Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

[collective]

http://soundcloud.com/simple/long-distance-rub-down

some new stuff. let me know what you think.

[jsaxton]

http://soundcloud.com/simple/long-distance-rub-down

some new stuff. let me know what you think.

give feedback first...
have you yet learned to read?

[phrex]

can I get some feedback on this tune? I've given some out on a couple tunes already in this thread....

Soundcloud

thanks in advance!

that sounds just beautiful... havent heard it on my big speakers yet so will comment on that later

really sounds beautiful! the piano fits in well! well done! maybe some eqing would help giving a bit more crispy sound tho....
liek it much!

[deadnoisesystem]

@collige
i feel that wobble bass is incredibly repetitive
i feel no sub?
and the mix feels quite empty, play around with some mastering fx
its alright compositionaly though

there was alot of feedback for the other tracks so....
Soundcloud
probably on release hence the preview, what would you like to hear/ what are you expecting
comments on composition and mastering appreciated
thanks

pure filth, good work fella, sound ok on the headfones with the soundcloud

[dignan]

can I get some feedback on this tune? I've given some out on a couple tunes already in this thread....

Soundcloud

thanks in advance!

Hey man, good stuff here. I think it sounds a bit underwater because you might have too much going on in the <300hz area. I think isolating the low end with some EQ work would bring out the top end more. Less is more really. Good track thought enjoy it!

thanks for all the comments and feedback everyone - really appreciate it!

[deadnoisesystem]

can I get some feedback on this tune? I've given some out on a couple tunes already in this thread....

Soundcloud

thanks in advance!

that sounds just beautiful... havent heard it on my big speakers yet so will comment on that later

really sounds beautiful! the piano fits in well! well done! maybe some eqing would help giving a bit more crispy sound tho....
liek it much!

very nice sounding tune, piano is bang on

[phrex]

Soundcloud
oriental influenced track... deep as the abyss between the arab world and the israeli. what you think of this? feedback is much appreciated

bumping this one up

[collective]

http://soundcloud.com/simple/long-distance-rub-down

some new stuff. let me know what you think.

give feedback first...
have you yet learned to read?

I did give feedback man. To the one I thought I could help. You shouldn't be such a dick.

can I get some feedback on this tune? I've given some out on a couple tunes already in this thread....

Soundcloud

thanks in advance!

Hey man, good stuff here. I think it sounds a bit underwater because you might have too much going on in the <300hz area. I think isolating the low end with some EQ work would bring out the top end more. Less is more really. Good track thought enjoy it!

thanks for all the comments and feedback everyone - really appreciate it!

[jsaxton]

@collective sorry i ctrl f your name and nothing came up, so i assumed you didnt give anything back
sorry

[Code Zero]

http://soundcloud.com/simple/long-distance-rub-down

some new stuff. let me know what you think.

Dreamy shizzle, just woke up so that's perfect wake up music :d

only downside i can think of atm is that it maybe could use more variation.


I while ago i made a track with a friend of me. A filthy one so have a listen and comment plz. Imo there is something wrong with the mastering, tried some things before but can"t really find out how to solve it properly

anyhow here's the track: Code Zero & Corrosion - DrunkardSoundcloud

[penndragon]

Soundcloud
oriental influenced track... deep as the abyss between the arab world and the israeli. what you think of this? feedback is much appreciated

bumping this one up

sorry bro not really feeling this track personaly....it just does't flow...it feels like uv put about 3 or 4 track into one...

sorry for negative comments jus giving feedback mate....

[penndragon]

http://soundcloud.com/simple/long-distance-rub-down

some new stuff. let me know what you think.

really like this track..i think u could put some vocals on this track and it would be even better....
good work

[penndragon]

http://soundcloud.com/simple/long-distance-rub-down

some new stuff. let me know what you think.

Dreamy shizzle, just woke up so that's perfect wake up music :d

only downside i can think of atm is that it maybe could use more variation.


I while ago i made a track with a friend of me. A filthy one so have a listen and comment plz. Imo there is something wrong with the mastering, tried some things before but can"t really find out how to solve it properly

anyhow here's the track: Code Zero & Corrosion - DrunkardSoundcloud

this is an ok track code Zero....good beats and bass...but just ok

[jsaxton]

Dreamy shizzle, just woke up so that's perfect wake up music :d

only downside i can think of atm is that it maybe could use more variation.


I while ago i made a track with a friend of me. A filthy one so have a listen and comment plz. Imo there is something wrong with the mastering, tried some things before but can"t really find out how to solve it properly

anyhow here's the track: Code Zero & Corrosion - DrunkardSoundcloud

this is an ok track code Zero....good beats and bass...but just ok

would be an awesome track if the EQ was fixed. add a bit more brightness.

[deadnoisesystem]

Dreamy shizzle, just woke up so that's perfect wake up music :d

only downside i can think of atm is that it maybe could use more variation.


I while ago i made a track with a friend of me. A filthy one so have a listen and comment plz. Imo there is something wrong with the mastering, tried some things before but can"t really find out how to solve it properly

anyhow here's the track: Code Zero & Corrosion - DrunkardSoundcloud

this is an ok track code Zero....good beats and bass...but just ok

would be an awesome track if the EQ was fixed. add a bit more brightness.

hes bang on the money there, its a sick track and brightness in the mix will make it great.

[DubSac]

can I get some feedback on this tune? I've given some out on a couple tunes already in this thread....

Soundcloud

thanks in advance!

that sounds just beautiful... havent heard it on my big speakers yet so will comment on that later

really sounds beautiful! the piano fits in well! well done! maybe some eqing would help giving a bit more crispy sound tho....
liek it much!

Agree with everyone else on this track. The piano is super sick! Also agree with maybe a little eqing...and PERSONALLY i would like a diff snare, i think one with a fatter sound would be better. Thats just me tho! Sick job man!

[DubSac]

was about to ask why is the thread closed lol

0:01 i like these foreign drum guys here =)
0:55- the piano comes in nicely here, kinda sounds like one of those creepy old pianos you see in crazy old moves.

A pretty sick track man. It's not really my thing, I'm more into the filthy stuff, but I can tell its produced fairly well. Keep it up man!

[DubSac]

can I get some feedback on this tune? I've given some out on a couple tunes already in this thread....

Soundcloud

thanks in advance!

The piano intro is badass man!
0:55- nice transition to add the wobble, very well done.

Sick job man, i really like this track. Don't really have any critiques for it at all! Biggup!

[DubSac]

Soundcloud

Hey guys, would love some feedback on this!

[Code Zero]

Soundcloud

Hey guys, would love some feedback on this!

sounds nice, enough variation i find for this track. The voice bass sounds a bit too empty, phatten it up a bit. Also on that bass i find it a bit 'overbitcrushed' (just my opinion, i also have that on basses in my tunes that i tend to overdo it on the bitcrusher)

but overall nice track!