thats tight bruv! i would keep same bass line but just drop it low. sounds good so far. 15?!!mashmash wrote:hey, i'm looking for some feedback with this song i'm trying to make. it's only short and work in progress and i'm not really sure what to make of it. i started producing my own tunes a couple of weeks ago using reason and i'm 15 years old so any feedback would be appreciated, thanks!![]()
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should i keep the ride cymbal when the bass drops??? or just have the hats run through??
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yes and also the kicks seems to flabby for the track, i think nice n punchy would go betterchristthetiger wrote:should i keep the ride cymbal when the bass drops??? or just have the hats run through??
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kotku wrote:if something sounds like shit and is not pop then it's techno, or is this definition flawed aswell?
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james brown - pappa's got a brand new bag re-edit not sure about this one
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rough idea no levels or mixing done yet, and why i need some dub horns
rough idea no levels or mixing done yet, and why i need some dub horns
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pon the DLdeadly habit wrote:https://www.yousendit.com/download/MVNj ... WUNGa1E9PQ
rough idea no levels or mixing done yet, and why i need some dub horns
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anyone?
kotku wrote:if something sounds like shit and is not pop then it's techno, or is this definition flawed aswell?
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... anyone? >__>ZeroNova wrote:I'd like some feedback aswell.. (I posted earlier, yet, i didnt recieved any >_> )
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deadly habit wrote:https://www.yousendit.com/download/MVNj ... WUNGa1E9PQ
rough idea no levels or mixing done yet, and why i need some dub horns
its a sick start, i like that bass alot. maybe with the chord progression instead of going down the scale, like if it were G to E in one bar, then go D back to E?
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Here's a link to a beat i started today
http://www.sendspace.com/file/ben7f8
Let me know what you think
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MY 1st POST
I found myself on the dubstepforum quite often so I finally decided to join the community! I also started this beat and wanted some constructive criticism on the sound and feel, its a quick 30sec clip which should do(workin on intros and buildups) any thoughts would be appreciated, thanks.
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I found myself on the dubstepforum quite often so I finally decided to join the community! I also started this beat and wanted some constructive criticism on the sound and feel, its a quick 30sec clip which should do(workin on intros and buildups) any thoughts would be appreciated, thanks.
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rhaaatid!! Tunes siiik bruv, since u ent reli arranged or finished it i dnt reli fink i hav anything 2 say reagrding feedback but yh, PENG TRACK!ph0nics wrote:MY 1st POST
I found myself on the dubstepforum quite often so I finally decided to join the community! I also started this beat and wanted some constructive criticism on the sound and feel, its a quick 30sec clip which should do(workin on intros and buildups) any thoughts would be appreciated, thanks.
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