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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by aux » Thu Feb 25, 2010 5:17 pm

continuumdnb wrote:
aux wrote:Soundcloud

got a weird one for you lot...
Feed back welcome of course :)
Interesting, i really like the experimental vibe of this, your drums are great.

Might turn down that kick at 2.45 though, try massively lowpassing then sticking a bit of verb on it to try and get that heartbeat sound i think you were going for, at it's just a bit too in your face for a breakdown.

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thanks for the feed back man, much appricate it.
and yeah, i actually tried to do the heartbeat thing (spot on there on your guess), but i ended up taking it out, cuz i felt it was a bit "expected" and over used at times as a mood changer... so i prefer to roll it out and keep straight foward on the the second drop with a twist with the weird vox thing... still not sure about it all tho...
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Post by aux » Thu Feb 25, 2010 5:25 pm

vly wrote:@aux - i enjoy the experimental feeling of this one ! Something funny about the snare tho..
thanks for the feed back :)
explain "funny"... is it like "haha" funny? or "HA" funny...?
lol... nah seriously... it is the actual tone/pitch of it that's a bit weird? 8)
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Post by CollisionCourse » Thu Feb 25, 2010 5:27 pm

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Post by vly » Thu Feb 25, 2010 6:50 pm

aux wrote:
vly wrote:@aux - i enjoy the experimental feeling of this one ! Something funny about the snare tho..
thanks for the feed back :)
explain "funny"... is it like "haha" funny? or "HA" funny...?
lol... nah seriously... it is the actual tone/pitch of it that's a bit weird? 8)
yea maybe its pitched somehow and it doesnt match the rest of the beat.. :)
but shouldnt be that hard to fix/change
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Post by SesG » Thu Feb 25, 2010 7:15 pm

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Just reupping this one as seemed to miss out on getting any feedback for it - will give feedback for feedback :)
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Post by wirez » Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:07 pm

Hey all.

Have a new track up for free download (or option to donate over paypal if you like it :wink:). It's a bootleg remix of Chemical Brothers - Hey Boy, Hey Girl. Hopefully I've done the track justice and haven't let it down at all, although I'm completely aware that little of the original remains :P

Feel free to let me know what you think (in downloads or money :lol:)

Thanks! Here's the link (there is a player on the site as well as the download link)

http://whyrez.bandcamp.com/track/superstar-bootleg
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Post by CollisionCourse » Thu Feb 25, 2010 9:21 pm

@vly
really like that. intro is big, kinda generic sound of the wobble but its got a funky melody so it works. i like how the track progresses aswell, nice work!

@aux
again love the intro, the drums are crazy! the drop is nice, the bassline works well with the other sounds which it something i always find difficult. great variation of sounds and i love the sort of vocal change on the second drop. complex track, big up

@sesg
the distortion on the intro is sick, but i think it needs more variation in my opinion, maybe a few effects to light it up. not feeling the wobble, doesnt suit the heavyness of the track if that makes sense? like it needs more depth or something, or i might be just talking rubbish. it needs changing either way in my opinion. good so far though!
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Post by jsaxton » Fri Feb 26, 2010 12:12 am

jfloyd wrote:A New Peaches - Fuck the pain away remix...
any feedback appreciated :)

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not bad bruv, personally i thought the vocals maybe a wee bit over powering...
but thars preference
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Post by markie1210 » Fri Feb 26, 2010 12:15 am

**Shock Horror**

get in!

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Post by jsaxton » Fri Feb 26, 2010 4:36 pm

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kotku wrote:if something sounds like shit and is not pop then it's techno, or is this definition flawed aswell?
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Post by penndragon » Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:25 pm

Just produced this track...let me know what u think...cheers

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Post by WeBang » Fri Feb 26, 2010 8:39 pm

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Post by zonetrooper5 » Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:48 pm

Finished my Blotter track, its now up on myspace so feel free to listen to it. :D

http://www.myspace.com/blindedwarlords

Its also up on my soundcloud page if you hate myspace:

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Post by DubSac » Fri Feb 26, 2010 11:07 pm

New track done. Some feedback would be awesome, I'm collaborating with RABBIT on this one, so the collab version will be done soonish. thanks guys!

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Post by Astral » Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:37 am

jsaxton wrote:Soundcloud
Nice arrangement, nice sounds. The woofers arnt going as mad as they're used to though.
DubSac wrote:New track done. Some feedback would be awesome, I'm collaborating with RABBIT on this one, so the collab version will be done soonish. thanks guys!

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It's a nice track, but if it were mine, id fill it out a bit more, can feel empty at times. But that's the thing about opinions, they're subjective.
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Post by Max4Beats » Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:51 am

CollisionCourse wrote:Soundcloud
please

The intro is cool, but its a bit too easy to get distracted
0.44 The beat that comes in here is cool, really grime like
1.11 - 1.45 Didn't like having the break here
1.44 - 2.12 This is perfect from a grime track, it would be good with lyrics over it
2.13 - 3.46 The riff you brought in here was cool, but theres nothing there to grab your attention. No real lead, No bass line..... It's boring
3.46 - end Same again... Nothing to keep you interested in the track. It's just to ambient, that percussive lead just doesn't work on a track without a bassline/Lead It needs to have Bars on it in order to make it a good track. But even with bars it has to have a bass line too, that BD is crying for a friend!

Good production but i found the track a bit boring
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Post by CollisionCourse » Sat Feb 27, 2010 11:02 am

Max4Beats wrote:
CollisionCourse wrote:Soundcloud
please

The intro is cool, but its a bit too easy to get distracted
0.44 The beat that comes in here is cool, really grime like
1.11 - 1.45 Didn't like having the break here
1.44 - 2.12 This is perfect from a grime track, it would be good with lyrics over it
2.13 - 3.46 The riff you brought in here was cool, but theres nothing there to grab your attention. No real lead, No bass line..... It's boring
3.46 - end Same again... Nothing to keep you interested in the track. It's just to ambient, that percussive lead just doesn't work on a track without a bassline/Lead It needs to have Bars on it in order to make it a good track. But even with bars it has to have a bass line too, that BD is crying for a friend!

Good production but i found the track a bit boring
glad you took the time to listen man! each to their own :D
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Post by CDR » Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:06 pm

Florence and the machine CDR REMIX
http://www.tracksandfields.com/songs.php?
please leave sum feedback and vote if poss...
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Post by penndragon » Sat Feb 27, 2010 5:13 pm

Just produced another track....cheers

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Post by Muta » Sat Feb 27, 2010 5:42 pm

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My first attempt at dubstep :]
Made in Renoise. Not having much expierence in music production. (2 months or so.)

leave some feedback please!! I will give feedback in return :]

Enjoy :]

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*Edit: if the player on here says: "Shoot! track currently not available or something aong those lines, here must be a working link:
http://soundcloud.com/mutadubstep/street-terrorism
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