FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Post by sprayyypaint » Sun Jan 23, 2011 5:05 am

nnny-pretty epic haha. i like you kick and snare sounds nice n clean. actually everything sounds pretty crisp! just enough reverb to give it epicness. nice job dude!

therook-loving the percussion. not even using a wobbles! this is some real dub!! i cant find anything to complain about on this one either....in fact im downloading it! this shit is dope!

Nacklewicket-another vibey one! mm that bassss. the delays on the snare are a nice touch as well. if i have to critize this one it would be that those atmosphere sounds seem to be giving of a eerie vibe while the rest of the song feels almost funky or something. but thats me just being picky. the track is dope overall. it never gets boring. good job!:W:

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Post by Rekkon » Sun Jan 23, 2011 11:03 am

only through the first three pages.... some links were broken

great job all around...respect :4:

@Krucial--niceriffs/chords^ beef up those drums/layering/eqing...mabye a lowpass on you riff, seems to be interfering with the bassline

@Noonyez-- great subtle wobbles, nice vocal sampling (sound too clean mabye some efx>) get those drums snappin! eq/mabye a side chain, the bass and snare are getting lost....the congo drums are ill but completely buried, would love to hear more

@Iko Rush-- love the stary pads/patterens, reminds of riding on an asteriod (only done it once) great ideas, agree, the drums need to stand out.....make them as nice as those pads and ur golden (mabye some boosting around 110hz for the kick) and mess with the snare untill u get it crackin, mabye even another layer......great stuff

@nnny---love the erie piano intro (sounds abit muddy tho, is there reverb on it?) ...the icey pads that rise untill the drop
are nice. bass is tight, the kik is sittin well in the mix, the snare is getting sqished tho by certian elements...mabye its the paino riff(did you low pass it to cut all low frequencies out?) ---moody work, lovin the vibe_chillstep

@nylle---proper intro, love the one shots, fit well...nice hallow bass drop.
mabye a bit more on the drums, nothing crazy, you have so many nice one shots, I think a bit of moving percussion would tie all of this together...triplets shakers nudged a bit for some swing...
BTW...i like the fact that there is NO snare...respect

@bretheaslewood-@the start------great drums sit well in the mix, loving the acid bits, great job overall, i would eq/boost the hatz and shakers, they seem to be getting muddied out by the bass, well done IMO

@The Jaft-- lol, i like this.....the main riff is great, seems to clash with its syth counterpart, and this is making the snare and kik are getting buried in the mix, runa spectrum eq on those synth lines, see whats hitting where and make those drums fit........nice one, would love to hear it w/o the vocals


@wiseman-- nice dreamy intro with a syth rising up out of the deep. The bass drum is sitting in a good place, the snare sounds a bit thin, mabye another layer or a sidechain......is this carebears vocal? synthline is great good automation. The pads are taking up too much of the highs, mabye run a highpass with a shelf. nice stuff man, will stay tuned
great variation, good synth work, needs cleaning up but still sounds

@THunn- love the drop, bleeps areawesome, not too bro IMO, screeching and glass breaKING/bones cruching are tops. cant really give you much. mabye start it out and add all of this madness as a proggesion, you have soooo many good parts, make us guess, built it up to burn it down!!!!! love the tune man

@cloak and dagger---- redux work is nice, the 8 bit stuff is tops, love it, the main bass sounds muddy, not sure if its the sound or the efx, is your bass split with the frequencies? great stufff, just needs to be de-muddified

@blanx---drums sound clean...great job, the pads are nice, loving the bass triplets (;, bass is spot on, great progression and drum work, cant improve on much, mabye some clever vocal processing, somethging else like that laughing snippet...ace man

@hypefiend----nice dreamy pads, , needs a DEEP sub to go with this vibe.....mabye a little more on the kik and snare, the snare sounds very thin, mabye another layeer or a nice eq boost. stuff is good, would love to hear more

@den5hion-- i like the skankin ryddim, the bass work is nice stuff, the redux work is nice
a couple of the kiks sound like they are "off", a great stutter beat, but every once in a bar...they phase off. stuff is good , real good
@dj wom--- nice stabs in the intro, great build, vibe is dope, the bass is nice and the kik and snare stand out well.(;
I would love to hear all of that great hats/shaker work you have done, its getting lost. love the main riff, grows on you

@Stepman-- nice reverb/echo on the snare, the main riff sounds a bit thin , mabye a nice sub line underneath? i like all of the snippets tho...the synth pad in the background should also
@the duke _dubstep--- whoa o.0, I LIKE THE VOCALS, the drop is nice, , seems to get a bit muddy in a couple of places, mabye run a spectrum analyzer to see where those huge synths are hogging in the frequency spectrum.

@superginger- proper remix ---great work with the vocals, impressive switchup halfway through, IMOneeds some cleaning up, in the midrange, the main bass is sqwishing some of the "tainted" stabs(which are a main element)....dopeness

@neurosylum---nice stabs and matching horded thingies, the snare need some frequency room when the bass is hitting( i think its the stab), amazing drop....stuff is hittin, clean up that bass with the snare....and watch out.....good stuff man

@wirez-- lovin the future garage.......the vocals are haunting9loving the processing, sub bass is tight. i am gonna keep an ear out for your stuff, great progression and use of elements...biggups cnt say much bad....(;

@el sonido-----liking the massive bass sample.hehe, the snare is lost after the drop, do you use sidechaing? mabye a little to make that bass duck.......your sythwork is key tho, just need to make those drums and hats stand out. (;\

@rhek- vocal processing is nice.. I can tell u spent a great deal of time on them.....the hollow bassline is nice. the rising pads are also great, all of the drums sit well and the elements are cohesive..nice job, keep up the good work

@mawsta---nice synthwork, hittin, is there another growling bassline underit? sounds like it is clashing at certian points, mabye just a hollow sub would give it more omph...beware the slenderman
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Post by Semihedonist » Sun Jan 23, 2011 11:32 am

@Biggls - War Mech - nice mech samples ;) and nice idea with the tune! mixed properly! this kind of basses are not my feeling in 100% but i like the whole construction... and smooth exit with this outro! good job!

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Post by wirez » Sun Jan 23, 2011 2:01 pm

Rekkon wrote:@wirez-- lovin the future garage.......the vocals are haunting9loving the processing, sub bass is tight. i am gonna keep an ear out for your stuff, great progression and use of elements...biggups cnt say much bad....(;
Yes man, thanks! Glad to hear you enjoyed it so much :)

I don't believe you left anything for me to Feedback on? :?
Biggls wrote: @wirez amazing track. loved how it progressed. again so well made. just. wish i could make stuff that good :|
Thanks Biggls! Shit man don't doubt yourself, if you're not there now you'll get there in time for sure. It's all about persistence :W:

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Post by Nacklewicket » Sun Jan 23, 2011 3:44 pm

spraypaint - nice choon!! loving all those clicky percussion! that low sub is intense totally killing!! love the really jolly vibe of the track :corndance:

thanks for everyones feedback! much appreciated!! :corndance:

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check this one peeps

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Post by KazaDubstep » Sun Jan 23, 2011 5:54 pm

Biggls wrote:@KazaDubstep Can you please refrain from posting tracks? It makes the rest of us look nub. Sooooo huge it's not even funny. Jesuszzzz. Such nice use of filters and the mixtown is so tight it makes me jizzz.
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Post by therook » Sun Jan 23, 2011 6:32 pm

@Kaza damn dude the new tune is pretty sick. Great mixdown and that bass is wonky!
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Post by Phizicist » Sun Jan 23, 2011 11:47 pm

@sinister83 - great ideas here. love your mid-range sounds, I think your kick needs to punch face more and your drop more prominent. otherwise you're onto something here.
@biggls - pretty sick drop! intro is a bit monotonous but dude. I think this is a sick track. I'd personally make my mid range more prominent and run it through a high pass filter for some dynamic of it. but I love the way it is! props gangsta.
@nnny - magical song bro, downloadable? I would maybe add ambient percussion to add to your beautiful atmosphere..but wow bro. sweet song. its gorgeous.want a remix done if you think our track is cool?

I did a remix of "Like a G6" cos I digged the original.

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Post by nnny » Mon Jan 24, 2011 12:00 am

@Phizicist That track is hot bro :D Seriously good. Real nice tune.
Mine is downloadable, can grab the 320 off my soundcloud. Man, if your up for doing a remix of it, I'd love that! Would be awesome!

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Post by eldoogle » Mon Jan 24, 2011 2:38 am

I've been working on this one awhile now, this is the final version. Looking for feedback/just promoting as well.
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@ smokeydubstep - I like these sounds and drums a lot. Keep up the good work.

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Post by WeBang » Mon Jan 24, 2011 6:58 am

sprayyypaint - Interesting intro digging it, def feeling around 1:47. lil clustered in some areas but not bad sound at all

Semihedonist- what can I say but that this is a really well produced deep tune. I dig it man....nothing to give feed back on

wirez- oh man this intro is beautiful....the whole track is very music and enjoyable love the vocal usage. never seem to dissappoint.

smokeydubstep - interesting intro alot of build up and I was like this is hella fast then I realized it was drumstep. Not my fav sounds but for the bouncy crew it is pretty sick.

Phizicist - well I was gonna say man there is so many remixes of this....getter, then Bare, But man this is its whole other category. On the DL digging the robo sounds filthy tune.

eldoogle - - you gotta beedup that snare its just not smacking hard enough......if it was man this track would come to life alot more. A bit slow for me but I love all styles the snare just sounds not beefy enough. other then that the rest of the mix solid.


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Post by theduke_dubstep » Mon Jan 24, 2011 11:29 am

Phizicist - 0:55 Filthy mate! Love the drop. Nice chopping up of the vocals aswell. Be nice if the kick was a bit more punchy in the mixdown. Great job though.

eldoogle - Nice job. Needs alot more sub bass though. Not sure it has any at the moment. Great start though :)

We Bang - That shit is intense. Really original drop off. Loving the sounds, vocals and general energy. No real feedback other than the kick could be again a bit more defined in the mix down.

Second track I've posted in here. Thanks for the feedback on the first one.

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Post by wirez » Mon Jan 24, 2011 5:10 pm

We Bang wrote:wirez- oh man this intro is beautiful....the whole track is very music and enjoyable love the vocal usage. never seem to dissappoint.
Thanks a lot bro, I aim to please :) Hopefully the day never comes when I do disappoint!

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Post by JunkyardBassics » Mon Jan 24, 2011 5:18 pm

Finished this track last night! Let us know your thoughts! Thankyou! :D

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Post by Vcore » Mon Jan 24, 2011 8:43 pm

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Post by Semihedonist » Mon Jan 24, 2011 9:19 pm

Thanks all! Appreciate comments!

@We Bang - Wake Up - even if this kind of emotion in music is not my in 100% listening this tune brings me a lot of pleasure because of sounds and production level!: After this i listened Bad Company and Trace remix made by you - at this emotion are 100% mine!i will dig more of your music. great job !

@Kaza Dubstep - Supernova - nice heavy machine working out there! like the distortions and small pauses! good work :)

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Post by WeBang » Mon Jan 24, 2011 9:24 pm

Semihedonist wrote:Thanks all! Appreciate comments!

@We Bang - Wake Up - even if this kind of emotion in music is not my in 100% listening this tune brings me a lot of pleasure because of sounds and production level!: After this i listened Bad Company and Trace remix made by you - at this emotion are 100% mine!i will dig more of your music. great job !

Thank you so much that was very nice. I should be spinning Berlin and Belgim sometime by summer!!!!
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Post by Fatach » Mon Jan 24, 2011 9:45 pm

@Semihedonist - like it very much, dij' sounds f*ing great!

@vcore - I think this one lacks sub, and also bass generally.. melodies seem a bit random, as if improvised, in my opinion you should polish them up + making them more interesting in the following rounds (verses).. I would also consider playing with drums a bit, just so they won't be boring. good luck man!

@JunkyardBassics - I really like those intro synths. synth after 1st drop - hmmm, i dunno i think is not full enough, do you know what I mean? tribal drumz r really cool. keep it up. :)

....this is my newest track in which I think I've made the mose progress so far, its dirtyer, it has much more energy than my previous tracks
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