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jbergs · Post by **jbergs** » Wed Apr 15, 2009 1:46 am

new track "Love Is" up on the myspace

http://www.myspace.com/internalmusic

kidlogic · Post by **kidlogic** » Wed Apr 15, 2009 8:10 pm

Just uploaded 5 new almost finished tunes to my virb player and would love this forums thoughts...

top 5 in the player at www.virb.com/kidlogic

Thanks guys!

feral witchchild · Post by **feral witchchild** » Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:45 am

Just a little suttin' suttin'

contakt321 · Post by **contakt321** » Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:04 pm

Feral Witchchild wrote:[url=http://www.sendspace.com/file/im1g83]Just a little suttin' suttin'[/url

Off to a good start man!

What do you use to produce (out of random curiosity)

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:27 pm

http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/darkest-sunset

I think I am at a place to say this is finished but not to sure atm, going to let it sit! Was like the 2nd dubstep tune I ever finished - started to rework it! ANY feedback would be great.

viralcode · Post by **viralcode** » Fri Apr 17, 2009 10:09 pm

this is a track I stared a few days ago... its my first attempt at making a proper track. Its pretty rough, loads to change....

Shtankin - 3.7mb
http://rapidshare.com/files/222598862/Shtankin.mp3

Heres another little intro i started while i was in Prague...

Prague Dub - 2.7mb
http://rapidshare.com/files/220056348/Prague_Dub.mp3

any feedback would be appreciated!

viralcode · Post by **viralcode** » Fri Apr 17, 2009 10:18 pm

Legendary wrote:http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/darkest-sunset

I think I am at a place to say this is finished but not to sure atm, going to let it sit! Was like the 2nd dubstep tune I ever finished - started to rework it! ANY feedback would be great.

The intro is really nice, love the use of reverb throughout! But the track seems like its going to lead to something huge (2:09) but it starts to get repetitive and i feel it doesn't really amount to anything in the end. I keep thinking its going to kick in really heavy and riffy but it stays really chilled. It all sounds like a massive introduction to me.

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Fri Apr 17, 2009 10:36 pm

viralcode wrote:
Legendary wrote:http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/darkest-sunset

I think I am at a place to say this is finished but not to sure atm, going to let it sit! Was like the 2nd dubstep tune I ever finished - started to rework it! ANY feedback would be great.
The intro is really nice, love the use of reverb throughout! But the track seems like its going to lead to something huge (2:09) but it starts to get repetitive and i feel it doesn't really amount to anything in the end. I keep thinking its going to kick in really heavy and riffy but it stays really chilled. It all sounds like a massive introduction to me.

I can see where you're coming from - without sounding like I am dissing your feedback, maybe you was listening to it with the expectation of something what its not? Its a flowing track not a dance floor one.. but I can see where you're coming from.. I think the mix could do with work - after listening through headphones then monitors doing a bit of a-b work - seems some of the progression is very subtle, almost goes un-noticed hence why it might sound boring to you but there is a lot of progression in there, just hidden

feral witchchild · Post by **feral witchchild** » Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:19 am

contakt321 wrote:
Feral Witchchild wrote:Just a little suttin' suttin'
Off to a good start man!

What do you use to produce (out of random curiosity)

Ah damn I just saw I fucked that link up, my bad. Haha

I use Renoise, man, and Massive for my basses. I'm looking for something better for that, actually.

contakt321 · Post by **contakt321** » Sat Apr 18, 2009 2:33 pm

Legendary wrote:http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/darkest-sunset

I think I am at a place to say this is finished but not to sure atm, going to let it sit! Was like the 2nd dubstep tune I ever finished - started to rework it! ANY feedback would be great.

Fun revisiting old tracks! I like the synth-y notes that come in around 20-30 seconds in. I could see how the other listener wanted more after the drop, but I don't think that needs to be anything dancefloor, or heavy, you may just need to bring elements out of the mix.

Pretty tight track for being your 2nd effort. Definitely curious what it sounded like before you started re-working it.

contakt321 · Post by **contakt321** » Sat Apr 18, 2009 2:35 pm

Feral Witchchild wrote:
I use Renoise, man, and Massive for my basses. I'm looking for something better for that, actually.

I don't know what it is, but Renoise's interface scares me. Something about tracker types of software just doesnt seem like it would work w/ my brain.

I use Ableton, can't say enough good things about it. Then again, every fanboy feels that way about their DAW.

sticky feet · Post by **sticky feet** » Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:09 pm

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=KJNZLT8D
A new beat, almost finished. I just have to mix it down and add/remove a few things and make a better structure.

feral witchchild · Post by **feral witchchild** » Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:45 pm

I just put up a new one, not sure if I'm happy with it just yet. Link in sig, first tune in player. Don't really know what I would add to it, though.

viralcode · Post by **viralcode** » Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:59 pm

is anyone gonna check the beat!??

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Sun Apr 19, 2009 4:47 pm

Slug85 wrote:15 APRIL THE BEGINING.mp3 - 8.14MB

1st tune still working on it

2nd tune very carmer

Slug - Rinse.2009.mp3 - 6.41MB

honest feedback appriciated

1st tune is good!! nice solid drop followed by the heavy bass line

think the drums need a little more punch to them, pattern is kool, they just need more ummph.

2nd tune has good vibrations just needs twisting up a little

good work

feral witchchild · Post by **feral witchchild** » Sun Apr 19, 2009 8:57 pm

First track in the player on my myspazz (link in sig) is the last tune I was working on before my computer crashed (thankfully, I was able to salvage all important tunes except for one and this, the one I was working on),

contakt321 · Post by **contakt321** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 3:52 am

Here is what I am working on at the moment:

http://www.divshare.com/download/7144382-eed

Dark 2steppy drums (inspired by a Svpreme Fiend song - cheers!), some reese, some vinyl samples, and an accapella.

I could really use some suggestions on the vocals, I don't like them as is but I am new to this, so all feedback, criticism, comments, etc are welcome.

I can take it

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