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FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
Out on Stoke! well done, great tracks comin from that label.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
Thanks man. yeah a lot of positive vibes coming from that camp!HAACK wrote:
Out on Stoke! well done, great tracks comin from that label.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
lp wrote:Man you know I love this one! Edgy, dark and gritty. As for sounding a bit thin.. maybe a tad but this could be soundclouds fault. A little mastering session could help too though.HAACK wrote:Alright well this one is finally finished, but sounds a bit thin? Goin to have a listen in the car a few times before I settle wit this one.
Track is in signature,
cheers.
I can think of a few things that the track could possibly do with though (I'm being picky). A nice long reverb on the snare (or diff snare) from time to time and a slight quick break (silence) after the 2nd drop somwhere to emphasize one of the midrange bass oh and that snare or hit with the delay that plays at 1:02 could do with standing out in the mix a little more.
Overall though its a great bit of work and I look forward to hearing some more stuff soon.
Definitely will keep you posted.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
@KONTROL - sorry for writing your name in caps but i cba to go back to change. i realy like the intro, i think that synth could be brought up a bit. i like the percussions and the drums pattern overall actually. the bassline is some next level elctro shit and its sick but it needs a little variation, or idk maybe it doesnt lol fuck it. overall i like the way you switch thing around after a a minute into the song, and it continues to progress. you kind of crammed a bit of everything into this and that sample is jokes. only thing id say is youve used automation when its not needed, like faded in the synths when you should of just brought them in on their normal levels. overall i liked it, really different and jesus christ did i just write all of that
@ haack - i love the synth on the intro, this sounds gritty as fuck, i love it. sample is sick aswell, sounds familiar. again i like that you didnt just do a cut n paste job like you kept things moving which i like. the drums i have to say sounds a little thin, maybe EQ those snares and especially the kick. overall good work, my kind of tune
@ depone - vibes man vibes! the synth is catchy as fuck and the those sneaky little background drums keep your head nodding. the different elemens you brought it really sit along nicely together which is a hard thing to do. a good summer tune exactly what we all need! big up
heres my newest, i think its more dancefloor than most of my stuff. also im not sure about the second drop.
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@ haack - i love the synth on the intro, this sounds gritty as fuck, i love it. sample is sick aswell, sounds familiar. again i like that you didnt just do a cut n paste job like you kept things moving which i like. the drums i have to say sounds a little thin, maybe EQ those snares and especially the kick. overall good work, my kind of tune
@ depone - vibes man vibes! the synth is catchy as fuck and the those sneaky little background drums keep your head nodding. the different elemens you brought it really sit along nicely together which is a hard thing to do. a good summer tune exactly what we all need! big up
heres my newest, i think its more dancefloor than most of my stuff. also im not sure about the second drop.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
hey guys, i finished this track, its a attempt for a dark, filmy, industrial tune, which busts out in the end and gets all weird and a little 8bitish. tell me what you think. i have no good monitors around here, in the club i thought, the snares need a bit more push, on the headphones however they sound just fine to me.
thanks mates.
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thanks mates.
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Hey guys I finally got on a computer - before I was posting from my phone , haha .
It would be good to see what you guys think of this song , it's got a dark rolling feel to it - want to put some good energy into this one so I want to get as much feedback as possible in order to fix anything wrong with it !
Thanks
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It would be good to see what you guys think of this song , it's got a dark rolling feel to it - want to put some good energy into this one so I want to get as much feedback as possible in order to fix anything wrong with it !
Thanks

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Hello all, first post on these forums. I've been working on electronic music for some time now, learning how to do what and so on.
Here's the first track I've got to finish, pretty dark I suppose.
http://soundcloud.com/thevirus/temple
Any feedback much appreciated.
Here's the first track I've got to finish, pretty dark I suppose.
http://soundcloud.com/thevirus/temple
Any feedback much appreciated.
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WEIGHTY! Head started noddin when those hats kicked in, heavy track!CollisionCourse wrote: heres my newest, i think its more dancefloor than most of my stuff. also im not sure about the second drop.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
@ depone - vibes man vibes! the synth is catchy as fuck and the those sneaky little background drums keep your head nodding. the different elemens you brought it really sit along nicely together which is a hard thing to do. a good summer tune exactly what we all need! big up
heres my newest, i think its more dancefloor than most of my stuff. also im not sure about the second drop.
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bizzle
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Thanks for the feedback, Its forthcoming on a Stoke album with other artists like Boot, Twisted, Vandera, TKR, Lowmax, Rakoon and more.
@your track.
Wow man this is moody stuff! Great hat lines, but i would have added more hihats on the offbeat, swing it up more.
Like it though
heres my newest, i think its more dancefloor than most of my stuff. also im not sure about the second drop.
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bizzle

Thanks for the feedback, Its forthcoming on a Stoke album with other artists like Boot, Twisted, Vandera, TKR, Lowmax, Rakoon and more.
@your track.
Wow man this is moody stuff! Great hat lines, but i would have added more hihats on the offbeat, swing it up more.
Like it though
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
Just finished this one today, let us know what you think:
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@CollisionCourse Nice, slow and lots of sub. Enjoyed it. If it were me i would choose a bigger snare probably layered with a clap and some heavy reverb.
@NationCharly Pretty cool track. I do not like that bass at all but thats personal preference. Also dude, you should try to leave some feedback for other people aswell...
@frequenzeinlauf Love the intro, mad atmospheres throughout. The end is a bit too wack for me. About the snares, i think they sound fine, could give them more push if you wanted to but id probably leave it.
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@CollisionCourse Nice, slow and lots of sub. Enjoyed it. If it were me i would choose a bigger snare probably layered with a clap and some heavy reverb.
@NationCharly Pretty cool track. I do not like that bass at all but thats personal preference. Also dude, you should try to leave some feedback for other people aswell...
@frequenzeinlauf Love the intro, mad atmospheres throughout. The end is a bit too wack for me. About the snares, i think they sound fine, could give them more push if you wanted to but id probably leave it.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
thanks for the feedback people! @ gabbo yeah the snare sounds a bit thin but it is already layered with a clap so i added a bit of reverb and thought it sounded alright
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Check the 2 Productions in my Signature they were my work in Reason 4, Although I have now moved on to Logic 9 and have got myself KRK VXT8 Monitors & M-Audio Sound Interface for Balanced Studio Quality Audio
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heres my new 1. not actually finished yet but its mostly there. iunno wether to add in some mid bass or keep it pure sub.....
@gabbo - yeha man liked the track. those little breaks are sick and the horns are a nice touch. maybe the bass could be a tad thicker
@g1zzl3 - sounds alright man need to eq more to get everything sounding less muddy. try and make something that dont revolve around big wobbles, these kind or tracks are pretty throw away imo
heres my new 1. not actually finished yet but its mostly there. iunno wether to add in some mid bass or keep it pure sub.....
@gabbo - yeha man liked the track. those little breaks are sick and the horns are a nice touch. maybe the bass could be a tad thicker
@g1zzl3 - sounds alright man need to eq more to get everything sounding less muddy. try and make something that dont revolve around big wobbles, these kind or tracks are pretty throw away imo
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
depone: Nice track mate well done, a very happy tune, i like the congas aswell they make it nice!!
nation charly: feeling the drums, i like the use of panning, like the piano maybe use more of a opening for it, overall
cool tune like the vibes, keep it up bro
fassy man: feeling the eerie flutes and soft percussion, sounds a bit like grime but thats what i like, very moody!!
this tune quite relaxing with nice pianos
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Cheers in advance guys
nation charly: feeling the drums, i like the use of panning, like the piano maybe use more of a opening for it, overall
cool tune like the vibes, keep it up bro
fassy man: feeling the eerie flutes and soft percussion, sounds a bit like grime but thats what i like, very moody!!

this tune quite relaxing with nice pianos
DUSTY SPEAKERS - LET ME
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Cheers in advance guys

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Ahh, the intro on this is so nice. Piano is gorgeous. Was a bit disappointed when it dropped to be fair, don't think the wobz fit the vibe (imo of course). Would have loved some deep sub on this. Really do like those pianos though mate!dustyspeakers wrote:this tune quite relaxing with nice pianos
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Cheers in advance guys

Still looking for some feedback lol...
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
Hey guys I know that there is a give and take vibe here regarding tune feedback , but i'm currently without internet - on my phone to post this - and only get on the internet every now and then at the moment . When my computer gets fixed and i get internet sorted out , i'll give feedback , but until then i can't do much . It would still be appreciated if you guys could give my track some
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I dubbed "Prison" by Eek-A-Mouse and this is the 2nd mix...it's about the prison industrial complex in the estados unidos. Below is the soundcloud track and youtube music video for it.
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