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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by MattS » Sun Feb 14, 2010 2:06 pm

Here my first attepmt of writing a Dubstep track,
I use logic and don't have any plugins yet.
hopefully I'll get massive soon!!

Please could you give me some feedback on this track,
also I'm not very sure how to make a nice lead sound so if you could help me that would be amazing!!

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Post by The Phantom Banger » Sun Feb 14, 2010 3:10 pm

double post :(
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Post by The Phantom Banger » Sun Feb 14, 2010 3:11 pm

BananaBomber wrote:Soundcloud


Cheers In Advance :)
really like this one feeling the sounds you got going on after the second drop, really picks up the pace. After the first drop it seems to drag on slightly so maybe you can add a bit more variation in there but i really liked this one!

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Post by lodestone » Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:22 pm

first post and first mostly done track. pretty chilled out sounding. needs eqing. any comments or advice is appreciated!

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Post by WeBang » Sun Feb 14, 2010 6:11 pm

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A Little piece I am working on. Should I toss the vocals or keep them. If I keep them they will get Varied up alot more.
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Post by WeBang » Sun Feb 14, 2010 6:16 pm

BananaBomber wrote:Soundcloud


Cheers In Advance :)
second drop!! Enjoy that mix up of the bass

Diggin the drums wish I could get my snare to hit that hard.
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Post by DubNemesis » Sun Feb 14, 2010 6:24 pm

Here is a link to my Channel on youtube. Ive got 3 of my own tracks on there so have a listen and let me know what you think.

http://www.youtube.com/user/DubNemesis

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Post by Astral » Sun Feb 14, 2010 7:27 pm

BananaBomber wrote:Soundcloud


Cheers In Advance :)

Nice tune, maybe something a little more to emphasise the drop, a subtle noise build or reverse crash then hit would be nice, but thats just me and my pov.
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Post by Astral » Sun Feb 14, 2010 7:30 pm

Just been working on this a little more, drying to get the bass sounding organic and always moving, to sit right with the drums.

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Post by lodestone » Sun Feb 14, 2010 8:30 pm

Astral wrote:Just been working on this a little more, drying to get the bass sounding organic and always moving, to sit right with the drums.

Cheers

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This is sounding like a tank just waiting to be armor plated and ready for battle. Loving it.
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A Little piece I am working on. Should I toss the vocals or keep them. If I keep them they will get Varied up alot more.

Personally I'm liking the vocals but I'd say less is more. Might sound better with the vocal pattern as the first 4 and the 8th one, and drop 5,6,7.

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Post by detrimental » Sun Feb 14, 2010 8:58 pm

Okay so this is my second Dubstep tune that i've uploaded on this site, it's a work in progress and i'm looking for suggestion to spice it up.

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Post by billy the robot » Sun Feb 14, 2010 9:20 pm

Side scroll funk? Wizardstep? You make the call :D

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@ 80/160bpm. I'll probably do a few more edits before it's through, feedback appreciated. Thanks DSF!
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Post by Dropkick_Kid » Sun Feb 14, 2010 10:37 pm

Not dubstep but would appreciate some feedback on this electro tune :roll:

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Not finished article, don't like 2nd drop atall.
And qualities quite poor due to me only being arsed to upload a 192kbs mp3 :oops:
Oh well, give us some feedback and I'll share the love babes :w:
Bass is love.

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Post by sminch » Sun Feb 14, 2010 11:43 pm

Hi there, had this track for a while and have no idea what to do with it. Any sugestions or feedback would be great!

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Post by The Phantom Banger » Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:03 am

dr-zitbag wrote:Not dubstep but would appreciate some feedback on this electro tune :roll:

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Not finished article, don't like 2nd drop atall.
And qualities quite poor due to me only being arsed to upload a 192kbs mp3 :oops:
Oh well, give us some feedback and I'll share the love babes :w:
Nice track, personally i really like the second drop. Really liking the gated effect on the synth very nice overall. Noticed a bit of clashing going on there but it seems to fit the track nicely. :e:

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Post by RARRRR » Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:49 am



Looking to get some feedback on this new track I am working on, "Rogue Agent master class Pt. 1". Don't be a tnuc about it though, just trying to learn :)

Safe for whoever gives me some feedback, the track is coming along very well!

http://www.myspace.com/rarrrrbeats

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZECviGAibIw

EDIT - The intro. is ment to sound messy, it's what I was aiming for. Like it or not, still, tell me why so I can improve :)
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Post by WeBang » Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:50 am

edit
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Post by wirez » Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:51 am

RARRRR wrote:

Looking to get some feedback on this new track I am working on, "Rogue Agent master class Pt. 1". Don't be a tnuc about it though, just trying to learn :)

Safe for whoever gives me some feedback, the track is coming along very well!

http://www.myspace.com/rarrrrbeats

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZECviGAibIw
It's shit. You're a tnuc. :o

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Post by WeBang » Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:58 am

wirez wrote:
RARRRR wrote:

Looking to get some feedback on this new track I am working on, "Rogue Agent master class Pt. 1". Don't be a tnuc about it though, just trying to learn :)

Safe for whoever gives me some feedback, the track is coming along very well!

http://www.myspace.com/rarrrrbeats

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZECviGAibIw
It's shit. You're a tnuc. :o

Hehe, welcome to the forum bruv!!

a bit messy at first. Maybe just clean it up sounds a little clutterd. not a bad drop though.
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Post by WeBang » Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:25 am

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Intro added and feed back appreciated.
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