posts which kind of makes people not want to give you feedback

anyways to the song

from the short part which i can here, it has a really good vibe, you got what you want right on the spot

there is absolutely no bass but i'm guessing youll add that in later

low cutting your verbs would be quite good too, there a bit too in your face i reckon

and adding more layers to your back ground noise, slowed down samples of people talking etc and more rain, but reaaaaally quiet just to build up tension

First sort of ambience producer that hasn't totally copied burial

love to see what you thought of mine.... its up top...

Many thanks for the feedback.

My first language is not English, so I have a bit of a trouble guessing what certain terms mean.
By low cutting do you mean I should apply a LowPassFilter to it? Or do you mean it needs more EQing? ..or both.

and adding more layers to your back ground noise, slowed down samples of people talking etc and more rain, but reaaaaally quiet just to build up tension
Yes, I've added reverberated whispers to the background, and I'm looking for some more wet/filthy samples. More rain? Hmm.. I'll go get some more rains then, because if I continue using the same, after a while it could sound like a loop.

About your song:
I've downloaded it, listened to it, and found it interesting. Not the "I don't want to be rude but it sucks" kind of interesting.
I liked how your drops. It's the kind of song you can't get bored of easily, because it's not repetitive.
Especially after the first third of the song. In the beginning I thought "Wtf? Air raid siren?" but then it blended in pretty well.
The "wtf" reaction to it was caused by the contrast between the melody and the siren - the melody (to me) sounded calm and/or slightly happy, but the siren (because of it's purpose and meaning) sounds alarming and agressive/scary.
I like your wobble too. It's just as filthy as it should be.. not more, not less dirt, just enough.
I am no professional. I don't know shit about what Hz kicks/snares/hihats should be nor how I achieve that, so I'm sorry but I can't comment on works on a professional level.

idlemode · Post by **idlemode** » Thu Oct 29, 2009 6:24 am

hey peoples.....sup

track called Kuz, it's first in the player. Can people tell me what they think? good / bad / either / both.

http://www.myspace.com/idlemode

no space left on soundcloud this month.....argh

cheerz mateys!

the-devo · Post by **the-devo** » Thu Oct 29, 2009 9:33 am

idlemode wrote:hey peoples.....sup

track called Kuz, it's first in the player. Can people tell me what they think? good / bad / either / both.

http://www.myspace.com/idlemode

no space left on soundcloud this month.....argh

cheerz mateys!

I think it's good. I liked it.. I'm tired as fuck, so I can't really reason it or describe what I feel.. I think it's a nice and simple dubstep song.
Thumbs up!

junior spesh · Post by **junior spesh** » Thu Oct 29, 2009 11:23 am

the-devo wrote:Hi guys, I'm working on a ssllooww and sad song at the moment, and I am so effing tired, I'm afraid I'm going to ruin the song.. but I don't want to go to sleep yet.
It is a work-in-progress, and this is really just the beginning of the song.. this isn't even a sketch.. it's just the first couple of lines on the paper.
You can be as harsh as you wish, just don't flame..
Thank you!

Soundcloud

Nice, dark atmosphere to dis tune bruv, gna sound greazy wen its finished...

junior spesh · Post by **junior spesh** » Thu Oct 29, 2009 11:29 am

demure wrote:so this is my second attempt at dubstep so far still unfinished but its a bit of a strange tune , i have recently been converted from producing dnb to makin dubstep and have been really enjoying just doing what i want as opposed to what i think i should be lol. i signed up here ages ago but wasnt sure whether i wanted to pursue the whole dubstep thing, but im enjoyin it so im gonna stick with it. this is only 4 hours work ish so its not fantastic but i hope i got enough in there for you to have a chuckle at. it is only my second serious attempt at dubstep though so dont expect anythin fantastic. sorry about the long intro but i felt a bit cheeky just postin a track and not sayin anythin anyways i will be checkin out some of the other bits in here as it really seems a million miles away from other forum comunes. really great site you got here:)
Soundcloud

OI!! Ur 2nd serious attempt at dubstep? soundin noice,
I like the ambient build up and da bassline is doin alot tbh

the-devo · Post by **the-devo** » Thu Oct 29, 2009 11:49 am

junior spesh wrote:
the-devo wrote:Hi guys, I'm working on a ssllooww and sad song at the moment, and I am so effing tired, I'm afraid I'm going to ruin the song.. but I don't want to go to sleep yet.
It is a work-in-progress, and this is really just the beginning of the song.. this isn't even a sketch.. it's just the first couple of lines on the paper.
You can be as harsh as you wish, just don't flame..
Thank you!

Soundcloud
Nice, dark atmosphere to dis tune bruv, gna sound greazy wen its finished...

Thank you!

I'm happy to hear positive feedback on it. I changed the bass to a more filthy/growling sound.
Here:
Soundcloud
I think I'll have to take back on the strength though.. Like last & least said, a bit too in your face.
Thanks again!

junior spesh · Post by **junior spesh** » Thu Oct 29, 2009 12:11 pm

the-devo wrote:
junior spesh wrote:
the-devo wrote:Hi guys, I'm working on a ssllooww and sad song at the moment, and I am so effing tired, I'm afraid I'm going to ruin the song.. but I don't want to go to sleep yet.
It is a work-in-progress, and this is really just the beginning of the song.. this isn't even a sketch.. it's just the first couple of lines on the paper.
You can be as harsh as you wish, just don't flame..
Thank you!

Soundcloud
Nice, dark atmosphere to dis tune bruv, gna sound greazy wen its finished...
Thank you!
I'm happy to hear positive feedback on it. I changed the bass to a more filthy/growling sound.
Here:
Soundcloud
I think I'll have to take back on the strength though.. Like last & least said, a bit too in your face.
Thanks again!

nah, sounds good, i personally find it hard to make tunes that are ambient and sound good, u dun a great job....

while you're here dubstepper's check out a tune im makin now, nowhere near finished but feedback would help ALOT >>>Soundcloud

the-devo · Post by **the-devo** » Thu Oct 29, 2009 3:47 pm

junior spesh wrote:
nah, sounds good, i personally find it hard to make tunes that are ambient and sound good, u dun a great job....

while you're here dubstepper's check out a tune im makin now, nowhere near finished but feedback would help ALOT >>>Soundcloud

OH SHI- I accidentally the whole comment. It's in your soundcloud...cloud. w/e.. havn't slept foro 3 dayz nao.. gotta og to sleeps.. ahh.
peace

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Thu Oct 29, 2009 4:03 pm

@junior spesh - checked out your tune - production on it sounds good, drums are sounding nice. however, it sounds like its two different songs put together. the transition from part 1 to part 2 isn't working for me. just my opinion though...

Tahma · Post by **Tahma** » Thu Oct 29, 2009 6:45 pm

Hey! I'm looking for some feedback.

http://www.dnbshare.com/download/wium.mp3.html
myspace.com/tahmamusic

Cheers!

stikman · Post by **stikman** » Thu Oct 29, 2009 7:04 pm

http://soundcloud.com/stikman/
ragganuffin

I started this yesterday, a jungle dubstep combo.

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Thu Oct 29, 2009 7:40 pm

Tahma wrote:Hey! I'm looking for some feedback.

http://www.dnbshare.com/download/wium.mp3.html
myspace.com/tahmamusic

Cheers!

ya gotta give to get my man

junior spesh · Post by **junior spesh** » Thu Oct 29, 2009 7:43 pm

dignan wrote:@junior spesh - checked out your tune - production on it sounds good, drums are sounding nice. however, it sounds like its two different songs put together. the transition from part 1 to part 2 isn't working for me. just my opinion though...

THANKS 4 FEEDBACK, i literally did it in 5 mins, there is no mixing goin on wotsoeva, hence the transition sounding kinda off and sudden. i will upload the propa version if i decide 2 finish it, just wanted the opinion on the idea of the tune rather than it as an actual tune..

will be able to link the melodies 2geva nicely if i decide 2 finish....

Its a couple of patterns put 2geva so far lool

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