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- christthetiger
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sick bassdj_yeoku wrote:Loving The Bassline, Real HeavyHey mate, my name is Neon Ordnance and I'm a dustep producer/dj from Edinburgh. This is a start. You've got the drums down, which is good because that's often one of the toughest parts. Maybe add some more hats and change up the pattern from time to time, but they sound fine. Your bass is off, i recommend getting Albino 3 and making a "Reese" bass sound to start with. Here's a tutorial: http://www.musicradar.com/tuition/tech/ ... und-211550
I start pretty much all of my basslines off this sound, and then tweak it by either turning up the saturation, changing some of the sines into different waves, or some combination of the two.
Speaking of which, here's the latest track I've done:
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Needs to be mastered, tightened, etc. but this is the skeleton.
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- deadnoisesystem
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nice bass work, heavy and complex.goodeh wrote:Soundcloud
i've been trying to make a datsik style bass in flstudio, i used sytrus, love filter, some delay and reverb, and Sugar Bytes Effectrix.
no where near finished, but tell me what you think
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nice bass and melody lines, youre right, lose the chantingcrackf wrote:man im really feeling this song, liked the drum patterns, subtle melodies nothing too in your face real smooth100man wrote:Hello everyone, happy new year! haven't been on here in ages cos i've been away, but i've been back for about a week and started on this tune. i've got most of it done like but it needs more eqing and basic tidying up i think.
what do yous reckon?
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i was going for a sort of headhuntery type... bit trippy and bit sort of repetitive but in like a flowing progressive way. make sure u listen to the second drop, there's a kind of weird melody bit that comes in
maybe it didnt need that voice sample at the start though? perhaps if it was changed to something more distorted and trippy like the song
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very much enjoyed this so far. perhaps you could add a little more of a slight melody, nothing too much, but i think thats what it lacks... very nice though (Y)
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cheers mate, funny i am working on a melody on a dub melodica as we speakcrackf wrote:very much enjoyed this so far. perhaps you could add a little more of a slight melody, nothing too much, but i think thats what it lacks... very nice though (Y)
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Not technically dubstep but plenty bassy and wobbles galore. Doing it for a remix competition.
Some transitions aren't fleshed out yet, and I've left some ideas in progress, but the basic structure is there and it's sounding pretty darn good I think.
I'd appreciate any comments and critiques people have to make.
Not technically dubstep but plenty bassy and wobbles galore. Doing it for a remix competition.
Some transitions aren't fleshed out yet, and I've left some ideas in progress, but the basic structure is there and it's sounding pretty darn good I think.
I'd appreciate any comments and critiques people have to make.
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so ive been working on a few different things, thought id see what people thought of this so far. ive decided to change bits of the melody after the drop, and maybe a bit more of a substanced break before it, but yeah what dya think?
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cheeeeers all!
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cheeeeers all!
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nice track, bass gives it a proper edgerook wrote:Soundcloud
Not technically dubstep but plenty bassy and wobbles galore. Doing it for a remix competition.
Some transitions aren't fleshed out yet, and I've left some ideas in progress, but the basic structure is there and it's sounding pretty darn good I think.
I'd appreciate any comments and critiques people have to make.
what software you using?
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yeah mate,i like that a lotcrackf wrote:so ive been working on a few different things, thought id see what people thought of this so far. ive decided to change bits of the melody after the drop, and maybe a bit more of a substanced break before it, but yeah what dya think?
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cheeeeers all!
id bring in the syncopated hihats sooner to keep it moving quicker
and add a little bit of swing to the melody parts
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crackf wrote:so ive been working on a few different things, thought id see what people thought of this so far. ive decided to change bits of the melody after the drop, and maybe a bit more of a substanced break before it, but yeah what dya think?
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cheeeeers all!
Want feedback on a track so doing my bit 1st...
yeah this is nice, different from stuff that im hearing at the mo, but the melody works well before and after the drop, i would brighten up the drums with some perc and maybe raise the high end a bit more, some triplet drums on the breaks would sound good too.
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rook wrote:Soundcloud
Not technically dubstep but plenty bassy and wobbles galore. Doing it for a remix competition.
Some transitions aren't fleshed out yet, and I've left some ideas in progress, but the basic structure is there and it's sounding pretty darn good I think.
I'd appreciate any comments and critiques people have to make.
Wow, this is quite a track, the bass is amazing, i think it gets a bit full at 2 minutes, not sure about the vocal/vox/pad thing in there. The drum track could be brought out too, can only just hear the hits, but the programming sounds good still. Real nice vibes mang.
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Cheerschristthetiger wrote:love the drumsketamine wrote:Some new Crap. Check the sig.![]()
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Very good instrument work. Keep going.crackf wrote:so ive been working on a few different things, thought id see what people thought of this so far. ive decided to change bits of the melody after the drop, and maybe a bit more of a substanced break before it, but yeah what dya think?
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cheeeeers all!
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thanks man i will do,ketamine wrote:Very good instrument work. Keep going.crackf wrote:so ive been working on a few different things, thought id see what people thought of this so far. ive decided to change bits of the melody after the drop, and maybe a bit more of a substanced break before it, but yeah what dya think?
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cheeeeers all!
and the tune in your signature is brilliant.. great drum patterns, loved the crazy first drop, and then the nice meaty bassline on the second one (Y) nice work
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firstly thanks for all the feedback guys gonna work in more for sure!
but ive tweaked the drop a little on this one so id like to know whether the song sounds better with a more simple melody or have it little more varied
1:15+
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first one
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second one with a more varied melody
let me know and ima get back to the rest!
but ive tweaked the drop a little on this one so id like to know whether the song sounds better with a more simple melody or have it little more varied
1:15+
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first one
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second one with a more varied melody
let me know and ima get back to the rest!
quatagwangwa wrote:you and crackf are the most coolest
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my bad i put an earlier one up forget about it im just gonna get back to the song 

quatagwangwa wrote:you and crackf are the most coolest
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hi, i know it needs mastering but just so far could i have a bit feedback 
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