FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
This is my very first dubstep track EVER..i've only been producing now for maybe a month at most. Hope you guys all dig my FIRST track...please leave feedback...I can't get better unless I get some feedback.
Enjoy:Tha Party Ain't Ova
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
@AL4228
Digging this track, really has a nice bass groove. However, for me that intro is way too long at close to a minute. The scream before the drop is real good though. But yea once the track actually starts its good stuff.
Digging this track, really has a nice bass groove. However, for me that intro is way too long at close to a minute. The scream before the drop is real good though. But yea once the track actually starts its good stuff.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
hey i just started making dubstep, tell me what you think of my first tune, feedback would be sick, thanks
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
^^ Goubster, your link is messed up right now, we've chatted 
Finished up a new drumstep bit, feedback appreciated guys!
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Finished up a new drumstep bit, feedback appreciated guys!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Yea had another tell me about the length of the sample. Try'd to find a nice place to cut it off at but decided to just leave the whole thing... Think of it as a history lessonpain wrote:@AL4228
Digging this track, really has a nice bass groove. However, for me that intro is way too long at close to a minute. The scream before the drop is real good though. But yea once the track actually starts its good stuff.

Appreciate the input tho bro, big ups!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
it needs something but i cant quite figure it. help me out!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
I think the pad in the beginning is beatiful and you should use more of that. its good for a first attack at a genre and especially for 1st month of producing. id say focus on getting good at arrangements now.TheBreadMan wrote:This is my very first dubstep track EVER..i've only been producing now for maybe a month at most. Hope you guys all dig my FIRST track...please leave feedback...I can't get better unless I get some feedback.
Enjoy:Tha Party Ain't Ova
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Done two new tracks over the weekend,
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Spaceman is yet to be mastered so is kinda low on the velocity side. Hope you likee
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Spaceman is yet to be mastered so is kinda low on the velocity side. Hope you likee

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
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hello looking for some feedback and possibly a label for this track.
hello looking for some feedback and possibly a label for this track.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Ez guys just finished this one. Was going for the summery feel but added a little wobble to dirty things up. Works really well i think. Feedback appreciated!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
@Hakka
Distant Memory: Intro and main break synth and pads seems off key. Likin the 1st drop very Bare Noize-esque, drums are sick as fuck as well!! Overall production is tight!
The Kingpin: Not sure if the "Ray Keith Terrorist" bass goes with the synth, kinda chalk and cheese. Strong drums once again!
Badman Killa: Really feelin drumstep riddims. Intro's sick! Drop is killah, If anything with what I have heard so far, it's just the synth keys are out slightly.
Keep up the good work

Distant Memory: Intro and main break synth and pads seems off key. Likin the 1st drop very Bare Noize-esque, drums are sick as fuck as well!! Overall production is tight!

The Kingpin: Not sure if the "Ray Keith Terrorist" bass goes with the synth, kinda chalk and cheese. Strong drums once again!
Badman Killa: Really feelin drumstep riddims. Intro's sick! Drop is killah, If anything with what I have heard so far, it's just the synth keys are out slightly.

Keep up the good work


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
hakka wrote:Ez guys just finished this one. Was going for the summery feel but added a little wobble to dirty things up. Works really well i think. Feedback appreciated!
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hey, arent you the guy who shafted funtcase and then said you were gunna knock him out?

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
hey guys,
i am new to this forum, so tell me if im posting stuff in the wrong place!
this is my newest tune... be grateful if you checked it out
http://soundcloud.com/martainnn/no-good
you can check my other stuff out at;
soundcloud.com/martainnn or
youtube.com/martyneatpoo
cheers!
i am new to this forum, so tell me if im posting stuff in the wrong place!
this is my newest tune... be grateful if you checked it out

http://soundcloud.com/martainnn/no-good
you can check my other stuff out at;
soundcloud.com/martainnn or
youtube.com/martyneatpoo
cheers!
check me out at soundcloud.com/martainnn
or youtube.com/martyneatpoo
peace!
or youtube.com/martyneatpoo
peace!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Many moons ago which has all been sorted. I wouldnt call £20 short as shaftedhey, arent you the guy who shafted funtcase and then said you were gunna knock him out?

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
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My very first dubstep track, i have only just started but dropping me sum feedback would be very much apreciated, thanks =)
My very first dubstep track, i have only just started but dropping me sum feedback would be very much apreciated, thanks =)
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Goubster
I think thats great man! Sounds fresh
I think thats great man! Sounds fresh
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
- Goubster : not trying to be a hater or smt, but create something worth posting before just patching up anything you make to full length... About your track: in my ears, you didn't make dubstep , you made a techno beat with a bass and some fx elements and made it last for 6.30 mins. I didn't like it.
- Joma: not bad, you got a melody and a beat, but again same comment as on goubster, make something more. Im not hearing any bass, you just took some cool instruments and put them together for 5.30 mins. Add a bass, some variation and it'll be a pretty decent tune.
- Tain: welcome to the forum! you posted your tune in the right section, here it's considered 'polite' to review some tunes yourself before asking for some feedback (for the next time you post something)
I liked your tune, imo with the vocal you could make a badass epic shaitdrop , yours is plain 'good' , but not special. Bass is nice, and a nice sub aswell.
- Hakka : Deeeep stuff man, i love it. Just boosted my volume and it became twice as nice! Nothing to criticize , maybe a less harsh wobble, but thats taste.
My Syndaesia remix, all finished up, tell me what u think!
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- Joma: not bad, you got a melody and a beat, but again same comment as on goubster, make something more. Im not hearing any bass, you just took some cool instruments and put them together for 5.30 mins. Add a bass, some variation and it'll be a pretty decent tune.
- Tain: welcome to the forum! you posted your tune in the right section, here it's considered 'polite' to review some tunes yourself before asking for some feedback (for the next time you post something)
I liked your tune, imo with the vocal you could make a badass epic shaitdrop , yours is plain 'good' , but not special. Bass is nice, and a nice sub aswell.
- Hakka : Deeeep stuff man, i love it. Just boosted my volume and it became twice as nice! Nothing to criticize , maybe a less harsh wobble, but thats taste.
My Syndaesia remix, all finished up, tell me what u think!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
GOUBSTER!!! where did you get that tune? thats not yours! hahahahahahaha
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