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silentk · Post by **silentk** » Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:18 pm

DivShare File - Atmos_6_Mix.mp3

dark wobbler

hackman · Post by **hackman** » Sat Feb 14, 2009 6:30 pm

@ critical soundsystem - it definitly has potential, just needs more going on like more parts etc
@ lowpass - nice and aggy!
@ whitestaa - feelin the beat, but i reckon that synth that comes in doin a descending minor chord doesnt really work, its too harsh
@ Inv4sion - bruv really like all of them! would love some 320s??
2 mondays child - love the 2 stepness would dig a copy
@ deadly habit - ashtray jazz is fckin sweet! one thing though, it just doesnt feel like it ever gets anywhere? i reckon if you added some more kicks/snares/hats as it progreses youd be on to a real winner there!
@ subterra - best track on this page of the thread! big up for the freeness
@ silent k - production sounds tight, but i reckon that bass needs a bit more filfth to it, sounds a bit weak at the mo, but decent track!

PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK ON MY NEW TUNE, PAIN, DUBS SECTION IS USELESS, AND BE HONEST, IF YOU THINK SOMETHINGS SHIT SAY IT!!!!!!!!
first in player, www.myspace.com/hackmandub

stevenikke · Post by **stevenikke** » Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:38 pm

hackman wrote: @ deadly habit - ashtray jazz is fckin sweet! one thing though, it just doesnt feel like it ever gets anywhere? i reckon if you added some more kicks/snares/hats as it progreses youd be on to a real winner there!

I feel the same way about this track, maybe not even the adding of snares, kicks and hi-hats. Maybe a little variation every once in a while will do the trick

boomstix · Post by **boomstix** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 12:34 am

all new tracks in the player,

dubby technoey breaky kinda styles, heavy on the 808

http://virb.com/boomstix

if you'd like 320's just pm me with a track title, too easy!

mondays child · Post by **mondays child** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 12:41 am

Hackman cheers for the kind words, anyone else who wants a 320, pm me!

pk- · Post by **pk-** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 1:32 am

the Shit Tunes You Won't Like EP

individually:

one

two

three

four

five

garage-ish

DZA · Post by **DZA** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 1:38 am

pk- wrote:the Shit Tunes You Won't Like EP

individually:

one

two

three

four

five

garage-ish

links aint workinng for me

pk- · Post by **pk-** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 4:28 pm

The_Dza88 wrote:links aint workinng for me

weird, they work for me

it's probably for the best though

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 4:40 pm

3 new ones from myself.. 2 hiphop 1 dubstep, would love some feedback

http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/dialect ... nd4ry-clip

http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/amber-nectar

^ Those are the two hiphop ones

http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/legend4 ... yo-09-edit

^ Dubstep ( I know the mix needs a bit of work but can't be arsed to find the cable for my monitors)

deadly_habit · Post by **deadly_habit** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 4:59 pm

http://www.zshare.net/audio/55667969068ae88e/
wip need feedback besides more sub

shibbybo · Post by **shibbybo** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 10:05 pm

Done a tune with A1 Bassline.

check it out and let me know what you think.

www.myspace.com/kavsravespace

mondays child · Post by **mondays child** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 11:24 pm

Some more good tracks on here,

Subterra, yes mate, as has been mentioned else where. An excellent track tech influenced piece without being over heavy with the bass, I am feeling those deep DnB tracks as well. Very nice, keep it goin on...

PK- Now i really like 'One' and 'Three' they are really good in the beats department, and the arrangements are nice and minimal, i reckon you just need a few snippets of some samples or FX to spice 'em up a bit.

Deadly Habbit, not really my cup of tea mate, however the bassline is really cool. It sounds like some 8-Bit versoin of a warped bass. Cool.

I have a more polished version of the 2 step track 'Three Hours In One Day'
here.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/556826045e2b5604/

teqh · Post by **teqh** » Mon Feb 16, 2009 9:11 am

TEQH wrote:Never any love in the dubs section due to me never really posting there, and it's the same story for a lot of people, So heres another thread for finished articles for Production heads to post in

Drop some FEEDBACK on at least three tunes, otherwise this won't work properly

Fair enough if you're at work but try to drop some later on in the day, some sick tunes have already been posted

WATCH OUT DUBS

www.virb.com/teqh

serox · Post by **serox** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 1:11 pm

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 2:24 pm

Deadly Habit wrote:http://www.zshare.net/audio/55667969068ae88e/
wip need feedback besides more sub

Know what I think about this one

mondays child wrote:
I have a more polished version of the 2 step track 'Three Hours In One Day'
here.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/556826045e2b5604/

This is golden, great track, love the musical aspect and the dirty bassline very very snazzy, I would of bought it 8 years ago!

Serox wrote:First attempt at a track using FL.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... NVhIRGc9PQ

Bit to minimal/wobbley for me doesn't seem constructive enough theres nothing to groove too no big sub line to move to or a constant drum beat or a hat patten to follow, the sounds an the productions are good but I don't see much in terms of 'dance' or 'groove' its to minimal, if that makes sense? Sorry for negative feedback but I dunno this does nothing for me.

shibbybo wrote:Done a tune with A1 Bassline.

check it out and let me know what you think.

www.myspace.com/kavsravespace

Love the energy in this.. I feel it'll be better with just a driving sub like it'll help it carry a lot better the wobble kinda takes a lot from it while the vocal give it that lovely mid/high end warmth the wobble just kinda sits at the back doing the same thing its been doing for years now, it spoiled it for me.. Other than that its a amazing track, great sounds in there very nice drum work and them synthy strings in the break down are lovely!

http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/super-m ... d4ry-remix

something from myself I am toying with.

serox · Post by **serox** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 2:37 pm

Legendary wrote:Bit to minimal/wobbley for me doesn't seem constructive enough theres nothing to groove too no big sub line to move to or a constant drum beat or a hat patten to follow, the sounds an the productions are good but I don't see much in terms of 'dance' or 'groove' its to minimal, if that makes sense? Sorry for negative feedback but I dunno this does nothing for me.

What do you mean no drum beat? I find the drums get too repetitive as they are! the kick and hi hats go all the way thru the tune nearly. I do find a lot of music made now days is too robotic and everything is hard quantized:/

Is the Sub to low then?

Dont worry about the negative feedback! I like hearing all views so its all good

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 2:40 pm

Serox wrote:
Legendary wrote:Bit to minimal/wobbley for me doesn't seem constructive enough theres nothing to groove too no big sub line to move to or a constant drum beat or a hat patten to follow, the sounds an the productions are good but I don't see much in terms of 'dance' or 'groove' its to minimal, if that makes sense? Sorry for negative feedback but I dunno this does nothing for me.
What do you mean no drum beat? I find the drums get too repetitive as they are! the kick and hi hats go all the way thru the tune nearly. I do find a lot of music made now days is too robotic and everything is hard quantized:/

Is the Sub to low then?

Dont worry about the negative feedback! I like hearing all views so its all good

well I mean theres a different between repetitive and not constructive enough..keep the same kick patten and add new hat lines or the snare hitting 3 times instead of 2 in a 8 bar loop or whatever so there something to give it groove, the tune seems a bit to broken up with no real 'something' to keep you moving to it, if that makes sense? Maybe that was the idea you was going for though so what ive said is bollocks.

serox · Post by **serox** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 2:56 pm

Legendary wrote:
well I mean theres a different between repetitive and not constructive enough..keep the same kick patten and add new hat lines or the snare hitting 3 times instead of 2 in a 8 bar loop or whatever so there something to give it groove, the tune seems a bit to broken up with no real 'something' to keep you moving to it, if that makes sense? Maybe that was the idea you was going for though so what ive said is bollocks.

Yeh I did have a hi hat doing more all the way through it but I muted it for this file.

Is the sub too low btw?

Do you think the same about tunes like this?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qf-TE6yeq9w

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 3:01 pm

Serox wrote:
Legendary wrote:
well I mean theres a different between repetitive and not constructive enough..keep the same kick patten and add new hat lines or the snare hitting 3 times instead of 2 in a 8 bar loop or whatever so there something to give it groove, the tune seems a bit to broken up with no real 'something' to keep you moving to it, if that makes sense? Maybe that was the idea you was going for though so what ive said is bollocks.
Yeh I did have a hi hat doing more all the way through it but I muted it for this file.

Is the sub too low btw?

Do you think the same about tunes like this?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qf-TE6yeq9w

loefah is a don haha!

Yeah I couldn't really hear the sub on my monitors (although the cut off for them as at 70) think it just needs a bit more boom in the sub and a bit more hat work on 3rd listen.

serox · Post by **serox** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 3:06 pm

Legendary wrote:
loefah is a don haha!

Yeah I couldn't really hear the sub on my monitors (although the cut off for them as at 70) think it just needs a bit more boom in the sub and a bit more hat work on 3rd listen.

Think the sub was around 40/60hz, maybe needs to go up to 70?

Thanks for listening.

btw, vox to be added.

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