WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

[BevOh]

@wizardd the sounds in this are fuckin awesome put together really nice. only thing id do is give the snare a bit more punch.
@bensjoneslikewhoa the vibe at the start is huge does sound a bit disjointed though but i think thats just cos the filter opens up so much. not too keen on the last bass section it's too restricted or something when the rest of the track is pretty huge. clean drums aswell man.
@noisestorm really nice tune man. shitloads of energy. don't think i can fault anything besides needing to be mixed and mastered but that will come in time i guess.

started this tonight
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[Swaggr]

@Noisestorm again bringing out a sick tune! nice one man
@Specimen Yarp your song and that little drop are both sick, love em
@Atticuh cool piano riffs, but it seems like the intro goes on for too long without drums or anything. drops kinda weird, im not too into high pitch wobbles like that
heres one i made yesterday, 150 bpm
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[Mannyyyyy]

@swaggr - fix your mix and also add some grit to your basses cause they sound plain, and compress your basses together so they can gel together and get the same processing.
Your drums sound tight just maybe make them more prominent cause they sound like they can get bigger.

@Bevoh - Make your drums bigger, Theyre not as loud and the song would benefit if you had your Drums bigger. The bass sounds are pretty cool,not too much of a high picthed fan but they sound pretty sick to me. Only thing is the drums could become more stronger

@kidstrange - like the song man the strings are super nice and its just an all around nice piece, no feedback really just a sick tune

now my new track is different then dubstep, ITS DNB, its my first drum n bass neurofunk song and just need some feedback
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[kidstrange]

@Mannyyyyy what song where you talking about i posted 2 ...yours- like the sample nice intro man like the drop. snare sounds a little dry for my taste needs a little more punch other than that very good start man.

[wizardd]

@bevoh OoO that is dirty hahhahah hahahahha funny cause i made an electro with a moaning sound its so fucking legit hahahaha maybe use the pleasure sound not as much and before the drop and a little after the drop too idk do it how you like it man dont listen to me hahahahha its up to you to make what you want to make man keep it up!!!

@Swaggr Really smooth an solid hahaha i like how focused it is on the main bassline that when other bass sounds come in they are kicked back into order into the main bassline hahahaha

@manny my only question is wheres the rest?!??!?!?! :O sweet track mate

[useded]

http://soundcloud.com/young-bee/tickled

[Ezzcal]

here is abit of something new i have been working on, just gotta get vocals recorded at some point.

All feedback welcome

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[lowphat]

@Swaggr - Lovin those pads in the background man. I think your wobbles need something else, a bit more.. thickness? They're missing something, perhaps try and add something to it to make it more "full". Apart from that, awesome mate.

@Malleus - Fucking awesome mate, please finish this tune!!

@BenJonesLikeWhoa - Awesome bassline mate, really gritty. In my opinion, the snare needs more presence and impact. Keep it up mate.

Well, a new WiP from me, been working on it for about 2 weeks now, let me know what you all think!

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Cheers,

Sam

[Ezzcal]

@Lowphatt - yeh man sounds funk but could do with abit of a switchup with drum pattern @ 2:30 , i think some tape stops and bitcrush'n would be abit cool to throw up into the mix too

[jetpack]

@Mannyyyyy
Very nice. The intro is a bit long, but that's nothing. Drop is dirty and it sounds well mixed. Good stuff!

@Swaggr
I'm digging this! I agree that the bass could be a tiny bit fatter. Sounds very good!

@GV1
The Octatrack is so dope. I love the possibilities. I'd like to see some switchups or something to break it up a bit. Excited to see where you take it.

Flowing bassline, 115 BPM. Keeping it chill and spacey.

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[Ezzcal]

@ jetpack - dude layer the bass with something with abit more body (start with a pulse wave and go from there ) and kik probs needs to be layers sounds abit tidy, and those chord stabs/ lead could probs come down in vol and be layered they allso sound pretty small. personly i would hpf it

[jetpack]

@ jetpack - dude layer the bass with something with abit more body (start with a pulse wave and go from there ) and kik probs needs to be layers sounds abit tidy, and those chord stabs/ lead could probs come down in vol and be layered they allso sound pretty small. personly i would hpf it

Thanks for the feedback

BTW, Sick tune in your sig. Great kick.

[jetpack]

Made some quick EQ changes.

115 BPM, flowing bassline.

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[GV1]

@GV1
The Octatrack is so dope. I love the possibilities. I'd like to see some switchups or something to break it up a bit. Excited to see where you take it.

Yeah for sure. It's a great bit of kit.

Never done house, but will certainly switch things up and complete the track. The bass sample was from an ed sheran track, the vocal sample is JME, the lead part running through was the same sample from my video. It's great what you can with samples though, nobody would ever know where any of them come from.

[Noisestorm]

Thanks for the feedback everyone! I'll get my tune mixed and mastered!

[I Am Cook]

@Jetpack : your drums sound good, the sampler comes a bit suddenly but the bass is sweet.

@lowphat : The ambiance you create is really interesting, but some parts sounds a bit empty

@manyyyyy : The sample is sweet but many a bit long, but it depends of the length of the tracks, the drop is really crazy but i think the drums aren't sooooo D&B, many you should use more hihats/ride cymbals, but good job !


Here is my track made with Reason 5 :

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[Swaggr]

@jetpack love every part of this, sick drums, chill basslines good job man
@lowphat awesome atmosphere, pretty original, nice one :3
@Mannyyy wiiicked drop, love it

Heres an update on my latest WIP, enjoy
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[Burgeamon]

Hey there peeps.. would love some feedback on this WIP. Lots of strings before the filth.

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[E-T-F]

Burgeamon - nice sting sample, and build up i think i would make the hi hats abit more present in the mix they seem abit lost to me, yeah and as far as the drop goes id steer clear of the 'Yoi' sound its been rinsed by evverryone but that other one that plays after it is pretty grimmeeyyy

swaggr - nice intro, it might just be me but i just love high frequency snappy snares, thats all i can give on the drums really, not keen on the low end sounds, mainly because i think the rest of the song takes care of that, Bass, Kick, mid etc, but yeah, sounding promising so far

i am cook - work on yo drums man! you've got some nice sample choices there but mix them up abit, and the mid range is overpowering evverrything in that song, tone it down man!

feedback on the tune in the sig would be good!

much love

[Standby]

@FluidMoShun Re: evolutions..... Fuckin deep. a nice bit of actual music. love the way you bring in the filth. i reckon a couple of touch ups on eq for the piano and the bass you use on the 4th bar into the dirty drop. really good. listening to it loads!!!

@johnkimble questions and warlord are obviously both going to be bangers when they're finished. levels need a bit of work, you can proper hear it peaking when the kick hits in warlord. maybe pan stuff a little more aswell to get a better field. apart from that i really wanna hear the finished versions. if they were released, i'd buy them!!

@projekt Re: Hold on..... New favourite. easily the best thing i've heard on here. maybe bring the kick back a bit so it fits in with the rest of the kit a little bit better, bit more bass would be lovely and you've easily got room to get some nice high end twinkly shit going on past the last drop(which i reckon its lacking). everything sounds crisp. love the sample aswell. top notch shit right here. Re: Changes........You've done it again mate. quality production. just the kick again in my opinion.

@BudSpencertron. Re: Sky 1...... nice deep vibe on this. you got any better drum samples you could use. patterns good but i ain't too keen on the kit itself. is it peaking. can't tell if its the drum sounds or if you're levels are too high. either way nice work man!

BRAND NEW WIP (Collab with ma boy Wizeguy)
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