FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by Glace » Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:02 am

cleanexecution wrote:this is a grime track ive been workin for the past few days. i feel like ive reached some pinacle point with the track.. although i feel like its not totally finished yet all of its elements are in place. and kind of feedback would be nice!

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Omg that sound is awesome. No constructive feedback here I'm sorry, just needed to say it's awesome :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by somatix » Fri Apr 02, 2010 12:17 pm

@ gravity, yeah agree on most parts, might tighten it up a bit....it was 4 hours work so needs a revisit. I am a distortion fan, not too bothered about the squashing. will check your track and feedback!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by wirez » Fri Apr 02, 2010 12:55 pm

mistayif wrote:could i get some more feedback on this tune please?

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i was thinking about sending it out but after giving it another listen just now, i think it needs a little bit of tidying up as some parts are a bit messy

what do you guys think?
Really enjoyed this, an awesome selection of sounds used to build up a wicked track.

Criticisms...

Sub bass seems very flappy and exceptionally unidirectional, I have a feeling this might be an issue between the bottom end of your kick drum and your sub bass. Might be an idea to high pass your kick a little higher and to compress your sub bass to make it feel a little 'tighter'.

I think the vocal could have been a little louder.
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Whyrez - Give Those Toxins a Beatin [Free Download]

Post by wirez » Fri Apr 02, 2010 1:07 pm

Hey all, got a free download for you all to enjoy :)

http://whyrez.bandcamp.com/track/give-t ... s-a-beatin

There's a player on the site too so you can check to see if you like it before downloading!

(For those not familiar with Bandcamp, you click download and it will give you the option to donate, feel free to do so as all donations will go directly to me, but if you'd rather rob me for my gold just type '0' in the box and you will be able to download from a selection of different high quality formats :))
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by kievccs » Fri Apr 02, 2010 3:17 pm

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Another one for you guys Enjoy!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by kievccs » Fri Apr 02, 2010 3:22 pm

Here's my latest effort. Will comment on more tunes as they come through

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I really liked the breaks on the track it gives it some personality to it intead of the normal Dubstep beat. cheers for that!
but the overall drumset sound at the begining sound a bit weak and no punchiness. besides that pretty good work!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by penndragon » Fri Apr 02, 2010 9:42 pm

kontigobeats wrote:gravity: this one is nice! some real good sounds used in it, keep it up!

heres my new one, some nice synths and tried to get a nice bass drop, quite new to production but quite pleased with this one so any feedback appreciated!
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No other comments i can make about the production of this track other than i really like it bro!
good work

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by DubSac » Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:58 pm

Hey guys, changed a few things in this one, would LOVE some feedback.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by darkdubz » Sat Apr 03, 2010 1:57 am

right got my widget sorted now so here goes, any feedbacks good feedback.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by darkdubz » Sat Apr 03, 2010 1:59 am

DubSac wrote:Hey guys, changed a few things in this one, would LOVE some feedback.

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I like it mate, cool vocal sample, and ya keep the bass interesting.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by darkdubz » Sat Apr 03, 2010 2:00 am

penndragon wrote:
kontigobeats wrote:gravity: this one is nice! some real good sounds used in it, keep it up!

heres my new one, some nice synths and tried to get a nice bass drop, quite new to production but quite pleased with this one so any feedback appreciated!
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No other comments i can make about the production of this track other than i really like it bro!
good work

cool beat, nice kick, nice synth work going on in the intro.think the bass line needs work, really loving that intro

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by darkdubz » Sat Apr 03, 2010 2:02 am

kievccs wrote:Soundcloud

Another one for you guys Enjoy!
i like the delay on the snare, nice minimal feel going on. top tune bro not much else to say, maybe turn the hi hats down just a touch

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by kievccs » Sat Apr 03, 2010 2:16 am

@darkdubz your widgets seems to be broken or someting :/ Thanks for the feedback btw! I'm afraid i can't help the hihat thing cause' my mac just crashed a few weeks ago and i've lost all my projects samples and whatnot :( I'm seeing this as a "Fresh new beggining" haha just triyng to have a positive attitude against this haha :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by darkdubz » Sat Apr 03, 2010 2:32 am

sorry to hear about your computer man, that sux, has happened to me before, was a good excuse to upgrade ma mac

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by kievccs » Sat Apr 03, 2010 2:47 am

darkdubz wrote:sorry to hear about your computer man, that sux, has happened to me before, was a good excuse to upgrade ma mac
That's exactly what i did haha. :lol: Anyway ima lurking into your cloud to see what's going on there. Cheers

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by IanMassoth » Sat Apr 03, 2010 3:56 am

Hey guys, tracks seem to be a lot better from the last time I was in here. Really jealous of some of your tunes!
Looking to make some finalizing changes on this one, let me know what you think.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by darkdubz » Sat Apr 03, 2010 3:59 am

IanMassoth wrote:Hey guys, tracks seem to be a lot better from the last time I was in here. Really jealous of some of your tunes!
Looking to make some finalizing changes on this one, let me know what you think.

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like the atmosphere at the beginning, nice beat. would work on making that bass lower, but thats just personal preference. nice track mate keep it up

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by IanMassoth » Sat Apr 03, 2010 4:06 am

kievccs wrote:Soundcloud

Another one for you guys Enjoy!
Really mellow track, I was really excited from the intro.
The wind up in the beginning is to cranking and electro-ish, got me too excited for the flow of the track. It was also too loud. I felt the tape delaying percussion felt robotic and cheap. I think a thicker reverb could help it out. The mouthy break verse was a real treat. Over all a pretty cool track.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by kievccs » Sat Apr 03, 2010 4:16 am

IanMassoth wrote:
kievccs wrote:Soundcloud

Another one for you guys Enjoy!
Really mellow track, I was really excited from the intro.
The wind up in the beginning is to cranking and electro-ish, got me too excited for the flow of the track. It was also too loud. I felt the tape delaying percussion felt robotic and cheap. I think a thicker reverb could help it out. The mouthy break verse was a real treat. Over all a pretty cool track.
I personally think that people shouldn't follow rules or things like that at the time at making music. Like combining sounds with others that they don't really match but somehow feels right.

As one of my fellas producer Pacheko would said. "Say no to formula"

thank you for your feedback man i really apreciate it. Your track it's really really good you shouldn't be jealous haha :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

Post by the dub lemon » Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:23 am

Something we finished last night (along with a bottle of tequila)

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