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Post by jaydot » Sun Jan 10, 2010 10:01 pm

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Need to figure out how to sub bass proeperly but here's a remix I did, only my 2nd full track. Hit me up on some feedback.

Nice one.

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Post by mashmash » Sun Jan 10, 2010 11:06 pm

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hey, i'm looking for some feedback as this is my first tune that i am actually going to take seriously and try to finish so any feedback is appreciated :)
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Post by Kochari » Mon Jan 11, 2010 3:24 am

jaydot wrote:Soundcloud

Need to figure out how to sub bass proeperly but here's a remix I did, only my 2nd full track. Hit me up on some feedback.

Nice one.

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Nice, I like the minimal drums, the sub is sounding lovely and warm :D feels like i've just stepped out of the shower!
However, to my ears, the wobble sounds thin and kind of garish, but then i don't like wobble that much anyway so what do i know? :lol: i would make it less busy, keep the track simple and chilled you know.
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Post by IanMassoth » Mon Jan 11, 2010 3:32 am

You're in the wrong genre my friend.
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Post by Kochari » Mon Jan 11, 2010 3:34 am

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Mixed in headphones (its 3.30am here) so probably sounds rubbish. chucked in a massive wobble at the end cuz i was bored.
Would love feedback, the past few tracks i put up had none at all :i: :lol:
much love
My name is Dom and I like making ambientish music and drinking tea. Nice to meet you.

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Post by futurist » Mon Jan 11, 2010 7:33 am

not bad, could be a bit harder but not bad!


Here is my current work in progress:
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Post by jaydot » Mon Jan 11, 2010 11:19 am

IanMassoth wrote:You're in the wrong genre my friend.
Lol, who me?
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Post by deadnoisesystem » Mon Jan 11, 2010 3:13 pm

Kochari wrote:Soundcloud

Mixed in headphones (its 3.30am here) so probably sounds rubbish. chucked in a massive wobble at the end cuz i was bored.
Would love feedback, the past few tracks i put up had none at all :i: :lol:
much love
is nice, id bring in that wobble much sooner
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Post by tripwire22 » Mon Jan 11, 2010 4:22 pm

short little thing i finished this morning well its short though


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Post by mashmash » Mon Jan 11, 2010 9:02 pm

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hey, i've worked on this track a bit more, but never got any feedback last time :( , don't really know what to make of it, it's not finished yet

but any feedback is appreciated :)
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Post by fleche7 » Mon Jan 11, 2010 11:22 pm

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Post by Kochari » Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:25 am

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Kochari wrote:Soundcloud

Mixed in headphones (its 3.30am here) so probably sounds rubbish. chucked in a massive wobble at the end cuz i was bored.
Would love feedback, the past few tracks i put up had none at all :i: :lol:
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is nice, id bring in that wobble much sooner
Really? I was thinking about scrapping the wobble and outting it in another tune, it just sounds really out of place i think.

@tripwire: its nice man. how do you go about writing those pad patterns/bleeps? i've always wanted to make something chilled like that but i struggle getting further then a few nice chords...
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Post by IanMassoth » Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:42 am

This is the wrong place but can someone point me in the direction of where I can learn to make the Yooo, or bwaaa, sound a lot dubstep tunes are using? Such as trolley snatcha's the future it bwahs before every wobble
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Post by Big MD » Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:46 am

this is the actual stadium of the thing which i need help in!

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what would you doo on it, it seems stil too dry!
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Post by bradicle » Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:57 am

futurist wrote:not bad, could be a bit harder but not bad!


Here is my current work in progress:
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No where near done just so everyone knows...
Sounds nice. I like the drums, sounding good.

Bit of something I started, real mellow n chilled.

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Post by adobe » Tue Jan 12, 2010 8:31 am

this is a track i did a while back, im not finished with the bassline but you get the idea..
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MoodSwinginMofo on iItunes/Beatport! There's nothing commercial about this!!
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Post by djaccel » Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:58 am

IanMassoth wrote:This is the wrong place but can someone point me in the direction of where I can learn to make the Yooo, or bwaaa, sound a lot dubstep tunes are using? Such as trolley snatcha's the future it bwahs before every wobble
It's FM synthesis.

Got the latest tune in my sig, check it out and leave some feedback!
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Post by silencer_dub » Tue Jan 12, 2010 12:06 pm

There far from finshed dnt really know what else to add to them www.myspace.com/meansdub
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Post by B_90 » Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:42 pm

Really stuck on a remix im doing of borgore - guided relaxation dub. I dont know were to go with it. Youtube in my sig!
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Post by FMX » Tue Jan 12, 2010 4:46 pm

B-90 wrote:Really stuck on a remix im doing of borgore - guided relaxation dub. I dont know were to go with it. Youtube in my sig!
I think you need to drop out the melody for a bit and have sum striking snare and hats?... then bring in some kind of hook/melody/riff... because just now it feels like its not going anywhere and just floating around the middle. You know what i mean? But i do like the feel.. BIG difference from the original! thats for sure.
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