PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

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any feedback would be good.

just listening back the subs sounded too loud??

[KidQw3rty]

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any feedback would be good.

just listening back the subs sounded too loud??

like the sound, especially the voice that comes in circa 2:45, sounds like some crystal castles stuff. The whole piece has a solid build that develops nicely into that drop at the end. I thought the subs sounded ok, but maybe bringing them down a little would reveal more of the echo-y stuff you have going on in the back and accentuate the hi hat splashes. good stuff.

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any feedback would be good.

just listening back the subs sounded too loud??

like the sound, especially the voice that comes in circa 2:45, sounds like some crystal castles stuff. The whole piece has a solid build that develops nicely into that drop at the end. I thought the subs sounded ok, but maybe bringing them down a little would reveal more of the echo-y stuff you have going on in the back and accentuate the hi hat splashes. good stuff.

cheers, let me know if you want feedback on anything

[KidQw3rty]

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any feedback would be good.

just listening back the subs sounded too loud??

like the sound, especially the voice that comes in circa 2:45, sounds like some crystal castles stuff. The whole piece has a solid build that develops nicely into that drop at the end. I thought the subs sounded ok, but maybe bringing them down a little would reveal more of the echo-y stuff you have going on in the back and accentuate the hi hat splashes. good stuff.

cheers, let me know if you want feedback on anything

posted a few tracks a page back, listen if you want and either PM me or comment here if you enjoy em. any constructive criticism is welcome.

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any feedback would be good.

just listening back the subs sounded too loud??

like the sound, especially the voice that comes in circa 2:45, sounds like some crystal castles stuff. The whole piece has a solid build that develops nicely into that drop at the end. I thought the subs sounded ok, but maybe bringing them down a little would reveal more of the echo-y stuff you have going on in the back and accentuate the hi hat splashes. good stuff.

cheers, let me know if you want feedback on anything

posted a few tracks a page back, listen if you want and either PM me or comment here if you enjoy em. any constructive criticism is welcome.

yo i checked your tunes a few pages back

Thought all your songs really well written, all pretty listenable.

The fist one had some nice ideas, i especially liked the lfo harmonising with its self. main criticism would be the sounds not being fat and polished enough, maybe some reverb or other processing. It's something I struggle with so much... and im defo no expert. also drums at the beginning sounded a bit midi.

seconded one was nice, really liked that, wouldn't really change anything really

was feeling the tubby one too, but thought it changed up a bit too much. take the first 4 bars after the drop and loop that, subtly changing what you got. I know thats kind of what's going on but I just thought the melody of it changed a bit too much when the first 4 bars sounded pretty sick. Also bang some distortion on that LFO.

The second drop sound is sick as well, again try keep the pattern a bit simpler.

would be up for hearing that once it's done

[wirez]

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any feedback would be good.

just listening back the subs sounded too loud??

Sweet track man, really enjoyed it.
Definitely don't think the sub is too loud!

[goose_step]

hey
could anybody give me some feedback on these 2 tracks?
http://soundcloud.com/joshua_dub/work

and

http://soundcloud.com/joshua_dub/ifly

sorry i cnt get the imbed player to work.
much appreciated.

[KidQw3rty]

Although this isn't a final cut, this is the final form of this track:
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sorry for the outrageous buzz.

also goose step, that bass is heavy, and i really feel the beat from the first one. legit.

[goose_step]

Although this isn't a final cut, this is the final form of this track:
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sorry for the outrageous buzz.

also goose step, that bass is heavy, and i really feel the beat from the first one. legit.

yo cheers for the feedback. that tune is gorgeous man. the melody that comes in at 1:07 is awesome, is that some kind of voice synth?
good stuff

[bulla]

evening all, started out on this today, let me know what you think

www.soundcloud.com/jamesbull

[KidQw3rty]

Update:
I've pretty much finished two of the tracks I posted before....just need to fully master them in protools (i half-assed it in digital performer and they came out a little...off).
Anyway, let me know if y'all dig them, since these are pretty much the finalized forms.

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[Operative]

Hi all. This is a bit of a dark broody cinematic roller. I hope you like it
Cheers,
Operative.

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[gforce]

Hi there, any feeback met with maximum appreciation. - Salute

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[KidQw3rty]

Hi all. This is a bit of a dark broody cinematic roller. I hope you like it
Cheers,
Operative.

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this was like if danger decided to make dubstep...raaaw
i thought the melody after the second drop was particularly ill.
might want to change up the beat a little is my only suggestion, otherwise you killed it.

[axelk]

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Anyone? Any good?

[wirez]

Hi there, any feeback met with maximum appreciation. - Salute

Post Soundcloud URL's to tracks in the Soundcloud tags, not the embed code!

[wirez]

Update:
I've pretty much finished two of the tracks I posted before....just need to fully master them in protools (i half-assed it in digital performer and they came out a little...off).
Anyway, let me know if y'all dig them, since these are pretty much the finalized forms.

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Sounding very nice man, good work!

[wirez]

Hi all. This is a bit of a dark broody cinematic roller. I hope you like it
Cheers,
Operative.

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Sick drums and sub in that track bro.

[wirez]

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Anyone? Any good?

The sounds used are nice and the track production sounds tight, the track is a little too repetitive though... It needs something subtle to keep it rolling, maybe even a little bit of modulation on one of the drums to keep it moving?

[Operative]

Hi all. This is a bit of a dark broody cinematic roller. I hope you like it
Cheers,
Operative.

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this was like if danger decided to make dubstep...raaaw
i thought the melody after the second drop was particularly ill.
might want to change up the beat a little is my only suggestion, otherwise you killed it.

All good, Thanks for listening. I'll play around a bit more on it =), as you do. just kinda hit a wall in which direction to go near the end. Im still unsure about the kinda ole school type trancy lead as well.