FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

[DubSac]

big up dubsac, sounds hawt, did you rape bitcruncher on that one

appreciated man!... whats a bitcrusher hahaha

[sterling]

Here is my most recent track, Salt Creep. It's a dubstep/techno heads down type of vibe.
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Any feedback is appreciated.

[phrex]

jaydot: i would make your snare a bit more lively by adding a little bit of reverb, and something strange is going on with your hihats. check them, they are somehow sometimes out of time. nice vocals!

kontigobeats: nice game you're playing with the sidechaining! gives it a shitload of drive to your track! the vocals are soooo cheesy


here are mine, did 2 in 2 days.. superproductive, after many weeks of nothing


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[TM45]

@Sterling - Not my style, but I must say I like the bongoes. Got some great rhythm going on there ^_^

@vulvavibration - Interesting. I like the industrial sounding drums, but I'm not sure about the bass, seems a litle muddy to me. Have to turn bass right down on my sub to make out what's going on, otherwise nice vibes

Here's mine

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comments/criticism appreciated

[phrex]

thanks man. i think that's because i produced it on headphones don't have the right measure for the bass...

will listen to your track later on in the studio

[DubSac]

Sorry to post this again- but i changed a bunch of stuff in this one.

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[DubSac]

@Sterling - Not my style, but I must say I like the bongoes. Got some great rhythm going on there ^_^

@vulvavibration - Interesting. I like the industrial sounding drums, but I'm not sure about the bass, seems a litle muddy to me. Have to turn bass right down on my sub to make out what's going on, otherwise nice vibes

Here's mine

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comments/criticism appreciated

I didnt listen to this on the studio computer- so i cant really tell whats going on with the sub. srry bout that- ill drop u feedback anyways tho

Nice intro- its simple, but it sounds pretty sick. nice1
1:02- i like when the.... not sure what it is, the hits that start comin in here, its a nice touch.
1:32- nice change in variation, liking the water drop stuff that starts comin in after this
3:47 out is a pretty good way to end the track

Solid track- but like i said, i listened with shite speakers, so cant really comment on the sub. nice job tho!

[theone1_]

Laundry Hustle

Made most of this one in one night on earphones - completed it the next day. Happy with the arrangement - bit of a dark roller for the dancefloor!
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1000 Blisters

Did this on a friends computer while mine was dead.. This gets a good response - not sure about the second drop, so some opinions are appreciated .

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Feedback is welcomed - as I'm really starting to actually like my songs and a bit of criticism goes a long way !

[airlabam]

jaydot: i would make your snare a bit more lively by adding a little bit of reverb, and something strange is going on with your hihats. check them, they are somehow sometimes out of time. nice vocals!

kontigobeats: nice game you're playing with the sidechaining! gives it a shitload of drive to your track! the vocals are soooo cheesy


here are mine, did 2 in 2 days.. superproductive, after many weeks of nothing


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Like the pitch LFO @ 2:05 on the sub on the first one, it hits a heavy sweet spot as far as subs go because of the nice pitch movement. It's a nice clean track and I appreciate the clean minimal production, but I suppose I have been into mid range garish wobbles lately after such a long time away from them. Good job, regardless!

[airlabam]

Laundry Hustle

Made most of this one in one night on earphones - completed it the next day. Happy with the arrangement - bit of a dark roller for the dancefloor!
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1000 Blisters

Did this on a friends computer while mine was dead.. This gets a good response - not sure about the second drop, so some opinions are appreciated .

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Feedback is welcomed - as I'm really starting to actually like my songs and a bit of criticism goes a long way !

The first one @ 0:55 reminds me of LD - Woodblock (which is a song I'm quite fond of), so good job on that. Sub cleanly mixed and produced and would get tiring if not for the variation at 3:48. The wobble intensity on the sub is just right, solid track.

On the 2nd one:
0:26: liking the groove that's coming in at
1:46: the chromatic variation on the sub-bass gives it a lot of implication with a little movement, the notes are well chosen. you mentioned not being too sure about the 2nd drop -- you could possibly make the aforementioned chromatic variation a motif that you give more of a spotlight to or more development to in the 2nd drop. no matter how much i love dubstep for the lovely sound textures, phrase variation is at the heart of composition that makes my ears happy. it can be melodic and/or rhythmic and/or harmonic, but it's got to catch my ear's gaze.
1:49: the subdued + reverb claps sound mint, the arrangement at this point is wonderfully sublime and i think you should let that go on for longer or bring it back later on in the track--the texture you get there is really nice, and i found myself wishing it would last longer.

[airlabam]

@deranger - this is something kinda different, nice laid back feel and that synth line is nice!
@ jaydot - again quite a nice laid back vibe, the vocals sound pretty good but i think the piano sounds a bit of out place sometimes

heres mine, a kinda garage track, some nice synths and vocal chops, pretty sure this is finished in terms of arrangement, not mixed yet, let me know what you think!
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Like the lush sidechained pads, and the volume shaping on the sub--makes it feel like it moves away then back inwards, which is a nice aural effect. Overall, tastefully produced

[theone1_]

The first one @ 0:55 reminds me of LD - Woodblock (which is a song I'm quite fond of), so good job on that. Sub cleanly mixed and produced and would get tiring if not for the variation at 3:48. The wobble intensity on the sub is just right, solid track.

On the 2nd one:
0:26: liking the groove that's coming in at
1:46: the chromatic variation on the sub-bass gives it a lot of implication with a little movement, the notes are well chosen. you mentioned not being too sure about the 2nd drop -- you could possibly make the aforementioned chromatic variation a motif that you give more of a spotlight to or more development to in the 2nd drop. no matter how much i love dubstep for the lovely sound textures, phrase variation is at the heart of composition that makes my ears happy. it can be melodic and/or rhythmic and/or harmonic, but it's got to catch my ear's gaze.
1:49: the subdued + reverb claps sound mint, the arrangement at this point is wonderfully sublime and i think you should let that go on for longer or bring it back later on in the track--the texture you get there is really nice, and i found myself wishing it would last longer.

Thanks heaps bro ! Means a lot !! Will maybe do a re-edit of the second drop on 1000 Blisters - maybe bring that bit you liked back in ? As for Woodblock - I'll take that as a compliment, haha, because I've never heard that track but I understand what you mean! Thanks man - do you have any tunes?

[realistic-prod]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p1i1KUY8eio

Im new to the producing side of things.
i would just like to get my music heard so that people can give me advice on how to improve.
Thanks

[deadly_habit]

no critque needed just figured a few people here wouldn't see this otherwise

figured i would use this for my label or revisit it, but i went a bit too odd for myself to rework it anymore and figured might as well give it away rather than dwell on it. i still dig it myself, but not enough to revisit it.

whole tune on youtube if ya want a preview

full tune as a 320 to download
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[soberskank]

Summin abit darker

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Cheers people! x

[deadcell]

For some reason my internet isnt letting me listen to soundcloud.. i managed to upload a track but couldnt play it... hmm
well anyway heres my newest moody bit

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Enjoy!

[An Expresso]

@thierry_le_dj: sine flu sounds good with the dark feel but the wubby bass gets a little boring. just my opinion anyways.

@collision: i fucking loved those drums, i liked sour, but then again jungle's my favorite time of music. howd you slow the drums down like that if you don't mind me asking.

@imperial: not really my style but i do like the distortedness and the drums

@sterling: i like it, the twighlight feel of it is very nice, the 4floor beat goes well with the song too

@vulvavibration: cool feel to it, kinda reminds me of if like disney's aladin made dubstep or something.
bass is too loud on my sub sometimes though.

here's one i made today, not quite finished, feels a little empty. would really appreciate feedback on this tune.
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here's another one i made like last week, not really mastered at all definitely have to do that but would appreciate feedback on this too and i'll return the favor

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[Imperial]

@thierry_le_dj: sine flu sounds good with the dark feel but the wubby bass gets a little boring. just my opinion anyways.

@collision: i fucking loved those drums, i liked sour, but then again jungle's my favorite time of music. howd you slow the drums down like that if you don't mind me asking.

@imperial: not really my style but i do like the distortedness and the drums

@sterling: i like it, the twighlight feel of it is very nice, the 4floor beat goes well with the song too

@vulvavibration: cool feel to it, kinda reminds me of if like disney's aladin made dubstep or something.
bass is too loud on my sub sometimes though.

here's one i made today, not quite finished, feels a little empty. would really appreciate feedback on this tune.
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here's another one i made like last week, not really mastered at all definitely have to do that but would appreciate feedback on this too and i'll return the favor

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cheers man, i apreciate its not wat everyone looks 4 in a dubstep tune but hopefully some people will like it

and for those who missed it this was the tune im chatting about, feedback is always returned and welcomed

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and if anyones in a drumstep mood (or halfstep dnb as so many people complain to me about it) ive got a little mix which i put together featuring some of my older tune and some new one including the one above, and there a tracklsit in the info if anyones wondering

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[Holda]

just finished it, i think it still needs a bit more of a mixdown but thats just minor
its a kind of old skool dubstep tune dont think ive heard much of this so i thought it would be a new thing to bring to the community
tell me what you think n all
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[Holda]

@imperial I like the glitchyness at the begining its a different intro to those that ive heard before..