i like deep drony rolling tunes like this. good percussion work and atmospherics. i would say u need to beef up u're kick a lot more cos u can barely hear it. maybe a bit of eq will sort that out. also, increase the volume of the kicks and snares so they have the same amount of presence in the track as your percussion and synthsrinseballs21 wrote:
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FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
i like the bells that come in at around 0.40. nice drums and percussion giving it a bouncy funky feel.jakerobert wrote: Soundcloud
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
heres one i just finished last night
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not really dubstep but thought i'l put it up anyway
critique away
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not really dubstep but thought i'l put it up anyway
critique away

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
heres a remix I did on linkin park new song the catalyst.. if you like the sound you can download a pack containing some of the tracks for this songs(including pianos, drums and vocals) from their myspace site and remix it as well.. tell me what you think.
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http://soundcloud.com/juanjom_182-hotma ... -jjo-mix-1
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http://soundcloud.com/juanjom_182-hotma ... -jjo-mix-1
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Nice man, Got a 2-step vibe on it.mistayif wrote:heres one i just finished last night
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not really dubstep but thought i'l put it up anyway
critique away
Some of the hits sound a little sharp though?
Nice! very smooth, To be honest I never know what to criticize on a more experimental track because its not so obvious what is intentional and whats not.
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This is my new bit. Getting on the darker side of things recently
Depone - Chunk
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Let me know how it goes down
Depone - Chunk
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Let me know how it goes down
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
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A-List - Feel For Me - FENTPLATEDCOMP001
A-List - Motivation/Halcyon - FENTPLATED007
A-List - Darnce Hall/Uneasy Situation/Serenity/Escape - ILL004
A-List - Rhymes Of Jah - DUBLIMEP02
A-List - Odyssey/Militant - Forthcoming Red Volume
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A-List - Feel For Me - FENTPLATEDCOMP001
A-List - Motivation/Halcyon - FENTPLATED007
A-List - Darnce Hall/Uneasy Situation/Serenity/Escape - ILL004
A-List - Rhymes Of Jah - DUBLIMEP02
A-List - Odyssey/Militant - Forthcoming Red Volume
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Thanks Depone : )Depone wrote: Nice! very smooth, To be honest I never know what to criticize on a more experimental track because its not so obvious what is intentional and whats not.
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@ mistayif - feeling that! but i agree with depone, some hits sound a tad sharp! that clicking sound especially!.. but i do like the track.. nice work.
@ +3 - im going to be honest, im not a fan of this sound... i mean, its got a nice flow and shit, its just not my cup of brew. some nice hits used though.
@ Depone - listened to this earlier on soundcloud... you just get better and better man, sick stuff!, your sound design work is top notch, and your production skills are some of the best out there ive heard recently, big things coming from you man!
@ impey - SIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICKKKK!.. damn you and A-List whipped up some summer vibes with this one... oh wait, i am half of A-List... nah.. any feedback on our track would be super!
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cheers!
@ +3 - im going to be honest, im not a fan of this sound... i mean, its got a nice flow and shit, its just not my cup of brew. some nice hits used though.
@ Depone - listened to this earlier on soundcloud... you just get better and better man, sick stuff!, your sound design work is top notch, and your production skills are some of the best out there ive heard recently, big things coming from you man!
@ impey - SIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICKKKK!.. damn you and A-List whipped up some summer vibes with this one... oh wait, i am half of A-List... nah.. any feedback on our track would be super!
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cheers!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
@ A-list - I really enjoyed that mate, big dub summer vibe - any plans for a download/release?
@ Depone - You know how filthy this sounds, do i need to say much more?! Only thing i can think of is maybe a sample or sound before the drop to add character, something that will stick in peoples heads.
@ +3 - Very nice feel to it, great push and pull with the beat, i prefered before the drop to after it tbh! maybe add a few more new features in after the drop? great stuff though
So this is mine, lets see what you guys think
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@ Depone - You know how filthy this sounds, do i need to say much more?! Only thing i can think of is maybe a sample or sound before the drop to add character, something that will stick in peoples heads.
@ +3 - Very nice feel to it, great push and pull with the beat, i prefered before the drop to after it tbh! maybe add a few more new features in after the drop? great stuff though
So this is mine, lets see what you guys think

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Drum And Bass
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
yeah man, this will be one of the songs on the album that we're releasing on a nice label!Crosby wrote:@ A-list - I really enjoyed that mate, big dub summer vibe - any plans for a download/release?
@ Depone - You know how filthy this sounds, do i need to say much more?! Only thing i can think of is maybe a sample or sound before the drop to add character, something that will stick in peoples heads.
@ +3 - Very nice feel to it, great push and pull with the beat, i prefered before the drop to after it tbh! maybe add a few more new features in after the drop? great stuff though
So this is mine, lets see what you guys think-
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and as for your song: i like this man, it almost feels as if there should be some grime vocals over the top of it? i like the stab bass sound that comes in.. nice progression... overall nice song... the only thing i could say, is that the drums dont jump out at me, but maybe thats how you wanted them, in which case, fair play!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Hi there everyone!
i'm new to the forum and this is my first post so I thought I might as well introduce myself here aswell as throwing you my track... Im a 15 year old kid and just got a MIDI keyboard and Logic Express 9 for my birthday so thought I might as well start making some tunes.. I started swarming round on this forum for tips and visited several youtube tutorials and generally just messed about trying things out but hesitated to make an account on here till now... and well here I am.
I dont know what anyone thinks of my music yet.. I don't even know whether some people would put it in the 'Dubstep' genre but let me know what you think
i'd love to hear anything, whether you think im alright or completely awful.. any tips would be awesome as well!
The track i'm posting is quite a commercial pop-dubstep (oh god) remix of a Lily Allen song - The Fear.. Im not a keen fan of Lily allen really but I thought it would be a fun song to try and remix so I could get to know my DAW logic. I started my making drum tracks, sampling, making bass lines and sub basses, wobbles then added synths and fiddled around with it. I don't think the songs finished yet but here it is...
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Let me know what you think I would be so grateful!
Many thanks,
Joe

I dont know what anyone thinks of my music yet.. I don't even know whether some people would put it in the 'Dubstep' genre but let me know what you think

The track i'm posting is quite a commercial pop-dubstep (oh god) remix of a Lily Allen song - The Fear.. Im not a keen fan of Lily allen really but I thought it would be a fun song to try and remix so I could get to know my DAW logic. I started my making drum tracks, sampling, making bass lines and sub basses, wobbles then added synths and fiddled around with it. I don't think the songs finished yet but here it is...
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Let me know what you think I would be so grateful!
Many thanks,
Joe

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
how many times.... GIVE FEEDBACK IF YOU WANT FEEDBACK!!!!!!!!!... you may have given feedback that i dont know about (PM, soundcloud) etc, but if you havent.. GIVE IT before you expect to RECIEVE any!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
If people don't want to leave feedback thinking i don't give feedback, i do.. lots and lots of feedback.. I just leave it in the comment bar of soundcloud. I would much rather get particular with what i like and dislike. It's a lot easier that way.
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Don't be surprised if I leave tons of feedback on your soundcloud, I hope you do the same for me.
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