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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by stappard » Fri Oct 16, 2009 12:01 am

fassyman wrote:this is my first finished tune so please tell me what you think and any suggestions on how i could achieve a better sound

http://www.zshare.net/download/67003200dbfbc353/

Yeah just a hint at getting some feedback round here mate, get yourself a soundcloud account and embed your song in your post, people (like me) are lazy....

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by last & least » Fri Oct 16, 2009 12:31 am

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chip tune influenced dubstep

maybe you like?

be mean!

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Post by phrex » Fri Oct 16, 2009 12:39 am

not really my kinda sound, those bleeps and clicks and and nintendo-8-bit-noise...

still you knew how to place those sounds that good, that it doesn't really sound bad. still not really my thing.
as soon as the beat is played without the subbass (which is a great one!) the beat misses power and somehow i gets lost in all the sound..!

can't be more mean than that mate! :twisted:
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by green plan » Fri Oct 16, 2009 2:59 am

really like that second build up and drop man. maybe not so into the two step tip at the end, seems like its just done for the hell of it maybe?

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by karmdub » Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:59 am

quick track i made on reason. just getin used to it atm. tell me what you think an what it needs?
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Post by last & least » Fri Oct 16, 2009 8:26 am

vulvavibration wrote:not really my kinda sound, those bleeps and clicks and and nintendo-8-bit-noise...

still you knew how to place those sounds that good, that it doesn't really sound bad. still not really my thing.
as soon as the beat is played without the subbass (which is a great one!) the beat misses power and somehow i gets lost in all the sound..!

can't be more mean than that mate! :twisted:

But doesn't it make you want the second drop?

thanks for the feedback though, ur on fire in these threads

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Post by phrex » Fri Oct 16, 2009 8:38 am

would love to answer your question, but right now i'm in university, sitting with 8 others in a room and discussing bout moral codex... it would look quite disrespective if i'd put on my huge headphones and slam the tune :lol:

hold on... i'll get one more listen to your chune as soon as possible and then i'll answer your question ;) :t:

btw: cause I expect a lot and qualified feedbacks to my finished and work-in-progress tunes, I give feedback to those people who
A) seem to be sympathetic (is this the right word? :D)
B) also give feedback
C)don't come here, post their tune with the title ''feedback please'' and piss off untill' they have produced the next track.

so, unlike many others not just a consequentialistic view of point (''i give if i get'').


This post is inspirired by the tutorial i'm attending right now... :P

oh.. and i got a work in progress track in the other thread. check it :e:
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Post by Disco Nutter » Fri Oct 16, 2009 11:16 am

@ last & least
Just listened to your tune!
I don't like those drums at all! IMHO the track would greatly benefit from a better drum kit! Snappier, and clearer!
Why not try it out?

Cheers,
Jason!
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BTW, here's one I wouldn't mind being given feedback about:
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Disco Nutter & Roka - Only Things (Bonkerz Audio)
Free download from here!


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Post by sun_ck » Fri Oct 16, 2009 12:23 pm

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i like this voice and some sounds.
but it is a boring for me in some moments.

al all it sounds well i think, keep it.
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Post by drift » Fri Oct 16, 2009 5:37 pm

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edit: posted in wrong thread :roll:
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Post by thierry_le_dj » Fri Oct 16, 2009 10:30 pm

http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj
i just finsih working on 2 trax!! (Safari Dub and Mon-Dazed)
i want to send them out as my 1st demo
please let me know what you think??

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Post by sun_ck » Sat Oct 17, 2009 6:36 am

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Post by arktrix45hz » Sat Oct 17, 2009 9:55 am

arktrix wrote:Soundcloud
http://45hertzofbass.com- Guest mixes and interviews with the likes of Danny Scrilla/Baitface/Mishva and more.

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Post by PMoos » Sat Oct 17, 2009 10:07 am

Ez all
I've made this track few weeks ago, and I finally kick my ass to mix it...
Anyway, please tell me how you feel about it, even if it's mean !
thx!

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Post by arktrix45hz » Sat Oct 17, 2009 10:30 am

PMoos wrote:Ez all
I've made this track few weeks ago, and I finally kick my ass to mix it...
Anyway, please tell me how you feel about it, even if it's mean !
thx!

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Snare needs to be a tiny, tiny bit louder in my opinion. Other than that I quite like it!
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by PMoos » Sat Oct 17, 2009 10:44 am

arktrix wrote:
PMoos wrote:Ez all
I've made this track few weeks ago, and I finally kick my ass to mix it...
Anyway, please tell me how you feel about it, even if it's mean !
thx!

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Snare needs to be a tiny, tiny bit louder in my opinion. Other than that I quite like it!
ez
safe for the advice !
But I'm too dumb : I've done shit with the links, and that's not the right dub... this ya one is unfinished !!
Anyway thx again, and I'll follow the advice !

Bless up !

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by PMoos » Sat Oct 17, 2009 10:53 am

PMoos wrote:
arktrix wrote:
PMoos wrote:Ez all
I've made this track few weeks ago, and I finally kick my ass to mix it...
Anyway, please tell me how you feel about it, even if it's mean !
thx!

Soundcloud
Snare needs to be a tiny, tiny bit louder in my opinion. Other than that I quite like it!
ez
safe for the advice !
But I'm too dumb : I've done shit with the links, and that's not the right dub... this ya one is unfinished !!
Anyway thx again, and I'll follow the advice !

Bless up !
That's the good one !!
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by dignan » Sat Oct 17, 2009 7:41 pm

please check out this tune that was just finished - it's a collab between me and Lowpass (big up man!):
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by naus » Sat Oct 17, 2009 8:41 pm

dignan wrote:please check out this tune that was just finished - it's a collab between me and Lowpass (big up man!):
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YES ... I really like this sounds light n nice.

This is my newest bit...need finishing i think...im rubbish at finishing tunes but please let me know what you think people!!

Cheers in advance!! :)
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Post by dignan » Sat Oct 17, 2009 10:27 pm

naus wrote:
dignan wrote:please check out this tune that was just finished - it's a collab between me and Lowpass (big up man!):
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YES ... I really like this sounds light n nice.

This is my newest bit...need finishing i think...im rubbish at finishing tunes but please let me know what you think people!!

Cheers in advance!! :)
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not really my cup of tea - i like more melody in my tunes but I like your production - the sub was nice a heavy and your drums were sounding tight as well.

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