FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010

[swansong]

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heres my track let me know what you think, my comments are in the soundclouds
www.swansongmusic.co.uk

[Skaven]

Ok, here goes the last few tracks I didn't get too,

@unrelat8d - Liking the intro, sample is cool. Feeling the flow when it drops too, got a proper head bob rhythm too it. Mix down sounds nice, nothing really to pick up on production wise

@Flyte One - Remix - Intro is sweet! Proper feeling this tune man, production is tight, and the vocal is top! Really like the strings that come in at around 2.50, that 2nd drop and build up was wicked. Kick sounds well nice, got a real nice warm punch to it (if that makes sense? ha) Big Ups on this, proper into this tune.
vs alt - That guitar sounds amazing, got a proper nice sound to it. Really like how you brought the synth in at around 2.10, nice and simple synth line, used very effectively, production is tight as again.
generation dub - not feeling as much as the other 2 tracks, but still proper feeling it, the production is pretty solid and has a real nice chilled vibe, would love to hear it with some proper reggae vocals on it, can picture someone like Alborosie or Gentleman on this.

@paravrais - Tunes cool, drums get a bit repetitive tho, maybe add some changes or switch up the hi hats in parts. Mix down sound ok, not really into your kick tho, not sure why, just sounds a bit compressed and squashed to me, nice track overall tho

@unrelat8d - Feeling the changes you made, drop deos sound better know, just helps it to gain that impact when the beat drops

@swansong - Not too sure about the samples, don't really get them to be honest, just seem a bit random to me, tho I do like them in parts, lime the something missing bits where you stutter it, rest of the tracks ok, not really my cup of tea tho, but the production on it is cool and can't pick out any faults reallly.

Think thats it, again Big Ups to all, some proper sick tunes on here at the moment.

If you want to check out any of my tracks, link to my soundcloud is in my sig and the remix I've done for Dubstep Division Recordings, hope you like if you do check it out, and leave some feedback if you do, need all the help I can get

[urbannerd62]

whaddup production forum! feels like i aint been here in awhile although it hasn't been very long.

@swansong - sirens; intro sounds lovely. the atmosphere and the melody go great together. nice synth sounds as well. only thing I don't like is the repetitiveness of the sample. drums are got a nice flow to em as well. keep it up!

@flyte-one - generation dub; lovin the intro. delay on that vocal soundin awesome! your sub is nice and fat, and drums are pretty good. could make the hats a bit more prominent, but thats just me. vibes!!

@paravrais - where do i put my car; dope drums, nice 2 steppy feel. lush atmosphere and the melodies are mint. whatever those wind instruments are, they sound amazing! nice tune buddy

@unrelat8d - once upon a time; awesome sample in the beginning. lfo's are soundin good man. not really a fan of the way the drums keep breakin into 4/4kick but again, thats just me. like this alot more after about 2:05. dope track

@kaiori breathe - survival; guitar in the intro is slick! vocals are very classy too.. very smooth tune you got here fam. lfo synth is awesome, sorta overrides the vocal a bit towards the end but doesnt really affect the song much, still sounds great. really likin this one

@impeytelling - a list halcyon; love this intro. great job the your sub, pads really make this song euphoric. i'm diggin this alot man.. tight production. smoked a bowl to this, incredible vibes. bigup!!

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my latest. just a few finishin touches to make. will be back on to give more feedback

[Wilding]

Wilding - Kwakaaaa!!! [FREE 320]

Yo! Wobble free dieters!!! My first ever Dubstep track. Ever.

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[swansong]

new track check it let me know what you guys reckon.
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www.swansongmusic.co.uk

[streetxlite]

@wilding, this actually isn't that bad! This is one of the better 'first dubs' i've heard (even today!) get to know your synths, make sure to spend time practising with them, experimenting, looking for the boundaries.

@Swansong, this is really catchy. It's like The Cure but Dubstep. More vocal fx would be awesome. The smooth wobbles are slick.


My remix of Kaiori Breathe's new track "NO ONE WILL EVER LOVE YOU"
This isn't as good as the original - free 320 though
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[vdbproductions]

Yoo, finished a new track today,
tried to make it crunchy but clean crunchy
let me know what you think
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Grtz from Belgium

[steeze]

@Streetxlite Liking the atmosphere in the beginning, liking the drop aswell, the more realistic sounding drums work well with the guitar. It almost sounds like the soundtrack to some computer game. Not feeling the mid range synth though, seems to go against the track abit, maybe it would work if it was more subtle in the mix, so it adds to the track rather than dominating. Other than that im really feeling it mate, nice one.

@Swansong Pretty crazy track man, I would have left it a bit longer before the track drops rather than just the vocal sample, just a bit of an intro yano. Really like the sound that comes in after the first chorus. Theres a really edgy kinda feel to this one, not heard anything like it before, did you do the vocals? Im liking the sound though, keep it up, things will start sounding more polished if you keep working at it.

@Urbannerd62 I like the sounds in the intro, maybe try adding a bit more to it, fill out the frequency spectrum a bit more, sounds a tad bare to me. Ah, love it when the drums come in, sounds much more complete. Interesting use of panning, it feels a tad overused though, if it was me id just use it at the end of every 8 bars, rather than in entire sections. Overall though, really fresh, interesting sound. Good job man.

Here's mine then, let me know what you guys think, any crits shall be gladly returned
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[DJRaynes]

Alright Guys,

Got 2 versions of a track i've been working on - titled "Sunday Morning"

Newest version, EQ'd a bit more + extra cymbals & pads added
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Last version
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Feedback is always apreciated

Cheers

[DookieHowserOG]

New track..

[krispy]

@steeze-oh yeah: Great synth/atmosphere in the intro, sounds complex yet simple, bassline is sounding pretty cool but there is something about it im not sure I like... maybe it sounds too basic or plain? Im not sure but I would like it to sound a bit more interesting. Maybe even add some extra layers onto the bass every once in a while just to spice it up a bit. Also, was hoping for some added variety on the 2nd drop. Great tune, excellent space and atmosphere

@vdbproductions-champion song: I really like that bass, subtle yet interesting , good flow. Nice drum work, its good to hear you switch it up occasionally. I appreciate the gaps in the bass. I think you could almost turn up the volume on the bass a touch.

@swansong-message to god: Could benefit from much more of an intro before just diving into it, at least 30 seconds more methinks with some introduction of the drums in there. Cool vocals and sounds, very interesting a different. It has a creepy, dark feeling to it. Like wtf is this guy talking about, he must be crazy talking about god and stuff haha..,. Good introduction of the synth, keeping it interesting, keeping the flow going..,. Excellent switch up into the chorus part. Only complaint is more of an intro would be nice. Cool song!


Ok here is my latest tune it is called Battle Mode, located in my signature. Feedback would be greatly appreciated, thank you!

[Jharling]

@Krispy- For some reason the beggining is a bit too slow for me.. not sure why it picks up around 3:40 minutes though, and some solid stuf happening after that

@Steeze- Your intro is cool. i like the subtle backround vox, and the melody. Drop is also on point. I like the balance of bass and background melodies seems just right.

@urbannerd62- Land on my property- Not sure i really like the synth noise.. its kinda making me dizzy at times, and at others i like it. I really like the drum beat that comes in around 1:53 though, got a nice feel to it. one of those loops that i wouldn't mind hearing for a long time.

Here is my track.. only been at it for like a year so there are definately still holes, let me know what you think

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[Mixster23]

HI PIIIIPs...i made i new tune, tell me what you think about it!!!!HUG....


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Fl Producion...im a budstep Freshman!!!!LOl

[jaydot]

@kesek: Liking it, the original is a nice tune, this is obviously more uptempo stuff but still, a nice remix.

@steeze: As I said when you sent me it for the blog, awesome track, loving the mix of melodic and chill

@mixster: Really like that, loving the hip hoppy element, it would make a dancefloor sway too, I'd play that out at a gig for sure.



There's mine, drumstep track:

[superginger]

#steeze

excellent vocals and fx... cool build and drop. the wobble was very liquid, well filthy and very sweet. not thaaat much variation (which I usually have as a criteria) but in this song I didn't think it was any problem... The only thing I think is annoying is how you are tapping the notes on the padmelody. but no big deal.
I've been listening to it 3 times this halvhour and I'm still not bored of it.. good job mate. keep it up

#DoogieHowserOG

tight buildup... nice and filthy wobble. nothing remarkable but a good tune and I'd definatly listen to it again. the quality was quite lame and the wobble sound was quite harsh... maybe it's youtube though.


#jaydot

another nice track! well done mate... I usually don't listen to drumstep but this was quite good! I like the policesound and the police-wobble or what should I call it. but your police sound doesn't fit at all times... listen to it again!



gonna give more feedback later... but now I'm very tired! (+ i gave some feedback some pages ago without getting too much back)
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here is my remix of "Tiffani Louise Vinyard - Stay". Not too sure about this but please give me feedback! teh vocals and samples were in 132 bpm so... thats why it is in 132 bpm.. /cry

thanks in advance!! good night

[Pete Miles]

Soundcloud Here's one of the tracks I have on soundcloud. I take every bit of feedback I get and try to learn from it, so if you're gonna be brutal that's cool, but at least be mature enough to give me production orientated pointers! Thanks for listening.

[jaydot]

Soundcloud Here's one of the tracks I have on soundcloud. I take every bit of feedback I get and try to learn from it, so if you're gonna be brutal that's cool, but at least be mature enough to give me production orientated pointers! Thanks for listening.

check your soundcloud

[Sinisterbeats]

all my posts from last night have disappeared so posting this again. Also did some feedback so will do some more when I get back from work.
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[truekimbo2]

Hey. So i saw that video 100 ways to love a cat. So i made this

http://soundcloud.com/kayimbo/100-ways- ... t-tk-cover

[wirez]

A classy and sexual but dancefloor-based Future Garage track featuring the seducing vocals from Miss Abi Flynn! Sure to be many more Garage-vibed tracks coming from us!

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Of course will return feedback for anybody who gives! Enjoy! Thanks for listening!