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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by conclude » Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:39 pm

Thx Squalid!

I tried changing the wobble instead, making it more solid, or whatever. The old one was too disted I think.

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Post by dignan » Thu Dec 03, 2009 4:47 pm

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can I get some construcitve feedback on this one? I'll return the favor!

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Post by Squalid » Thu Dec 03, 2009 4:59 pm

dignan wrote:Soundcloud

can I get some construcitve feedback on this one? I'll return the favor!
I like the drums, pretty unique. The only thing I don't like about it is that kind of siren sound that comes and goes, panned to the right. Doesn't seem to fit with the mood of the track, other than that, pretty chill!

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Post by dj_yeoku » Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:31 am

:P
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Yeoku - Chillstep



Website - http://www.myspace.com/yeoku
Email - Yeoku@hotmail.co.uk
Youtube Channel - http://www.youtube.com/user/DJYeoku
Soundcloud - http://soundcloud.com/yeoku
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Post by polygonfiction » Fri Dec 04, 2009 2:31 am

Just put the straight url between the soundcloud tags.


So like, [sound cloud]http://soundcloud.com/user5491060/dub22-2[/sound cloud]

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Post by crackf » Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:45 am

whatup guys, added a lil more to my hellfire track

i tried added a little break in the song but i took it out, didnt think it fitted, but now it feels a little to short, anny suggestions?
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Post by futurist » Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:54 am

crackf wrote:whatup guys, added a lil more to my hellfire track

i tried added a little break in the song but i took it out, didnt think it fitted, but now it feels a little to short, anny suggestions?
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it does seem a bit short, not too sure about the drum roll thing tho, i did like the track tho and would like to hear the final version of it when you are done!


Here is something I just started working on:
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Obviously its no where done as it is pretty much just the beginning but I want to know if i should keep going with the feel i started going with on it.
Current work in progress:
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Post by Squalid » Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:51 pm

futurist wrote:

Here is something I just started working on:
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Obviously its no where done as it is pretty much just the beginning but I want to know if i should keep going with the feel i started going with on it.

Really like the atmosphere of the track and all the random sounds that accompany the drumloop. Kinda makes me think of a safari haha.

The only input I can really think of is that I don't like the intro, just seems a bit boring? But because of the bass and stringy type sample you've got I think it kinda has to be. Not very helpful I know!

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Post by dj_yeoku » Fri Dec 04, 2009 3:15 pm

Yeoku - Chillstep



Website - http://www.myspace.com/yeoku
Email - Yeoku@hotmail.co.uk
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Soundcloud - http://soundcloud.com/yeoku
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Post by Dwaggy » Fri Dec 04, 2009 4:32 pm

I'm quite entry level in all regards but you gotta start somewhere i guess. Here's 2 loops that aren't finished at all! Hell yeah!
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Reason 4.

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Post by Squalid » Fri Dec 04, 2009 6:52 pm

Dwaggy wrote:I'm quite entry level in all regards but you gotta start somewhere i guess. Here's 2 loops that aren't finished at all! Hell yeah!
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Reason 4.
I like it, but could do with adjusting the vocals volume, can't hear it all that well

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Post by WillP » Fri Dec 04, 2009 7:15 pm

Here's two of some work-in-progress Dubstep (:

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Share thoughts (:

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Post by tavravlavish » Fri Dec 04, 2009 8:51 pm

WillP wrote:Here's two of some work-in-progress Dubstep (:

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Share thoughts (:
comment on other peoples tracks first asshole :)

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Post by tavravlavish » Fri Dec 04, 2009 8:52 pm

Dwaggy wrote:I'm quite entry level in all regards but you gotta start somewhere i guess. Here's 2 loops that aren't finished at all! Hell yeah!
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Reason 4.
comment on other peoples tracks before posting your own

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Post by tavravlavish » Fri Dec 04, 2009 8:56 pm

dj_yeoku wrote:Soundcloud
think if everyone just posted tunes with out giving other people helpful input, we would just have a bunch of half finished tunes in this thread, everybody do your part. :w:

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Post by Dwaggy » Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:15 pm

tavravlavish wrote:
Dwaggy wrote:I'm quite entry level in all regards but you gotta start somewhere i guess. Here's 2 loops that aren't finished at all! Hell yeah!
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Reason 4.
comment on other peoples tracks before posting your own
Sorry! will do :] I thought it'd be rude of me to comment on someone's production when i'm literally just starting. :-/

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Post by cynical » Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:28 pm

WillP wrote:Here's two of some work-in-progress Dubstep (:

Soundcloud

Share thoughts (:
It sounds nice but I think this needs some random edits to liven things up

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Post by JemGrover » Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:17 am

Dwaggy wrote:I'm quite entry level in all regards but you gotta start somewhere i guess. Here's 2 loops that aren't finished at all! Hell yeah!
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Reason 4.
Interesting hi-hats in places ( the shuffly bits? ) Not amazingly sure they fit with the mood of the track, as they kind of... throw off the rhythm of the track & loses the drive? If that makes sense? Other then that, sounding pretty spot on.

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Post by JemGrover » Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:31 am

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Come back to this after 3 weeks, and not to sure if it's really happening...
It's leaning more so towards a certain producer who's name begins with "B", so it's not really Dubstep... But worth finishing? I'm in 2 minds.

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Post by CollisionCourse » Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:39 am

dj_yeoku wrote:Soundcloud
thats pretty good, you got your own different sound going on i like it.
if i was you id lose the presets in future, kind of takes away from the track and makes it sound unprofessional. but thats completely IMO. :D

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