Feedback Thread

[Capture pt]

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[hutyluty]

Capture point, thanks for the kind words mate

Your track has some banging percussion in ti, really like all the drums in it. The sample doesn't seem to fit that tightly though, especially at the start, but it all blends really well in the main section. The bit from about 3:05 to about 3:45 is absolutelysick too. Nice tune!

[Skullee]

Hey guys

Kinda cool to just have one dedicated thread for this..and since its house..i am jumping on the wagon and share one of mye newest tracks with you.
Its electro with some inspiration from dubstep and stuff..so..enjoy
I have edited out the intro/outro since its basically just beats there for the djs to mix in and out with..so you dont miss out on anything there
Oh..and feel free to comment!

Here it is:
Skullee - Fake people
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Cheers

[KeeveBC]

hutyluty, Cheers for the feedback. Played about with it a little today but wasn't feeling very creative but has given me a few ideas on what to do with it! - bit distracted by another track I'm working on now too so will come back to it.

@Capture pt, Liking the vocal on that. Not sure about the kick part of the intro, a bit too clicky maybe give it a bit of low end to it, but like the 808(?) hits in the build up so I wouldn't get rid of them. Really like the drop although a bit too much happening for me, not liking the robot sounding part or the cat sounding bit. - Listening as I'm going on, the 'robot' part pitched down sounds alot better! Apart from that I'm really feeling it!

@Skullee Can see the fidget crowd liking that one, only thing I picked up on was the fade at the start but as you said you've sorted that out.

[Skullee]

thanx man! Yeah..i have just faded it quickly in and out since its just for listening purpose when its up on soundcloud

[Capture pt]

Cheers for the feedback everyone, all noted and taken on board, next time i get some production time ill give them a round two and try the suggestions mentioned here.


in the mean time, here is a track i made today!

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thanks again everyone, appreciated! sometimes getting feedback is harder than making the tune in the first place.

[taddytol]

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[KeeveBC]

@Capture pt. Really enjoyed that one. No real criticism on it but maybe when it comes back in you should try another synth ontop of whats already there? Kinda thought that where it was leading but very good track none the less!

[dedman]

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it is 140 but its not really dubstep so feel the need to post here haha!
i'll feedback others tunes tomorrow when i get a chance in front of the monitors!

[Capture pt]

@Capture pt. Really enjoyed that one. No real criticism on it but maybe when it comes back in you should try another synth ontop of whats already there? Kinda thought that where it was leading but very good track none the less!

cheers man, much appreciated. not sure if im going to touch it again, it was a kinda "bash out in a night and forget about it" kinda thing.... aha.

[hutyluty]

@dedman- man, that intro is weet, absolutely love the work on the keys, and the drop is pure beauty. Only thing I could say was the sub was a little quiet, but beautifull track

not much time- i'll come back give a bit more

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and the track in my sig cos im greedy

[KeeveBC]

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Structure is a bit off on this one, kinda just banged it together. Vocal is lifted straight from a sample pack too. Anyone know of good sources/tutorials/info for vocals?

[mashmash]

@dedman nice tune! good use of vocals, really like the progression and good work with the sub, fits nicely. haven't really got any criticisms

@hutyluty i like the progression of this, nice atmospheric sounds as well. maybe you could add some more hi hats during the intro, it can feel a bit sparse if it doesn't change for a while

@keevebc good work with the vocals! didn't listen to the whole thing, but maybe add a breakdown or two somewhere? just try and mix it up a bit, but yeah sounding good

here's a track i've been working on. not very many elements, was trying to see if a chord progression would work but nothing fitted, any suggestions?
was made using shitty speakers, haven't got any decent monitors yet, so some bits may be a bit strange

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[KeeveBC]

@hutyluty = Flobas sounds really good, bass and synths work well together but I don't think the drums really flow when they're half time. Maybe duplicate the track and have one with longer decay for the snare and hat's on the half time parts then have it snappier for the double time parts? Apart from that I really liked the way the track went.

[hutyluty]

@mashmash- youve taken it down but i had a lookat you other stuff and Midnight is niiice mate, proper bassliney grime

@keevebc- the pads are bum, the drums seem a little quiet and the vocals arent quite in key- but theyve been really well manipulated. Just need a bit of pitch shifting me thinks and a mixdown and this tune will be fiyah!

[Capture pt]

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Yo, heres some house tune on that half time drum, space and bass tip ramadanman is rocking right now.... love to hear what people think as ive not made anything like this before!

[hutyluty]

as ive said before that is an absolute tune capture point, you been sending it to labels?

This one was mine for the production forum battle- got knocked out int the first round- i'm struggling on creating background ambience in my tracks, any tips anyone?

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[phrex]

long time i haven't done anything apart from the bass music stuff...

well... yesterday i sat down and wrote a deep house thing...
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capture point: your tune is spot on!

[tunabomber]

keepcalm-this-is-also-untitled

bangin, i love the grimey vibe on this.

deathtrap/sans

vibes, nice sounds. i like the organic feel. maybe a harmonic change at some point would work on this tune.



my latest bit:
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[tunabomber]

another one

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