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[Bodega]

Some more melodic stuff for you. Curious to know if it sounds like any particular label or style.

thanks!
Matthew

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[riproarious]

Hey,

One of my first tracks, I have my own opinions on what is needed etc.
But I dont want to bias your responses

-What do you guys think lacks / is needed?


http://soundcloud.com/riproarious/low-dub

[riproarious]

what does this track need it sounds so boring and 2-dimensional, can someone push me in the right direction please

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Try adding some bass or sub-bass.
What are you using?

[hideouz]

Reason, how should the tune of the bass go with the rest of the song?

[jaydot]

Clip of one I've been working on.... anyone know how to get the sound better cos it sounds fine in windows media but not on Soundcloud?

Opinions welcome.

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[hideouz]

If saving it as MP3 make sure its 320kbps.

[cyberneticghost]

Reason, how should the tune of the bass go with the rest of the song?

You could have the sub bass mirror the lead/mid bass you have going or you could have the sub be composed of the same notes in a different sequence. It's really up to you man.

[cyberneticghost]

Hey,

One of my first tracks, I have my own opinions on what is needed etc.
But I dont want to bias your responses

-What do you guys think lacks / is needed?


http://soundcloud.com/riproarious/low-dub

It felt a little empty to me so I would say add some other elements like a pad, lead or more percussion. Other than that it seems like you have a good start.

[cyberneticghost]

This is an extreme work in progress. I just started it tonight and have yet to do a proper mixdown. I just have it mixed so that you can hear the basics, but it is kind of muddy at parts. I was just wondering if anyone had any suggestions.

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Cheers,

Cyberneticghost

[brettheaslewood]

This is an extreme work in progress. I just started it tonight and have yet to do a proper mixdown. I just have it mixed so that you can hear the basics, but it is kind of muddy at parts. I was just wondering if anyone had any suggestions.

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Cheers,

Cyberneticghost

really liking the skatty feel of this
gimmey a shout when final mix is down

[jam1]

My first attempt at making a tune. Pretty simple stuff, all done in Reason 4. Let me know what you think please guys!

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[krusade]

Howdy, another in progress twisted from an earlier project in the persuit of more tasty basslines. (Don't judge the structure, just trying to get ideas down).

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Let me know what you think, be harshly critical

Danke

[Bodega]

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Let me know what you think, be harshly critical

Well, ok.

1) there's a stereo spatialiser or some sort of stereo chorus across the bassline - it's hideous. Try listening to it in mono and the mix completely changes.

2) the bassline's too loud: it's taking over the mix so you can barely hear the drums. Perhaps because you can barely hear them, the drums sound like crap.

Harsh enough? I could be harder on you, but then I'd just be trying to hurt your feelings.

[Bodega]

My first attempt at making a tune. Pretty simple stuff, all done in Reason 4. Let me know what you think please guys!

That would be improved immensely if the snare were somehow different. Either a different sample, more high end, or maybe some reverb. Or all of the above.

Just a thought.

[riproarious]

Feedback??

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[stux]

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any idea what the fuck i can do for an intro for this? also needs more stuff but the intro is what im stuck on right now

[aspect-dubz]

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haven't upped anything in ages so i thought I'd post this up.

[acid2]

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Had a break from the wonders of production for a good half a year. Still away from my actual studio with nothing but a laptop and headphones atm, but this is what I've got down so far. Not sure it's worth carrying on, but a pleasent little snippet to me

[jam1]

My first attempt at making a tune. Pretty simple stuff, all done in Reason 4. Let me know what you think please guys!

That would be improved immensely if the snare were somehow different. Either a different sample, more high end, or maybe some reverb. Or all of the above.

Just a thought.

Thanks for the feedback mate. I hear what you're saying on the snare. I'm happy with the actual samples I've used (two snares and a clap layered) but I'm gunna play around with some reverb and EQ and see how it sounds. Cheers!

[bengreen]

Hey my newest beat my first proper try at dubstep, im using fruity loops
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Can you give me some tips on how to improve that? its not finished yet so thats why its short.
cheers