"as badass a wobble as has ever been created" - Ba

shatterfreak · Post by **shatterfreak** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 9:32 am

Mars and Osca, this is the shit, thank you so much!!!!

Yeah man, love that book, Hunter S Thomson was some author.

Right , in a little while when i go back to those tunes, i'll be sure to hit you guys up with the new versions for more feedback.

Legends.

steppa · Post by **steppa** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 5:05 pm

Shatterfreak wrote:Thanks very much for the feedback guys, and you can be sure i'll be implementing your advice and striving to just get better at this shit.

Thanks a lot guys, i understand it's a pain in the ass to be checking songs for every new guy that shows up.

Steppa, would love to hear some of your tunes if you have my Myspace or Soundcloud or anything?

Odd that the issue seems to be the wobble, the people who like the track seem to really like the wobble.

I think a good Dubstep tune is pretty universal though...all those solid elements are in there, if you get me.

Interesting, and a lot to think about and practice. Thanks again.

Oh and Osca, i'm about a month or so into making Dubstep, and about 4 months into making music at all electronically.

I AM A LION

jameshk · Post by **jameshk** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 5:26 pm

Very nice atomosphere to this track. However, the bass dosn't sit right in the mix atall. First off the sound isnt right for this track, Secondly the eq is messed. It pushes out alot of the other parts of the track when it comes in. Third the acctual note placement is messed, the melody makes no sence and sometimes you've cut the ends of the waves off.

Good effort, keep at it.

hk

jameshk · Post by **jameshk** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 5:33 pm

Very nice atomosphere to this track. However, the bass dosn't sit right in the mix atall. First off the sound isnt right for this track, Secondly the eq is messed. It pushes out alot of the other parts of the track when it comes in. Third the acctual note placement is messed, the melody makes no sence and sometimes you've cut the ends of the waves off.

Good effort, keep at it.

hk

redvsblue · Post by **redvsblue** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 5:40 pm

ive never seen so much critique on a track. People get all bent out of shape when you title a thread like this.

shatterfreak · Post by **shatterfreak** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 11:22 pm

REDvsBLUE wrote:ive never seen so much critique on a track. People get all bent out of shape when you title a thread like this.

Granted, that was a mistake, but as i explained it was an honest one, if you get me.

ANd i am digging all the feedback...it's all i want...i don't care if you like my stuff or not...but all i ever do want is for those 15 to 20 seconds to maybe point out where you think it's weak.

So Steppa, i take it your in no mood to share a link then?

Shame, i would like to hear your music.

hosihoser · Post by **hosihoser** » Sat Aug 29, 2009 10:22 am

actually i like it

wierd bass but i like wierd! something different....keep practicing!

rob 3twenty · Post by **rob 3twenty** » Sat Aug 29, 2009 10:40 am

The smokey room feel that Osca was on about describes it perfectly, remember music is expression in forms and this is a forum not a rule book, you did good mate.

shatterfreak · Post by **shatterfreak** » Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:54 am

Cheers guys, thanks for the kind words!

"as badass a wobble as has ever been created" - Ba

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