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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by jaydot » Tue Apr 13, 2010 7:21 pm

@Don Pablo. holy shit that's some nice bass.

@Dusty Speakers, nice chilled vibes and filthy wobbles gotta love it. :)

Very very rough tune here, needs all manner of work but what does you think so far:

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by Astral » Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:56 pm

jaydot wrote:@Don Pablo. holy shit that's some nice bass.

@Dusty Speakers, nice chilled vibes and filthy wobbles gotta love it. :)

Very very rough tune here, needs all manner of work but what does you think so far:

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May just be my speakers but you got a lotta shit fighting for room there jay, should be fine once you give stuff space, maybe get a bit more movement to that drone-y synth.

Updated my earlier one.

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by Hellomadame » Tue Apr 13, 2010 11:48 pm

Updated my earlier one.

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Trying to go for that classic sounding dub, with influences of township funk (mainly the snare pattern).

Really nice dark sound but do you think a vocal sample would fit in somewhere ?

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by goldorak » Wed Apr 14, 2010 2:30 am

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Very rough preview of my new tune. There is still a lot of work and the tune needs more variation.

But I'd like to have your opinion about the clip above!

Thanks! :D

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by AL4228 » Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:56 am

Astral wrote:
jaydot wrote:@Don Pablo. holy shit that's some nice bass.

@Dusty Speakers, nice chilled vibes and filthy wobbles gotta love it. :)

Very very rough tune here, needs all manner of work but what does you think so far:

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May just be my speakers but you got a lotta shit fighting for room there jay, should be fine once you give stuff space, maybe get a bit more movement to that drone-y synth.

Updated my earlier one.

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Trying to go for that classic sounding dub, with influences of township funk (mainly the snare pattern).
What song was remixed there. SOunds good

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by jaydot » Wed Apr 14, 2010 8:39 am

Astral wrote:
jaydot wrote:@Don Pablo. holy shit that's some nice bass.

@Dusty Speakers, nice chilled vibes and filthy wobbles gotta love it. :)

Very very rough tune here, needs all manner of work but what does you think so far:

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May just be my speakers but you got a lotta shit fighting for room there jay, should be fine once you give stuff space, maybe get a bit more movement to that drone-y synth.

Updated my earlier one.

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Trying to go for that classic sounding dub, with influences of township funk (mainly the snare pattern).
Yeah i forgot to turn everything down before uploading it, :oops: just a rough mix though so when I mix it properly I'll pay more attention to volumes.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by _boring » Wed Apr 14, 2010 8:48 am

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not tooooo original ,but it has its place... just kinda started having at it... first time in a while ive made a beat...

this is just one sitting, gonna tighten everything up, edit the filter on the one synth in the intro and then add the melody from the intro 24 bars into the drop (maybe 32) and also make the drums change a little more as it goes on. also the intro drums will be tightened too. snares also need to probably be brought up a touch and the kick down a hair.

its a tune to bring you out of wobble into more chilled beats, but still keeping that dubby bassline tension. transition stylee. trying to go pretty minimal while filling the space. made for the room we hold our nights in.

let me know if you are feeling the vibes :)
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Post by sminch » Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:25 pm

Hello. Any feedback on this tune wud be amazing. If you do il leave some feedback on ur tune too ;)
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by Muta » Wed Apr 14, 2010 8:10 pm

Hiyall, something Im working on, its only 30 sec. short, but Im just unsure about the bass.. For some reason (to me) it sounds a bit weakish? If you think so aswell, could you help me figure out what maybe?
Needs more sub? (sorry for not making feedback, but I find it taking a bit too much effort to go through 3 tracks which most likely are around 4 to 5 mins, just to sahre a 30 sec. thing of me....)
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by zonetrooper5 » Wed Apr 14, 2010 8:26 pm

I've given my feedback to three different tracks already, need some feedback on this song. For all the people posting and not giving any feedback, I suggest like the rules say, give feedback to three different tracks then post your track up so someone else can give feedback on it.

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Post by sminch » Wed Apr 14, 2010 8:46 pm

zonetrooper5 wrote:I've given my feedback to three different tracks already, need some feedback on this song. For all the people posting and not giving any feedback, I suggest like the rules say, give feedback to three different tracks then post your track up so someone else can give feedback on it.

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ok for one thing your intro and build up are quite long and gets a bit samey. try adding some variety, bring in some hi hats odd bits of percussion here and there, maybe even a counter melody or something to spicen it up. In general alot more variation is needed!

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Post by sminch » Wed Apr 14, 2010 8:51 pm

Muta wrote:Hiyall, something Im working on, its only 30 sec. short, but Im just unsure about the bass.. For some reason (to me) it sounds a bit weakish? If you think so aswell, could you help me figure out what maybe?
Needs more sub? (sorry for not making feedback, but I find it taking a bit too much effort to go through 3 tracks which most likely are around 4 to 5 mins, just to sahre a 30 sec. thing of me....)
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sounds nice and glitchy to me! bring in a seperate sub if ur that intent on bass :twisted: i like it how it is however

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by zonetrooper5 » Wed Apr 14, 2010 10:49 pm

sminch wrote:
zonetrooper5 wrote:I've given my feedback to three different tracks already, need some feedback on this song. For all the people posting and not giving any feedback, I suggest like the rules say, give feedback to three different tracks then post your track up so someone else can give feedback on it.

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ok for one thing your intro and build up are quite long and gets a bit samey. try adding some variety, bring in some hi hats odd bits of percussion here and there, maybe even a counter melody or something to spicen it up. In general alot more variation is needed!
Thank you for the feedback, you got any tracks you want me to listen to?

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by 5-0-what » Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:03 am

goldorak wrote:Soundcloud

Very rough preview of my new tune. There is still a lot of work and the tune needs more variation.

But I'd like to have your opinion about the clip above!

Thanks! :D
i like the idea the steel drum in the intro is ill i should be incorporated in the drop
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by mashmash » Thu Apr 15, 2010 1:42 am

sminch wrote:Hello. Any feedback on this tune wud be amazing. If you do il leave some feedback on ur tune too ;)
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nice one, i'm liking this, nice and relaxing. maybe in the intro you could do some sort of build up to the beat, instead of it starting off straight off

here's this track i've been working on
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by Sinus Sawtooth » Thu Apr 15, 2010 5:57 am

fuck synths, I have gabberkicks!

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by jaydot » Thu Apr 15, 2010 7:43 am

sminch wrote:Hello. Any feedback on this tune wud be amazing. If you do il leave some feedback on ur tune too ;)
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@Seanminchell: That's a really slick track, liking the progression on the piano, when the hats kick in it really gets going.

@Astral: Nice track there, feeling the Township Funk vibes. I dunno, maybe a little more variation in the first 32? But sounds good so far:

Far from finished, but would like some feedback on this one if poss.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Post by lpmovement » Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:49 pm

Here somethink i been working on i acturly need tip's pls :) Its a proper sick nasty sound but its very..washy mix i duno how to get it completely clean but keep the power any tips pls

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Post by Sidestepuk » Thu Apr 15, 2010 7:52 pm

sminch wrote:Hello. Any feedback on this tune wud be amazing. If you do il leave some feedback on ur tune too ;)
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I really like the low wobble, and the way the piano melody builds up to it. Not to sure about the Vocals, they seem to be a little rough...
Other than that really liked it :)

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Post by Sidestepuk » Thu Apr 15, 2010 7:55 pm

lpmovement wrote:Here somethink i been working on i acturly need tip's pls :) Its a proper sick nasty sound but its very..washy mix i duno how to get it completely clean but keep the power any tips pls

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Filthy, the drums at the beginning make the tune very hyped/militant The wobble is very thick and sounds good. Might just have to follow you on Soundcloud ;)

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