PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

[Temo]

YES YES i know i am guilty of crunching in some feedback before i post something! I am just not on the forums as much as i used to be, I am trying to keep up with life, add some url's and youve got total chaos! haha, more reviews to come, i really do love giving feedback, as artists we must help each other out because non-producers dont pay attention to detail, so BIGUP to everyone in the forum!

i got 2 new tracks im pretty stoked about, i would like to hear your thoughts...

thanks!

1st, sick, but i woulda made the drums harder and punchier and maybe abit more lively

2nd, didnt play

[frank grimes jr.]

Here's a remix/reproduction of dancehall deejay Turbulence's "Nah Sell Out." It's an anti-bling message. Please let me know what you think of it as a remix.

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I think this has potential for a remix, but I was waiting for the tune to start the whole time.
Maybe it's my headphones, but the entire tune sounded like an intro to me.

[Temo]

Soundcloud

any feedback would be much appreciated

[raggatwin]

http://soundcloud.com/raggatwin/babylon My first real go, been messing around on reason for about 8 months. Let me know what u think

[frank grimes jr.]

http://soundcloud.com/raggatwin/babylon My first real go, been messing around on reason for about 8 months. Let me know what u think

It's a tune man, the sub sounds really nice.
I think the kick is getting lost a bit, but everything is fitting nicely otherwise IMO.

[CollisionCourse]

@Temo
thats a nice track, the drums roll very nicely. a little more variation wouldnt do any harm with the main strings, maybe trying a different sounds to add along the way, just to make it more interesting. i like the outro though, good work

@parisuk/sheepheads
i love the piano. is it sampled? the drums and the percussions especially sound a bit too loud and are slightly clipping but its probably just me. i liek the wobble, probably doesnt really go with the panio but it still sounds good. overall its very listenable

@blind prophet
all your tracks are big so the standard was quite high. and that intro is TASTY. drums are definitely head bobbing material. love the change of sounds at 1.50 aswell, big. there really is nothing i can find to fault this track, well done mate

[CollisionCourse]

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[wirez]

instruments chosen are abit too generic for me, the piano in particular, sounds cheap, i dont know how long uve been making tunes so its hard to gauge if its good or not

Why would the length of time somebody has been producing make a different to whether or not it is a good track?

[icebagg]

YES YES i know i am guilty of crunching in some feedback before i post something! I am just not on the forums as much as i used to be, I am trying to keep up with life, add some url's and youve got total chaos! haha, more reviews to come, i really do love giving feedback, as artists we must help each other out because non-producers dont pay attention to detail, so BIGUP to everyone in the forum!

i got 2 new tracks im pretty stoked about, i would like to hear your thoughts...

thanks!

1st, sick, but i woulda made the drums harder and punchier and maybe abit more lively

2nd, didnt play

Yea its not quite finished being mixed yet, im going back and re mixing all my songs but thank you!... heres that second track... only thing about this new one, is that horrible little click i get on my vocal loops anyone have any suggestions for ridding of these? it really takes away fromt he song any help would be awesomeSoundcloud

[wirez]

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any feedback would be much appreciated

A lush track you got there man, favourited

[wirez]

Soundcloud

Nice track man!

[icebagg]

Soundcloud

any feedback would be much appreciated

awesome track man! how long you been producing? very clean mix i like i like, love the ambiance as well. I love how versatile dubstep is, i tend to go for the heavy hitting stuff, but the mellower tracks with all that sub bass hit me in the right spot! bigups! i shall find you on the cloud!

[dignan]

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nice track man, just my kind of tune - nice and chilled and spacious. i'm listening to it on some crappy pc speakers so I cant hear the sub so ill check it out again later.

thanks for the comments about my track, really appreciate it man!

[Temo]

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any feedback would be much appreciated

awesome track man! how long you been producing? very clean mix i like i like, love the ambiance as well. I love how versatile dubstep is, i tend to go for the heavy hitting stuff, but the mellower tracks with all that sub bass hit me in the right spot! bigups! i shall find you on the cloud!

about 3 years or so, im 17 lol

[Temo]

CollisionCourse, wirez, icebagg thanks for the feedback aswell

[Temo]

instruments chosen are abit too generic for me, the piano in particular, sounds cheap, i dont know how long uve been making tunes so its hard to gauge if its good or not

Why would the length of time somebody has been producing make a different to whether or not it is a good track?

i cant say its good if hes been producing for a long time, and i cant say its bad if hes hasnt.

[icebagg]

CollisionCourse, wirez, icebagg thanks for the feedback aswell

sure thing... 17 huh, you got a good ear man cant wait to hear more! i believe i followed you on soundcloud...(homage) bigups man keep it up

[wirez]

instruments chosen are abit too generic for me, the piano in particular, sounds cheap, i dont know how long uve been making tunes so its hard to gauge if its good or not

Why would the length of time somebody has been producing make a different to whether or not it is a good track?

i cant say its good if hes been producing for a long time, and i cant say its bad if hes hasnt.

Lol but as a tune it can only be good or bad My guess is that most people post here because they want to be sure that a track will be liked publicly before they expose it properly, therefore when the general public hear a track they're not going to give a fuck how long somebody has been producing, if it's shit they'll turn it off and if it's good they'll keep it playing... You know?

[Temo]

CollisionCourse, wirez, icebagg thanks for the feedback aswell

sure thing... 17 huh, you got a good ear man cant wait to hear more! i believe i followed you on soundcloud...(homage) bigups man keep it up

yeah cheers man

[Temo]

instruments chosen are abit too generic for me, the piano in particular, sounds cheap, i dont know how long uve been making tunes so its hard to gauge if its good or not

Why would the length of time somebody has been producing make a different to whether or not it is a good track?

i cant say its good if hes been producing for a long time, and i cant say its bad if hes hasnt.

Lol but as a tune it can only be good or bad My guess is that most people post here because they want to be sure that a track will be liked publicly before they expose it properly, therefore when the general public hear a track they're not going to give a fuck how long somebody has been producing, if it's shit they'll turn it off and if it's good they'll keep it playing... You know?

yeah defiantly, not sure if thats the case here though