PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

[mars]

THANKS for all the feedback! I've been working on it a bit, been trying to add more effects or percussion here and there, some stuff kinda works other stuff not so much.

Now a favor for me, I've been banging my head against this tune all weekend trying to get something that fits rolling. I've uploaded 3 versions, each with different changes.

http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep

Wips 1,2 and 3 Being the last, Looking for feedback on which of these people are feeling.

3 Being the latest upload.

Actually I'm feeling the first one the most. The synth just sounds nice, clean and beefy. I like it. Maybe add the 3rd buildup to the 1st tune.

[jaydot]

Needs an arpeggiator on the growl as it's laboured but:

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Tune jay, different. Im a little curious what that pass is peaking at from 1m onwards? the stereo seperation on it feels nice, not to sure about the random laser sounds every now and then.

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Ah I'll have a look for ya, could lose one or two lasers yeah!

And I'll look at your WIPs later on.

[jaydot]

Hey Everyone!

I've been working on this for a bit, please let me know what you think!

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cheers and respect! i'll try to give some good feedback here too!

-m4rs

Quality track, check the Soundcloud I've given some feedback.

[deadnoisesystem]

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from that intro i thought it was gonna be horrorcore, but its real sweet
production is tight and i love the rhythm made of the splashing
big up

[mmockett]

Just been working on this this morning because I woke up early for some reason... What do you think? Needs some variety definitely, and the intro / break is nothing yet, but the basic sound? Too aggressive, or just doesn't go with the sample?
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Cheers for the feedback on my other track as well.

[deadnoisesystem]

Just been working on this this morning because I woke up early for some reason... What do you think? Needs some variety definitely, and the intro / break is nothing yet, but the basic sound? Too aggressive, or just doesn't go with the sample?
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Cheers for the feedback on my other track as well.

not my thing but when the bass drops its all good

[mmockett]

Just been working on this this morning because I woke up early for some reason... What do you think? Needs some variety definitely, and the intro / break is nothing yet, but the basic sound? Too aggressive, or just doesn't go with the sample?
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Cheers for the feedback on my other track as well.

not my thing but when the bass drops its all good

Yeah, might scrap the sample and work on making the main section a little more interesting. Thanks.

[deadnoisesystem]

Just been working on this this morning because I woke up early for some reason... What do you think? Needs some variety definitely, and the intro / break is nothing yet, but the basic sound? Too aggressive, or just doesn't go with the sample?
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Cheers for the feedback on my other track as well.

not my thing but when the bass drops its all good

Yeah, might scrap the sample and work on making the main section a little more interesting. Thanks.

no problems mate, keep me informed how it goes

[Keroscene 90]

New to massive, experimenting with it a bit....let me know what you think.....structure needs sorting out a bit.

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[jaydot]

Did some work on my latest track and quite pleased with the outcome,

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Scrappy in parts but the basis is there. IF you've already seen this it's had a drastic overhaul, so give me feedback and I'll hit you back on your tune

J.

[Subside]

Here is my first track ever I have no musical background at all but I think it is sounding good so far I would love some constructive criticism on how to make the track more enjoyable I know its missing something but I can't quite figure it out also ignore the vocal sample I'm looking for a new one at the moment. I use FL 9/Sonar 8 and a PCR-300 midi controller for my production. Is it a good starting point?

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[tether]

Hi there, new here.
Snippets from work in progress album below, see if you like.

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cheers.

[Ongelegen]

Here is my first track ever I have no musical background at all but I think it is sounding good so far I would love some constructive criticism on how to make the track more enjoyable I know its missing something but I can't quite figure it out also ignore the vocal sample I'm looking for a new one at the moment. I use FL 9/Sonar 8 and a PCR-300 midi controller for my production. Is it a good starting point?

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Its a nice start, put in a few more hats to get it rolling more, unless this is what u were going for. The hats/perc u got in there need more energy in the highs imo. I would also suggest some random fx and maybe introduce a synth in the second drop (go full out). My 2 cents

[jaydot]

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Worked at it some more, pretty stoked with this but could make it better.

Feedback appreciated and returned.

[jaydot]

Here is my first track ever I have no musical background at all but I think it is sounding good so far I would love some constructive criticism on how to make the track more enjoyable I know its missing something but I can't quite figure it out also ignore the vocal sample I'm looking for a new one at the moment. I use FL 9/Sonar 8 and a PCR-300 midi controller for my production. Is it a good starting point?

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Pretty good for a first effort. I dunno about the bongos I personally am not a fan opf them, but yeah, decent first effor, and keep at it.

[phrex]

heya, i very kindly ask for some feedback.
hope the tracks fine.

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will feedback some later this evening.

much respect

[jaydot]

heya, i very kindly ask for some feedback.
hope the tracks fine.

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will feedback some later this evening.

much respect

A little sparse on the intro, maybe needs some,pads to accompany the bass. Nice sub btw, otherwise fine.

[phrex]

yeah the beginning is indeed a bit wierd. tho it was meant to be a little wierd and haunting... probably it's too much of that wierdness?

[junior spesh]

MY REMIX OF "YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT LOVE IS"

NEEDS WORK... TAKES 1:20 2 DROP I FINK...

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DROP FEEDBACK!!!

[jaydot]

yeah the beginning is indeed a bit wierd. tho it was meant to be a little wierd and haunting... probably it's too much of that wierdness?

It's a little too long, I like it but when the beat kicks in is when the track really gets good.