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[Thawn]

Soundcloud

Looking for feedback, will feedback whoever feedbacks me.

Thanks

Louis

as far as making a tune goes its really good, enjoyed it

and i dont mean this in a bad way, but were you going for the crackley bad recording type sound? or was it a poor upload

[Thawn]

Soundcloud

looking for some honest feedback! heard it so many times i dont even know how to think what it sounds like.

This is good, synths sound great. Has a really nice clean overall sound to it

Only crit would have to be, maybe make the clap a bit snappier, louder in the mix, and at nearly 7 mins, mifght e a tad too long

[Thawn]

Soundcloud

Almost finished.
Gotta do something about the hats at the beginning. Might toss em and start from scrap.

Mix is pretty rough.

Any critiques much appreciated.

Nice vibes man, loved the drop around 2.55

[Thawn]

Soundcloud

Im not new to production, am starting to feel im at a standard to post tracks now though. Bit stuck on this, not even sure if its any good or not

[louissmusic]

Soundcloud

Im not new to production, am starting to feel im at a standard to post tracks now though. Bit stuck on this, not even sure if its any good or not

Really nice track like how you use the little portamento thing at the end of the bass riff, drums sound nice and quite punchy and some nice random sample leading into the snare you got there. Kick and snare could use with a bit of over drive & there could possibly be a bit more sub overall great tune. Keep it up

Louis

[Thawn]

Soundcloud

Im not new to production, am starting to feel im at a standard to post tracks now though. Bit stuck on this, not even sure if its any good or not

Really nice track like how you use the little portamento thing at the end of the bass riff, drums sound nice and quite punchy and some nice random sample leading into the snare you got there. Kick and snare could use with a bit of over drive & there could possibly be a bit more sub overall great tune. Keep it up

Louis

Thanks Louis, certainly isnt the finished article as yet, hope to have it done in the next few days or so

[zonetrooper5]

Another track I'm working on, still trying to get the bassline and some other stuff right on that other song. Anyways, this is a more chilled out song, would like some feedback on it.

Soundcloud

[Thawn]

Another track I'm working on, still trying to get the bassline and some other stuff right on that other song. Anyways, this is a more chilled out song, would like some feedback on it.

Soundcloud

Coming along quite nicely. Did get a bit repetitive though. The rain sample for example, you could do a couple of little things with that throughout, like very light filtering and volume automation to give the effect of a journey, like you are getting closer to and further from the rain.

Also, the snare/clap, try a few edits throughout with that, put the snare in places you wouldnt normally expect to hear it. Thats what id do anyway. Would like to hear the final edit

[rook]

sick remix. i like the guitar riff... what is that from?

From the original song, just used the original mp3 from the album. :]

im loving this right now nice work

Nice vibes man, loved the drop around 2.55

Thanks doods :]

Most recent version is up, super close to done.
Gotta do some work on transitions and tidying throughout, but should get it done tomorrow.

Soundcloud

Then it's off to Depone who graciously offered to mix it down for me as I'm still a bit under par there.

[slyman]

Thanks doods :]

Most recent version is up, super close to done.
Gotta do some work on transitions and tidying throughout, but should get it done tomorrow.

Soundcloud

Then it's off to Depone who graciously offered to mix it down for me as I'm still a bit under par there.

np man but did u change up the riff that comes at 40 seconds? i liked the other one better maybe u could mix the 2 together cuz it sounds like u lost the sound around 48-49 in wip2 and i liked that a lot

[Province]

Soundcloud

looking for some honest feedback! heard it so many times i dont even know how to think what it sounds like.

This is good, synths sound great. Has a really nice clean overall sound to it

Only crit would have to be, maybe make the clap a bit snappier, louder in the mix, and at nearly 7 mins, mifght e a tad too long

cheers man, ill get on that clap business. got loads of hassle from clipping going on, need to get the levels sorted first.
yea i tend to just long things out really

[rook]

Thanks doods :]

Most recent version is up, super close to done.
Gotta do some work on transitions and tidying throughout, but should get it done tomorrow.

Soundcloud

Then it's off to Depone who graciously offered to mix it down for me as I'm still a bit under par there.

np man but did u change up the riff that comes at 40 seconds? i liked the other one better maybe u could mix the 2 together cuz it sounds like u lost the sound around 48-49 in wip2 and i liked that a lot

yeah, I'll probably be tweaking that section tomorrow.
I have a bunch of version saved so nothings permanent.

[marshy]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/68724689c5f3efb3/

[karmacazee]

Rough mix, just wondering how the arrangement sounds, and if there's any weirdness in there my ears ain't picking up...



http://www.divshare.com/download/9409154-86c

ill tune! I enjoyed it. but:

1:36-1:49 section should be extended another 8 bars . the reason I think so is because I'm not a fan of the bass @ 1:50 - 2:41.

3:12-3:25 or so, with the pads. should be more than 4 bars

I say 'should' as in 'it would be nice if'.

Safe! Just having a re-arrange now to see how it sounds Was thinking of doing another version of this tune without that bass sound and calling the lost in space remix anyways, so those little chilled out bits would fill out most of the tune


And yeah man - enjoyed the lo-fi jazzy vibes of your tune Integration of Sorrel, just thinking maybe that white noise/crackle could be a bit lower in the mix? Or is that some mad effect you've put on the drums and can't be altered? Seriously original sound though dude, fairplay. And one or two of the synth sounds are a bit too loud, but I quite like the way they jump out of the mix at you...

[teddy019]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/68730037b3016029/

Something sorta old never really worked on it more but thinking of carrying on with it, you like?

[zonetrooper5]

Another track I'm working on, still trying to get the bassline and some other stuff right on that other song. Anyways, this is a more chilled out song, would like some feedback on it.

Soundcloud

Coming along quite nicely. Did get a bit repetitive though. The rain sample for example, you could do a couple of little things with that throughout, like very light filtering and volume automation to give the effect of a journey, like you are getting closer to and further from the rain.

Also, the snare/clap, try a few edits throughout with that, put the snare in places you wouldnt normally expect to hear it. Thats what id do anyway. Would like to hear the final edit

Thanks for the feedback, liking the idea of the filtering and volume automation. Will agree that the snare needs to be changed up, same with the kick drum.

[86.]

Rough mix, just wondering how the arrangement sounds, and if there's any weirdness in there my ears ain't picking up...



http://www.divshare.com/download/9409154-86c

ill tune! I enjoyed it. but:

1:36-1:49 section should be extended another 8 bars . the reason I think so is because I'm not a fan of the bass @ 1:50 - 2:41.

3:12-3:25 or so, with the pads. should be more than 4 bars

I say 'should' as in 'it would be nice if'.

Safe! Just having a re-arrange now to see how it sounds Was thinking of doing another version of this tune without that bass sound and calling the lost in space remix anyways, so those little chilled out bits would fill out most of the tune


And yeah man - enjoyed the lo-fi jazzy vibes of your tune Integration of Sorrel, just thinking maybe that white noise/crackle could be a bit lower in the mix? Or is that some mad effect you've put on the drums and can't be altered? Seriously original sound though dude, fairplay. And one or two of the synth sounds are a bit too loud, but I quite like the way they jump out of the mix at you...

thanks for the feedback. this morning/last night the project folder (along with several others) got deleted ...how I don't know but this one is gone now. fortunately I had made a few edits and rendered it. the vinyl distortion shit can't be altered now . ah well lol

glad you enjoyed it though....respect.

when you done with rearranging, 320???

[aspect-dubz]

Soundcloud
thought i'd do a little remix/VIP thing on this tune me and darkmatter worked on, the intro's a bit long for a clip but ohwell.

[darkmatteruk]

Soundcloud
thought i'd do a little remix/VIP thing on this tune me and darkmatter worked on, the intro's a bit long for a clip but ohwell.

eez geez, thats sounds heavy, make sure you send me a copy on aim when you're done

[aspect-dubz]

Soundcloud
thought i'd do a little remix/VIP thing on this tune me and darkmatter worked on, the intro's a bit long for a clip but ohwell.

eez geez, thats sounds heavy, make sure you send me a copy on aim when you're done

sure will mate, i was gonna hit you up on aim before i posted it up but you weren't online.