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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by toecutter » Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:08 am

www.myspace.com/toestep

tune on there, need to sort out the accapella for the intro and its not mixed down propperly cus im waiting on some new mmonitor headphones :) (neibours hate bass :@)

anyways tell me what you think :)

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Post by shredexx » Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:19 am

shredexx wrote:Soundcloud
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Working on these... feedback would be cool :)

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Post by junior spesh » Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:40 am

shredexx wrote:
shredexx wrote:Soundcloud
Soundcloud
Working on these... feedback would be cool :)
Oi! im liking, build ups on both are sik...

The second 1 in particular has one nice bassline, kep up the gud work...

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While ur here, could any1 check out & drop feedback on this ^^^^

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Post by shredexx » Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:52 am

Soundcloud

While ur here, could any1 check out & drop feedback on this ^^^^

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yeah man i like it... it sounds a bit strange because it feels like none of the parts are in key with one another... maybe its just my ears being stupid... but thats what im gathering...

also what would sound cool is if you switched up the hihat pattern to mimic the LFO speed of your bassline... its a pretty simple trick and cleans up your beats 10 fold.

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Post by junior spesh » Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:59 am

shredexx wrote:
Soundcloud

While ur here, could any1 check out & drop feedback on this ^^^^

Will be returned people
yeah man i like it... it sounds a bit strange because it feels like none of the parts are in key with one another... maybe its just my ears being stupid... but thats what im gathering...

also what would sound cool is if you switched up the hihat pattern to mimic the LFO speed of your bassline... its a pretty simple trick and cleans up your beats 10 fold.
safe 4 the feedback man, will try do dat..
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Post by polygonfiction » Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:24 am

shredexx wrote:
Soundcloud

While ur here, could any1 check out & drop feedback on this ^^^^

Will be returned people
yeah man i like it... it sounds a bit strange because it feels like none of the parts are in key with one another... maybe its just my ears being stupid... but thats what im gathering...

also what would sound cool is if you switched up the hihat pattern to mimic the LFO speed of your bassline... its a pretty simple trick and cleans up your beats 10 fold.

I agree about the melody.

Maybe also find some percussion samples with more variation in timbre - I feel like I've heard this measure in plenty of stuff before. Cowbells, shakers, even just snare rims can easily raise your beats to something more personal/inventive.

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polygonfiction wrote:Been working on this since last night. What d'you reckon, peeps?

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im loving this one big time man the percussion lines are top rank PM me when u finish id love a copy
Thanks man will do.

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Post by stealthtactics » Sun Dec 06, 2009 3:07 pm

Hey, This is a track I'm putting together right now. Still gonna edit the structure and add a 2nd bassline to switch it up etc...
Feedback is much appreciated ;)

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Post by CollisionCourse » Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:08 pm

stealthtactics wrote:Hey, This is a track I'm putting together right now. Still gonna edit the structure and add a 2nd bassline to switch it up etc...
Feedback is much appreciated ;)

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thats sick mate, the sample sounds familiar
is it from rza ft mf doom - biochemical equation?

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Post by stealthtactics » Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:48 pm

CollisionCourse wrote:
stealthtactics wrote:Hey, This is a track I'm putting together right now. Still gonna edit the structure and add a 2nd bassline to switch it up etc...
Feedback is much appreciated ;)

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thats sick mate, the sample sounds familiar
is it from rza ft mf doom - biochemical equation?
Cheers dude! Spot on, yeah thats the tune I sampled.. ;)

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Post by miniweapon » Sun Dec 06, 2009 8:21 pm

i really like this tune i made but the sounds not Crisp enough. How can i fix this?????

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Post by toecutter » Sun Dec 06, 2009 8:57 pm

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not mixed down, and doesnt have an accapella atm.

waiting on new headphones :)

feedback pleaseee :D

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Post by polygonfiction » Sun Dec 06, 2009 9:06 pm

miniweapon wrote:i really like this tune i made but the sounds not Crisp enough. How can i fix this?????

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I had this problem until recently, although to be fair yours doesn't sound all that lacking treble. I found that getting the right samples was key. In terms of drums, as the production bible rightly instructs - spend the time to layer up elements of your percussion. Like the punch of that snare? Keep the attack, but combine it with the bassy reverb of that other snare you've found somewhere else. Export that as its own sample, then for the kick, and so on.

TBH, the killer in most production is copy/paste. Ypu can hear straight off when someone's duplicating elements to stretch out across the minutes. I do it all the time but I'm trying to stop myself. Its like the difference between a Photoshop filter and a handdrawn sketch - we can feel when time's gone in to every second and every detail of a tune. Try spending a day putting breaks and alternate patterns for your drums, it'll work wonders.

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Post by junior spesh » Sun Dec 06, 2009 9:53 pm

polygonfiction wrote:
miniweapon wrote:i really like this tune i made but the sounds not Crisp enough. How can i fix this?????

Soundcloud

I had this problem until recently, although to be fair yours doesn't sound all that lacking treble. I found that getting the right samples was key. In terms of drums, as the production bible rightly instructs - spend the time to layer up elements of your percussion. Like the punch of that snare? Keep the attack, but combine it with the bassy reverb of that other snare you've found somewhere else. Export that as its own sample, then for the kick, and so on.

TBH, the killer in most production is copy/paste. Ypu can hear straight off when someone's duplicating elements to stretch out across the minutes. I do it all the time but I'm trying to stop myself. Its like the difference between a Photoshop filter and a handdrawn sketch - we can feel when time's gone in to every second and every detail of a tune. Try spending a day putting breaks and alternate patterns for your drums, it'll work wonders.
Rah, proper in depth feedback...

I agree wid him doe...

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Post by dj_yeoku » Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:01 pm

JemGrover wrote:
jaydot wrote:Very first effort, messing around with some software. I have never produced anything before (it tells!) and it's a little repetitive but:

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Got the general idea down... Just keep on playing with the LFO and you'll soon get an idea of how to change stuff up, along with beefing up the snare & kicks with EQ ( but that all comes down to experience and there's much better advice from other people elsewhere on here, haha )

layer the snare a little more, in dubstep its really gotta smack you in the face, also a lead line every now and again would be good
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Post by toecutter » Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:07 pm

junior spesh wrote:
shredexx wrote:
shredexx wrote:Soundcloud
Soundcloud
Working on these... feedback would be cool :)
Oi! im liking, build ups on both are sik...

The second 1 in particular has one nice bassline, kep up the gud work...

Soundcloud

While ur here, could any1 check out & drop feedback on this ^^^^

Will be returned people
Love it man, both evil.. build ups are amazing.

check my tune out give me some feedback back, no one seems to be giving it to me :| bad times

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Post by miniweapon » Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:53 am

polygonfiction wrote:
miniweapon wrote:i really like this tune i made but the sounds not Crisp enough. How can i fix this?????

Soundcloud

I had this problem until recently, although to be fair yours doesn't sound all that lacking treble. I found that getting the right samples was key. In terms of drums, as the production bible rightly instructs - spend the time to layer up elements of your percussion. Like the punch of that snare? Keep the attack, but combine it with the bassy reverb of that other snare you've found somewhere else. Export that as its own sample, then for the kick, and so on.

TBH, the killer in most production is copy/paste. Ypu can hear straight off when someone's duplicating elements to stretch out across the minutes. I do it all the time but I'm trying to stop myself. Its like the difference between a Photoshop filter and a handdrawn sketch - we can feel when time's gone in to every second and every detail of a tune. Try spending a day putting breaks and alternate patterns for your drums, it'll work wonders.
thanks man i will work on it and update

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Post by JemGrover » Mon Dec 07, 2009 2:41 am

miniweapon wrote:
polygonfiction wrote:
miniweapon wrote:i really like this tune i made but the sounds not Crisp enough. How can i fix this?????

Soundcloud

I had this problem until recently, although to be fair yours doesn't sound all that lacking treble. I found that getting the right samples was key. In terms of drums, as the production bible rightly instructs - spend the time to layer up elements of your percussion. Like the punch of that snare? Keep the attack, but combine it with the bassy reverb of that other snare you've found somewhere else. Export that as its own sample, then for the kick, and so on.

TBH, the killer in most production is copy/paste. Ypu can hear straight off when someone's duplicating elements to stretch out across the minutes. I do it all the time but I'm trying to stop myself. Its like the difference between a Photoshop filter and a handdrawn sketch - we can feel when time's gone in to every second and every detail of a tune. Try spending a day putting breaks and alternate patterns for your drums, it'll work wonders.
thanks man i will work on it and update
Mm, I'm no expert mind, but the snare could do with some layering, although mainly wanted to say it was nice to here something a little different to a transformer-esque sound. Really nice vibe to it, I like it!

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Post by rdub » Mon Dec 07, 2009 6:39 am

Here's some drums and a pad I put together today for a track I am new to dubstep production so positive crits would be nice.

http://www14.zippyshare.com/v/22205275/file.html

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Post by MUD DUX » Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:31 am

yo

let me know what you think

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H-eDEwugZxo

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Post by jaydot » Mon Dec 07, 2009 3:16 pm

miniweapon wrote:i really like this tune i made but the sounds not Crisp enough. How can i fix this?????

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Really good effort. Nice one
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