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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by prime|evil » Thu Feb 11, 2010 2:18 am

New tune by myself. It's taken me ages to get my creative swing back, so hopefully back into the game now!

It's called MutatedOptics.

Feedback would be sweeeet! :)

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Post by thierry_le_dj » Thu Feb 11, 2010 10:37 am

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This is an old track i just finish re editing!
see what you think also grab a 320 on soundcloud if you like.

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Post by SesG » Thu Feb 11, 2010 10:45 am

thierry_le_dj wrote:Soundcloud
LOL i think i re edited and re uploaded this one over 100 times no joke...but i hope this is the last time.
well if you like it grab a 320 on my soundcloud.
thanks
Hey Man, heres my crit of your song:

Pros:
-That bass is really really nice, a lovely texture to it, and the constant switching up of the main pattern is as previously stated hypnotizing
-Drums are solid and give a nice swing to the entire melody

Cons:
-Everything goes on for too long and unfortunately begins to feel a little repetitive
-Not feeling the whistly, high pitched synth, doesnt seem to fit well in the track for me

My opinion on improvement:
-Half the time each section plays for, remove the whistly synth, play the bass for a little bit, then remove it to tease our earbuds with drums and atmos for the next time we get to hear those sick rhythms you've got going!
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Post by SesG » Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:00 am

bifta wrote:Soundcloud

Feedback please :t: , much love :D
Hi, really liked this tune, very bouncy, felt like I was rocking about in a boat at sea!

Pros:
-All your noises are really good, drums, synths, bass, all fit together brilliantly
-Good rhythm keeps it bouncy and danceable, but laid back as well

Cons:
-Goes on a bit, cut the length back a bit and it would be more listenable
-A break down or two would be good if you wanted to keep the same length
-High pitched lead synth repeats the entire body of the song, removing it would add a nice variation and prevent people getting bored of it

My advice:
-The noise just at the very end? Where synth has gone, everything is stripped back? Make that a breakdown at about 2.15 and the song will have a much brighter charachter :)
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Post by SesG » Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:03 am

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Hi, critical feedback would be much appreciated, only second tune I'm happy with and would like to know what everyone thinks of it - its only short, give it a listen ;)
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Post by Astral » Thu Feb 11, 2010 1:30 pm

SesG wrote:Soundcloud

Hi, critical feedback would be much appreciated, only second tune I'm happy with and would like to know what everyone thinks of it - its only short, give it a listen ;)
Beat is quality, drums sound real nice, id just work on other aspects.


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Tune, soothing. I didn't actually realise it went on for 9 minutes, seems to flow seemlessly.
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Post by wirez » Thu Feb 11, 2010 3:54 pm

Chron1cle wrote:Hey im playin this at a gig on saturday with some live guitars any ideas on making it better? its a youth club gig btw.

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Sub Bass could be more powerful.
Like the drums in the second drop!
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Post by wirez » Thu Feb 11, 2010 3:59 pm

filthstift wrote:Any feedack on my Lily Allen - Friend of mine remix?
Thankz.

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Post by wirez » Thu Feb 11, 2010 4:09 pm

deadly habit wrote:
Fucking sick track bro! I was going to check it out on youtube if it wasn't on here, subscribed and that 8)
I hear you have the same 'rustly bag sub bass' youtube issue as me... Wish to fuck Youtube wouldn't do that :(
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Post by deadly_habit » Thu Feb 11, 2010 4:16 pm

cheers guys gonna be putting that out on first release for my labels relaunch :wink:

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Post by Astral » Thu Feb 11, 2010 4:17 pm

Tried to take a different approach this time, make something with more space, a little different.

It's alot simpler not a great deal happens but hopefully as effective.

Check it

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Not sure why it's saying its unavailable when its rendered -.-, andway the links there.
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Post by Depone » Thu Feb 11, 2010 10:09 pm

Been working on some robotic techno influenced dubstep

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Post by wirez » Thu Feb 11, 2010 10:29 pm

Astral wrote:Tried to take a different approach this time, make something with more space, a little different.

It's alot simpler not a great deal happens but hopefully as effective.

Check it

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Not sure why it's saying its unavailable when its rendered -.-, andway the links there.
I think they might like it over at orchestrastep.com man, see what they think.

Hehe :P It's nice though man, definitely very easy to listen to! One criticism I have is that the snare could do with more punch, maybe even layer a kick with a lower velocity than the main kick below it? Could do with some 'thwack' as well (usually around 750-2000kHz).
The musical aspects of it are really nice though man, I'd recommend sticking to that style it seems to work with your production!
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Post by Astral » Thu Feb 11, 2010 10:56 pm

wirez wrote:
Astral wrote:Tried to take a different approach this time, make something with more space, a little different.

It's alot simpler not a great deal happens but hopefully as effective.

Check it

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Not sure why it's saying its unavailable when its rendered -.-, andway the links there.
I think they might like it over at orchestrastep.com man, see what they think.

Hehe :P It's nice though man, definitely very easy to listen to! One criticism I have is that the snare could do with more punch, maybe even layer a kick with a lower velocity than the main kick below it? Could do with some 'thwack' as well (usually around 750-2000kHz).
The musical aspects of it are really nice though man, I'd recommend sticking to that style it seems to work with your production!
Cheers man, yeah I was listening to some of plasticians older stuff previous to making it, inspired it a fair bit, i'll take a look at that snare, was going to take it back to the drawing board as it feels a little repetetive.
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Post by filthstift » Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:13 pm

wirez wrote:
filthstift wrote:Any feedack on my Lily Allen - Friend of mine remix?
Thankz.

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This tune is love, hopefully I haven't rinsed it too hard by summer and it will be a big one for me this summer I reckon! 8)
haha Thankz. Hope u still love it in the summer ;)

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Post by ironik » Fri Feb 12, 2010 12:58 am

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a bit of rap-dub :D
will give review on whoever gives me one sweet,
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Post by thierry_le_dj » Fri Feb 12, 2010 2:59 pm

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yea i just finish working on this track!
all feed back are welcome thanks!

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Post by landslidepurist » Fri Feb 12, 2010 3:15 pm

A bunch of finished and unfinished stuff here...

http://soundcloud.com/landslide-purist

You should be able to download them all too (mostly they're mp3s).

Feedback on everything (be it the writing or production or whatever) very much appreciated.

Thanks. :D

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Post by CollisionCourse » Fri Feb 12, 2010 4:08 pm

@ts engage
thats good, bring the sub up a bit and maybe a variation in the bassline itself then im in :D

@deadly habit
love the intro, the thunder sounds all distorted like it was recorded from a phone but it makes it sound more raw. the way you bring the drums in is sick aswell great use of sound effects. the drop is heavy, trippy drums which is like. same goes for the outro, big tune all round, exactly my kind of thing.some one else said they didnt realise it went on for 9 minuites, same here lol proper flow to it. well done :mrgreen:

@astral
i liek the vibes on this, spooky shit. i like how you brung in the extra hats for the second drop. that little stuttering synth near the end is sick aswell. moody tune, big!

heres mine, started it last week n i been grating on it all day since i broke up from college yesterday. tell me what you lot think please!
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