FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by An Expresso » Wed May 19, 2010 12:23 am

wirez wrote:What's going on with the feedback before posting these days? :P

@ Vulva and Expresso, not Dubsac
I gave feedback to like 3 or 4 people on the page before this and got none back :cry:
a future garage track i cooked up, feedback appreciated.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by airlabam » Wed May 19, 2010 5:21 am

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Thanks heaps bro ! Means a lot !! Will maybe do a re-edit of the second drop on 1000 Blisters - maybe bring that bit you liked back in :) ? As for Woodblock - I'll take that as a compliment, haha, because I've never heard that track but I understand what you mean! Thanks man - do you have any tunes?
Indeed I do!

But I might as well crop out the soundcloud links, haven't gotten a response...there's one in my sig should anyone want to hear.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by drdeft » Wed May 19, 2010 10:23 am

@JBE - Good sounds , love the track

@Holda - Funny old school vibe - maybe add some old funky voices

@code zero - best tracks i've eard yet , good work

Need comment on this one , this is a track for our next compilation ...

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by kontigobeats » Wed May 19, 2010 12:19 pm

@JBE liking the laid back vibe on this one, and the main pads and melody are nice, sounds like the bassline might be peaking a bit? sounds kinda crackly when the full attack comes in. maybe even put more sub bass in there, give it more depth, nice track though!

@drdeft, some nice drums in this one, nice rhythm! not too keen on the dirty bassline sound but thats just my preference, liking the synths that come in around the 3 minute mark though.

heres mine, quite laid back 2step vibe, some nice synths and vocals, feedback appreciated! still needs to be mixed too so any tips on that let me know!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by noctonal » Wed May 19, 2010 1:18 pm

Can I get some feedback please? :)

Seems I've been totally ignored and that makes me sad.
(I've done more than 3 feedback innit ;))

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by JBE » Wed May 19, 2010 1:30 pm

This is gonna be kind of a long post I think. I wasn't able to give feedback when I posted my track cause I was just linking it from work. Can't really listen to much music when I'm at work. Thanks to everyone that gave me feedback on my track. I really appreciate it all. It's nice to get some opinions on stuff for once. Up until I found this forum I couldn't get any opinions or feedback on pretty much anything, and what I did get was extremely limited.

@Wirez: I really like the tracks you've posted in here. Especially that first track, I think Game Over? The breaks were great and I loved that Bouncy vocal you used at the beginning of each drop.

@Mistayif: Really enjoyed Interlude. The drums were great. Had a great chilled out vibe. I'm not even sure if that was a vocal I heard or if it was just a pad, either way it fit perfectly.

@Kaiori Breathe: If you broke the rules it definitely doesn't bother me. That video game compilation track you posted was excellent. Makes me think of some of the great stuff that was on the old Megaman games and Donkey Kong Country. IMO The Donkey Kong Country series had some of the greatest soundtracks of any game I've ever played.

@Bitcrusher: Cursed Oscillatah was a pretty good track. I think the only thing I thought stood out, at least to me, as not sounding right was that vocal sample. When I heard it, I just felt, with the dirty dark sound you have going with the other sounds, that it should have sounded meaner, if that makes any sense. I also think the kick could have stood out a bit more, but I think it still fits as is.

@Fassyman: Very nice, and dark track. I thought the wobbles fit very well, and I really liked that delayed sounding melody.

@Noctonal: Very big sound. I really liked that. I usually go for the more subby sound but this was nice. Just when you think it might start getting repetitive you completely change up the bass. Nice looking out there. I really like how it just never lets up. The whole track is just non-stop battery to the eardrum.

@Frank Grimes jr: Really nice vibe. I love the ethnic sounds you used. That flute sound is absolutely hypnotic when paired with the sub bass.

@Djwom: I Liked your track. I think the wobble could have stood out a bit more. The melody kinda takes over the whole track and you kinda lose focus on the bassline. However, the melody is really catchy. Not just the progression, but the sound itself. Also I liked how on beat everything was. Generally I like a little chaos sometimes but at the same time it's really nice to just be able to groove to everything in the track at the same time.

@An Expresso: It's very "Jungley" if that's even a word. I'm not really to into jungle but I liked the chill sound of the track. I think the pads could be brought down just a bit. Although I'm listening with my headphones and they tend to bring out the higher frequencies more than I'd like, so it could just be that.

@Drdeft: I didn't know what to expect with the intro. I really wasn't digging the intro. But after about the 30 second mark I really started to get into it. I liked the break style of beat you got going. I think the bass could come down just a tad on the high end. I was losing all the other sounds against the wobble.

@Kontigobeats: Quality track man. I don't really have any real critique other than it being great. I thought the vocals sounded excellent. I liked the vinyl static sound, I thought it really gave the song some character. It's different, and in my opinion different is always great.

Told you it would be a bit long. Anyway, this is about all I have time for right now. I'll try to come back and get some more feedback in.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by wirez » Wed May 19, 2010 5:32 pm

An Expresso wrote:
wirez wrote:What's going on with the feedback before posting these days? :P

@ Vulva and Expresso, not Dubsac
I gave feedback to like 3 or 4 people on the page before this and got none back :cry:
Oh sorry man, is it the track in your signature you want feedback on? Let me know or repost and I'll give you intense feedback :P
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by airlabam » Wed May 19, 2010 5:45 pm

noctonal wrote:Can I get some feedback please? :)

Seems I've been totally ignored and that makes me sad.
(I've done more than 3 feedback innit ;))

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by wirez » Wed May 19, 2010 6:34 pm

@drdeft - I'm not keen on the wobble sound in that track personally, not sure if it's a personal preference or if it is generally annoying. Everything else sounds wicked though, nice energy in the track, heavy sub, nice and wide mix and well separated over all!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by wirez » Wed May 19, 2010 7:22 pm

kontigobeats wrote:Soundcloud
Sounding nice man, it's not 2 step though lol it's half beat :/ Still good never-the-less!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by kontigobeats » Wed May 19, 2010 7:38 pm

wirez wrote:
kontigobeats wrote:Soundcloud
Sounding nice man, it's not 2 step though lol it's half beat :/ Still good never-the-less!
haha all these genres eh! thanks for the feedback everyone! does it sound like it a full track, or do you guys think its missing something?
i need to get it mixed too so any thought on what to do to the mix let me know? cheers
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by donpablo » Wed May 19, 2010 8:07 pm

my new techy atmospheric dubstep tune.320 on the d/l .comments wellcome

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by -hooky- » Wed May 19, 2010 10:56 pm

NEw track from Hooky. Will return all feedback:


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by An Expresso » Wed May 19, 2010 11:11 pm

@JBE haha thanks jungle's my favorite genre so i like bringing a lot of jungle influence into my songs, i'll chekc out the pad and probably bring it down when i redo this tune

@wirez no problem dude, yeah it's the track in my sig :D

i'll give everyone some more feedback soon but soundcloud is acting up right now, i'd appreciate any more feedback for the song in my sig and promise i'll return it :w:
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by kontigobeats » Wed May 19, 2010 11:14 pm

@hooky - quite liking this actually, sounds like a good track- nice use of vocals and the synths are good, good use of automation on the bass, keeps it interesting.
but has it been properly mixed? sounds like the drums and the vocals are drowned out by everything else, id prob put a punchier kick in there as well, big track though.
my tracks a couple posts up if wanan give feedback, or the one in my sig might be more what you like judging by your track
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Hellomadame » Thu May 20, 2010 1:33 am

Hello hello ! Here's my new track (it's in my sig), I don't think it's mixed properly so I am bassically seeking feedback for this and ... probably anything else. I'm kind of in a rush i'll try to comment on your tracks later ! :).

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by whynaughtbeats » Thu May 20, 2010 8:25 am

@Wirez: Keep it up dude, good job.....really enjoyed the new bit song with those ill ass breaks!


@noctonal: Sounds dope, kinda reminds me of tomba or some evil thuggish shit.I really like how you used the china cymbals and threw the doublebass break down in there!(keep it deathmetal its rad, haha) If you could just maybe make it a min or 2 shorter, so it doesn't get too boring or repetitive.


@hooky:you have great sound man it awesome

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by kooolfella » Thu May 20, 2010 9:33 am

Hey guys, a lot of very dope stuff here !
Here my latest track.

Iron Maiden - The Trooper (KoolFella Remix) 320kbps promo

http://soundcloud.com/koolfella/the-tro ... x-320-kbps

let me know what you think.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by drdeft » Thu May 20, 2010 12:17 pm

thanks for reply

@noctonal - I don't like the intro but breaks and the rest are fine !

@donpablo - Nice atmosphere ! But want more subtle sub bass :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by hakka » Thu May 20, 2010 4:57 pm

My first dubstep beat. Im a bit clued up about splitting frequencys etc and the kicks clash with the bass. Just wanted some feedback from you guys :D

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