FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

[victoryaloy]

@ IanMassoth: the vocals were done by me, with the help of camel space!
drip is very chill.. not my style but I actually listened to it a few times to see of there was anything I could recommend.. but every time I got lost in the vibe.. good track!

@ Rolaz: thanks for the feedback.. I appreciate it. Let me know if you want to remix it,. I could send you stems, a 320, or whatever!! Let me know!

@ noizy parka: thanks! About the sub in Conundrum.. that seems to be my biggest problem.. I get it to where it sounds good on my cans.. but then if I play it threw cheep in-ears the sub sounds way to heavy, but if I play it threw my monitors it sounds like the sub could use a little boots! I think I just have to get use to my gear!
(sweet-cycle) the synth that comes in around 1:25 seem just a tad weak, but other than that nice track!!

@ synthlf: nice tune.. maybe try adding some syncopation in the higher end percussion.. bring in a new element ever know and that compliments the clap.

@ buddstep: I really liked the kick.. I’m feeling a contrasting melody a little after 1:45 would bring a little more flavor to the tune.. I liked it.. good job!

[noizy parka]

@bugsky (mad as hell)

Appreciated the feedback man, and agreed on the changes needed. Now for your tune, I liked it nice rolling and trippy.. I would consider a little switch up, a bridge of some sort, but your rolling nice vibes and overall its good work. Nice one

[Colourless]

Two tracks, I think ive found a genre to work on from now, take a listen, give me feedback, and of course ill return it all.
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[Project_B]

http://soundcloud.com/capturepoint/capt ... -the-scene

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Two tracks in one month, un heard of!

On the Headhunter, XI, Orphan101 kinda style.... Enjoy. I hope.

[ObsidiaMusic]

I have just completed my Dubstep remix of Requiem For A Dream. I know it has been done before... many times, but I love the soundtrack!



Enjoy! I will be giving some feedback later on for you guys!

[Mortal]

@colourless
you seem to be laying some nice sounds down. now work on some structure,
have more of an intro building up a little tension before the drop, and then
obviously follow up with the drop, as at the moment it just seems like the mid section
of a song. keep at it and listen to other peoples stuff, you will soon pick up how
to build up to a drop.

@Project_B
im digging your sound. its got a nice deep grimey feel to it.
got a nice little melody going on aswell. good stuff!

@obsidia
very nice build up, nice and atmospheric.
im loving that sub aswell, nice and powerful. havnt really got any negatives
or criticisms on this. just keep doing what you do

[fassyman]

@obsidia - really nice intro sound very tight production wise. my only critisism would be that it dosnt feel very danceable. (also requiem for a dream is sick)

@project b - gettin dark vibes of this one. big up

@bugsky - like the sample. the second drop is sweet as fuck. well produced and clear. nothing bad to say


Heres my new one. nice and deep. its unmastered so turn it up a little

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[GRAYSKALE]

@ Colourless - on track 1: Loving the 2563/headhunter vibes on this one - the bass sound is really chunky - needs to be mixed a bit better though - the LP'd pad sounds are getting lost in the mix - try compressing maybe to counter act the volume loss or more maybe more subtle LP shifts - the ideas are all there though the tune is a good 'un!!
on track 2: this one has a cool techy feel to it that Im digging - getting into a lot of techtonic boys stuff at the momen and this defo echoes some of their work - this track sounds much more polished than the first though, again, some bits are coming across as over powering - perhaps have a look through macc's ecellent thread on gain structure - altogther though really nice creative stuff going on here keep up the work!!

@ Project_B - this tune is really smooth and has a nice flow to it - not really much to say in terms of criticism - perhaps the bass could do with being just a touch quiter to let the track breath a little - altogether though chillout vibes are real nice on this one - likin' it alot!!

@ Obsidia_Music - this one is gonna give me nightmares - lol - creepy stuff - really tight though and mastered to a really nice level - the basses and atmospherics sound fucking huge!! really polished sounding track - not really my style but I've gotta say I cant really fault it at all - sounds really good!!

@fassyman - love that sample bro (my mistake if its not a sample) - the percussion is spot on aswell sounds really crisp and has alot of bite - bit reminiscent of pinch style percussions though you defo have something original going on here - atmospherics are haunting but mellow - production wise no faults - in fact would love a 320 when its mastered if you'd be so kind?

here's mine - as I said earlier been getting into the more techy dubstep recently so this one kinda reflects that influence - its really really loosely dubstep though - bordering more on the techno side of the dividing line -

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[joemakin]

finished this now well i think i have. im having major issues with the sub so yea could do with some feedback please. but i hope ya like the idea of the track.
thanks everyone.

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[Holda]

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[Project_B]

Cheers for the comments everyone, always appreciated!

[jakerobert]

in hopes of getting some more feedback, I'm giving more out.

@GRAYSKALE - I thought your tune had some nice original ideas when it came to percussion and I liked the way the wobble was rather mellow, rather than sticking right out of the mix like it all too often does these days. Not sure its really my style but it is always cool to hear crossover shit.

@fassyman - i dig the flute samples and percussion in the intro very much! when the first kicks and claps come in its just soooo delicious. The beat is minimalist but solid. Overall BIG tune!

@bugsky - the film sample is hilarious! i cant remember the name of the film but what a classic line! Otherwise I felt like this tune dragged a bit for me, maybe change it up a little? its clear you know your shit when it comes to production but I think its a common mistake for us producers to let things go on a bit too long.

@synthif - daaammmn! really feeling this track. the vibes are soo chill and everything sounds clean and tight. when the music drops out for a bit nd then comes right back its classic tension and release.

@noizy parka - love the bleeps and the overall feeling of the track. drums were well-edited and had a nice punch. A cool track! I can imagine myself jamming out to it in the car.

heres mine then, fb much appreciated and will be returned.

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[Galbm]

@fassyman - this track got a lot of potenital bro...i didnt liked da snares and too much..keep it up tho!

@synthif - when you hear this song you get to your head - " VIBES VIBES VIBES " hahah i love it..cool sound m8 =]

Here is my latest tune..Would like to get your feedbacks...cheeers
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[tripwire22]

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finally finished i guess i cant think of anything to add

[X HertZ]

@ Holda (im Hard), really like this, darkish and cheeky the double time switch is nice. the only critique is that i like
a lot of FX in tracks, speccially in breakdowns.

@ galbm- cool intro pads and vocal stabs,very nice and fat kik/snare here, but the hats seem a lil lost on the mix and
hats can really bring out the counter rhythms in the track, bassline are really well grafted really nice rewind fx, a bit
grimey style wise for me at the mo, but a good HQ production none-the-less. keep it up!!

@ tripwire\Kaiori

really cool tracks here"lost Metro" is V good, really into this can hardly hear the lo end as on in earphones
(really not the right thing for this)

"forever" is really nice and floaty really deep feel. good stuff i like the keys in the second secion and the synths
work really well

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[rhek]

@ Mortal - Proper deep sound. Sub is wicked, drums are tight. I reckon it needs a minimal lead line over the top to proper complete the tune.

@ Grayskale - Likin it. Love the Nintendo/warp vibes. Wicked drum pattern. Got that hypafunk sound down. Would def play this out.

@ JoeMakin - Can definetly hear the sound your going for. Awesome intro. Spend more time refining the drums and the synth work on the drop.

@ Galbm - Wicked intro. Nice E/D sounds. Punchy.

@ XHertz - Pro sounding. Some of the notes on that arp intro go out of scale at points. Punchy drop. Nice sub. I would've used more of a saw, clean fuzz sound for the mid-range myself but thats just my opinion. Nice melodies tho.


Started this yesterday - NOT MASTERED YET! - Soundcloud

[GRAYSKALE]

@ rhek - cheers for the feedback on my track - you can grab yourself a 320 on my soundcloud if you want bro - as for your track I'm really digging it - everything sounds tight as fuck, loving that bass!! hit me up when you get it mastered bro would love to here the finished version of this tune!!

[harry179]

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[noizy parka]

ez harry.. This area is for people who give feedback on other peoples tracks to get feedback... all you need to do is give about 3 people feedback on there tunes... bits you liked, bits you didnt like, doesnt have to be to technical if your a newbie, but even someone who has never made a beat can say whether they like a tune or not, and sometimes that type of perspective is the most sought. so if your looking for feedback, drop some feedback to the other people on here, you'll find youll then get some back.....

Dropping of a tune with no contribution what so ever is somthing for the DUBs Section, upload your tune there, good luck getting anyone to listen

Peace

[harry179]

oh seeen
my bad mate, never used this forum before
sorry bout that, cheers for reply