Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

[dubplateguy]

Alright here are my reviews.

Astral- pretty good song dude, I really liked the intro and the rest was solid too.

Collision Course- Good production, but not really my type of Dub, I found it a little boring, but Im not really a great judge for that type of step.

Wirez- Super catchy track man, loved the synth riff and the bass. Nice work.

[dubplateguy]

Alright I reviewed three tracks now here is my ragga dubstep track.

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[Rickmansworth]

i like the format of the guy ahead of me... heres some reviews.

@dubplateguy - cool samples man. i dig the reggae style! i think the wobble can use some work man-- its a bit weak. the structure needs some work too- variation for the organs is key! you need have a big beefy sub going as well-- its pretty essential for a dub tune. the drop after '6 million ways to die choose one' is wack too!
@continuumdnb - pretty cool tune man... very oldschool vibe with some cool instruments and drum breaks. i think the structure needs some work and that piano loop in the beginning gets a bit old- maybe chop it up a bit?
@dankaczmar - sick tune here. high quality production-- very nice drums, variation and wobbles. this reminds me of some george lenton shit man! i can get down to this shit for sure... good stuff! link me a 320

[Rickmansworth]

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now that the reviews are outta the way, heres my new tune...

[stux]

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now that the reviews are outta the way, heres my new tune...

holy shit the bass line

[stux]

here we go just finished this today. sorted bass compression and made some progressions

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this is great dude, really love the instrumentation and arrangement, it could do with maybe changing it up a bit more after the breakdown but other than that its solid. really loving the feel and sound youve got going.

[stux]

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i only started on this one about 3 hrs ago but am really feeling it but maybe it was to soon to upload but any how
do you think there is to much sub?
all feed back's are welcome!
thanks

could do with a different synth for the intro etc, sounds a bit generic. the wobble could do with some more changes too, even if its just changing the lfo up more.

[stux]

track i finished up this week, its premaster and my mixdowns always come out quiet so you'll want to jack up the volume a bit. i realise its really really brosteppy but i felt like making some for fun.

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[calicolea]

My newest work, unmastered until I have proper speakers for mixdown. All wonderful work and feedback going on here!

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[Rigorous]

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Tune we managed to finish w/ BMF before we move wed

Anyone else have a sec to comment on this?

@Rickmansworth... Dude. Really diggin the tune. The first drop is nice and filthy and that synth work that comes in a bit later is propper

[dankaczmar]

i like the format of the guy ahead of me... heres some reviews.

@dubplateguy - cool samples man. i dig the reggae style! i think the wobble can use some work man-- its a bit weak. the structure needs some work too- variation for the organs is key! you need have a big beefy sub going as well-- its pretty essential for a dub tune. the drop after '6 million ways to die choose one' is wack too!
@continuumdnb - pretty cool tune man... very oldschool vibe with some cool instruments and drum breaks. i think the structure needs some work and that piano loop in the beginning gets a bit old- maybe chop it up a bit?
@dankaczmar - sick tune here. high quality production-- very nice drums, variation and wobbles. this reminds me of some george lenton shit man! i can get down to this shit for sure... good stuff! link me a 320

cheers for the comments dude. il link you up tonight when I get home.

[deadcell]

here we go just finished this today. sorted bass compression and made some progressions

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this is great dude, really love the instrumentation and arrangement, it could do with maybe changing it up a bit more after the breakdown but other than that its solid. really loving the feel and sound youve got going.

cheez bladdd

[cryokinesis]

Hey guys, this is like the first dubstep song i made. I know its not really pr0 but i hope you like it.

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[wirez]

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now that the reviews are outta the way, heres my new tune...

As a track (including the production skills) this was awesome!
A really personal preferential criticism of mine would be that the idea of the track wasn't very original... It sounds like something I've heard before a hundred times (but from the good producers, as opposed to the copious amounts of shit around). But that's really opinionated..

[thierry_le_dj]

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feed back please!
thanks

[dankaczmar]

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feed back please!
thanks

really loud! sick tune, just think that delayed synth sound in the breakdowns is a bit off in terms of in conjunction with the rest of the song. But all in all top stuff.

[Rickmansworth]

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now that the reviews are outta the way, heres my new tune...

As a track (including the production skills) this was awesome!
A really personal preferential criticism of mine would be that the idea of the track wasn't very original... It sounds like something I've heard before a hundred times (but from the good producers, as opposed to the copious amounts of shit around). But that's really opinionated..

hmmm, not original? I was going for a heavy dance floor banger, so I'm sure thats the reason it sounds like something you've heard before... Seems like alot of the bangers out there sound similar. thanks though

[silentk]

@ Dubplateguy

I think the tune needs a lot of work, the wobble is either way to loud and forward in the mix, or way to far back, you need to find a nice middle ground, i think you need to work on getting more variation into your patterns, both the organ and drums are much to repetitive, and overall it doesn't really feel like theres much variation throughout the track.


@ Rickmansworth

Not really my style of track but it's obviously been well executed. The drums are nice and punchy, although i feel the snare could have a little more impact/body.
Other than that i can really fault much else of it (as i said not really my kinda style...) But i think it could do with maybe another synth element to come in after the second drop, some chords or a nice pad or something to fill it out a bit.

@ Deadcell

I really like the samples in the intro and the vibe once it drops, got a really nice groove to it. I'm not sure if its just my speakers but i'm not getting much bass coming through at all? like stux said i think there need to be more variation after the breakdown, bring in something new, make the drum pattern a bit busier, just something to say "look heres the second drop" and help add some progression to the tune.


Here is my most recent, particularly proud of the vocal chops in the breakdown, hope it moves someone
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[stux]

track i finished up this week, its premaster and my mixdowns always come out quiet so you'll want to jack up the volume a bit. i realise its really really brosteppy but i felt like making some for fun.

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I'd love some feedback on this if anyones got a mo. Cheers.

[deadcell]

this is about as brostep as i get right here n its not really at all. finished this earlier. let me know what needs sorting.

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