WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for NOVEMBER, 2010

[tek_selecta]

@ superginger ill track mate, lovin the biggie. feel like your snare needs to cut a bit better, prolly coud fix that by pitching it up a tad or compress that bitch. ill tho real talk, send that one over and i'll test it out for ya PS. when no one posts fb i think it means fools is shook.. take it as a compliment.. them nah ramp with the big boys..


@ mortal nice soundscapes, that sub seems like its hitting at different velocities to me, mabye saturate that synth a little more in the mix ( reverb / filter freq down ) keep at it !

@liquid audio, swingin drums i like mix sounds good to me, maybe edit the attack a bit on the sub? it clicks a wee bit when it hits. fresh sound

@ hutyiuty kinda deep vibes on this one, reminds me of downtemp, nice progression. feel like drums need more presence they drowning a bit in the mix. good stuff

@ tripwire good idea, needs more sub! drown it in bass !

@ voodeedoo not really my thing but good tune so far, that last synth that comes in seems a bit bright to me ( filter freq down perhaps? ) from what i know house is about buildups / progression - weave it all together !



some hiphop style, blizzard going on here :
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[Siderealdb]

@djtelevision-Possibly the fattest clap I've ever heard, between 1:05 and 2:18. You need to sidechain your drums in this cause your kits being overwhelmed. Slightly repetitive as well though tbh.

@hutyluty- Really nice track, but that high mid pad and vox sample could use some volume automation or something. The autopans ok, but they seem to clash and take over the rest of the track.

@tripwire--nude-radiohead-remix, always great sounds from you. Very emotional for a remix honestly.

--Distance, Nice deep vibe. Your stucture is always impecable, the vocal sample from Star Trek is great too.

@voodeedoo- Don't really listen to house much so I can't be certain what does/doesn't work, but it sounds alright to me.


@tek_selecta- Nice, everything sounds in order, just not crazy enough for me I guess.

Here's my newest WIP
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And here's my second newest WIP
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[Steeple]

@ Superginger - the biggie sample is sick ... like the drop but not a big fan of all this crazy wobble malarkey ... good work though mate

@ apastrat - i like that alot mate ... bopping my head away here to the beat zoning out ... finish this off!

@ rubiconguava - the intro is wiked feeling it me! and when it changes up its sick ... minimal 2 the max!

@ tripwire - again the intro is sick ... the b line on this is sick not feeling the clicky snare thats goin on ... but thats just me!

@siderealdb - FEELING THE 1ST TUNE ... intro is sick and like the person said eerie!

this is something i started the other day if people could have a butch and let me know that would be appreciated!

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[Grok]

tek_selecta: Nice plucky synth and the drop is perfect. Just what I was hoping for in the intro. Would prefer a heavier snare but the mix sounds pretty tight. The kick sits really nice with the bass. I also think you should develop the pluck synth as it goes with little melody fills here and there. And the second drop needs a new element or change of some sort but being a WIP I presume you have something in mind. Good tune anyway!
Siderealdb - Archangel: Great drop! Solid wobbles, very crisp. I'm not too keen on the snare, it needs some reverb and hi-end and maybe add another snare for the stereo on top of it. I like how it builds up from 1:00-1:10 and the small voice samples directly after that. Very nice details overall and interesting ending (or the last 30 seconds)! Too bad the snare ruins it a bit (the snare rolls especially, too loud and too often! although I must say the snare sounds better in the breakbeat parts).
Steeple: Here on the other hand we have a snare I really like. Good percussion work (not too fond of the damp ride though, it takes too much head room). Too bad it's not happening much throughout the song. It's basically the drop and that's it. The whale synth is cool but not enough. I also think you should change the jagged synth in the background as it's a bit annoying. If you change that and the ride the tune will be so much deeper I think (maybe just lower the amp on them?). Definitely a good start anyway!



So, here's my latest project. All feedback is appreciated!
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[tdbz]

Ginger - dope track for sure. I personally would love to hear the snare pop a little more. Other than that, dope, send it if you would! I'd rock that for you for sure! Houston loves dope hip-hop based Filth for sure!

Steeple - great start for sure, love to hear the progression, add some variations and whatnots.

[tdbz]

So, looking for some feedback on this WIP.

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[kidstrange]

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I have this song under Demo on my soundcloud and this is what it has came to be....there are a few odd sounds i hear that i caught but instead of going back to fix them right away i posted it up to see what others think.

[wabble]

@KIDSTRANGE good use of ur sub bass.. i personally dont like the mid range wobble but its a good tune all in all
@tdbz good sounds inthere, love ur snare, very present.. the second drop is my fav part, good yah's
@Grok good layout thus far.. try dropping the parts in and out for more dynamics.. love the pitch shifting
@steeple good riddim, ur mix sounds a little tinny and lacking some of the fullness from the sub region, nothing some eq shouldnt fix, like the overall beat tho, some dubbed out delays would be nice at end of segments
@Siderealdb i like ur second tune, has very big stereo field that could be narrowed a hair but maybe thats what u were going for
@tek_selecta eq and maybe double some of ur sounds to make them bigger and stand out in there respective freq range.. good arrangement, feel its jus lacking on the mix
@Voodeedoo love this mixdown.. sounds like logic too.. try adding some glitchy vocal transitions or maybe some sidechain compression on ur wind/a pad

heres my latest wip.. im already gonna make this my next single and switch to using this kind of wobble style, in love with this and it was stuck in my head till i finally sat down and banged it out
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[ogunslinger]

haha kinda inspired by an o.o.b. k experience
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listening to songs, gona post fb in a sec
wabble: sick drop and nice vocals
kidstrange: yo pretty sick, i'd just suggest to work on fine tuning that bass !
tdbz: nice melody, stuck in my head already.... haha fat headache

[kidstrange]

thanks alot guys! and some fine tuning for sure..im debating on the crash, a friend mentioned it as well that it might be a little to much..i agree there but hey im sure some people enjoy it.

[sprayyypaint]

@Siderealdb- archangel is pretty sweet. the percussion so fun. although i feel like the bass wobbles should have a bit more "umph" but this is just my taste. great track, i cant really say anything bad about it.

@Grok- great track man, the drop gives me womp face! haha. cant wait to hear what you will do with this

@wabble- wow man just wow. super epic sample. although it is sort of overtaking the entire track?


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[kidstrange]

apologizes for not putting my input in i hadn't the time to listen when i posted last.. so heres my inputs

@Siderealdb (Archangel) - love the vibe! have to agree with Grok on this.
@Grok- pitch shifting sounds great..the drop could use a little more over all great start
@tdbz - over all very well, alot of variety ..hmm imo id do something with the main snyth beef that up a little or something
@wabble - great track vocals are a tad overpowering but other than that love the vibe!!
@sprayyypaint - great feel very chilld but, the high frequency telephone sound is not friendly on the ears (at least mine) if thats your feel by all means go for it!

[donpablo]

deep/dubby/dark

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[LukeRaith]

I'm just asking for sound feedback on wether the drop on this satisfies you from the buildup, also feedback on if the build up is good or not! cheers mates!

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[donpablo]

add some fx,sweeps,automate filters and the build up will be sweet for sure,also make some groove with hats/percussions

[LukeRaith]

add some fx,sweeps,automate filters and the build up will be sweet for sure,also make some groove with hats/percussions

fuck ive forgot to render it with the reverse snare and a hi hat pattern, never mind!

[Sinisterbeats]

@donpablo - really nice tune, love the pads. Great drum sample and some really nice background sounds.

@sprayyypaint - mix sounds very compressed, let it breath a bit! apart from that pretty cool tune.

new one im working on:

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[tdbz]

Thank you all for the feedback. Much appreciated. Will post up the next three WIP's soon!

[donpablo]

@ sinister - nice groove and atmospheres!everything sounds nice to me,cant say much,i like it.maybe try addin some reverb on the snare

[jaspervc]

@donpablo: heavy ass track man! Nice beat Keep it up!
@sprayyypaint: Track is a bit to sharp in my opinion, could use some mixing.. But nice wobbles there! Nice one
@ogunslinger: Maybe a bit to hectic, but nice track... Very nice buildup!

Here is my new thing Heavy Dubstep
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