FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Geeza » Sun May 30, 2010 10:51 pm

modepth wrote:
Geeza wrote:Hey all fellow producer's and producettes........

been away for ages due to my laptop going spastic but back with a new beat for ya I think its finished but if you have and tips or feedback id be greatfull and it will be givien back :D

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really dutty track mate, only thing i'd suggest is like what's been mentioned before; just add in some automation and sweeps to keep it exciting, other than that nice work mate!! :D
Thanks for the feedback!!! I was gunna add more automation an that i just got lazy and couldnt be arsed any more myabe thats my downfall, but yeah i agree it does get a bit samey samey dont it.

That tune in your sig is a banga mate!!!!!!! propa abient sunday morning hangova music, just what i needed to chill me out before bed actually top tune!!!!!!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by modepth » Sun May 30, 2010 10:57 pm

DannyH93 wrote:Thats nice geeza, especially the chopped synths :D

Heres mine, only changed it a little bit from the preview, still cant eq properly i dont think :P

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sounds pretty good mate, but might want to try bringing up the bass a bit though to fatten it up some more, nice work :wink:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Geeza » Sun May 30, 2010 11:00 pm

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DannyH93 wrote:Thats nice geeza, especially the chopped synths :D

Heres mine, only changed it a little bit from the preview, still cant eq properly i dont think :P

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sounds pretty good mate, but might want to try bringing up the bass a bit though to fatten it up some more, nice work :wink:
Agree with this totally!!!!!! Low end needs to be fattened up in the eqing deffo!!!!! banging tune though as soon as its more bassy though your'll notice the difference str8 away!!! Top tune regardless!!!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by modepth » Sun May 30, 2010 11:01 pm

Geeza wrote:
modepth wrote:
Geeza wrote:Hey all fellow producer's and producettes........

been away for ages due to my laptop going spastic but back with a new beat for ya I think its finished but if you have and tips or feedback id be greatfull and it will be givien back :D

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really dutty track mate, only thing i'd suggest is like what's been mentioned before; just add in some automation and sweeps to keep it exciting, other than that nice work mate!! :D
Thanks for the feedback!!! I was gunna add more automation an that i just got lazy and couldnt be arsed any more myabe thats my downfall, but yeah i agree it does get a bit samey samey dont it.

That tune in your sig is a banga mate!!!!!!! propa abient sunday morning hangova music, just what i needed to chill me out before bed actually top tune!!!!!!
ya welcome my friend, and thanks for taking the time out to listen to my own too appreciate it muchly ;)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by ironik » Mon May 31, 2010 10:49 am


I know its not whats normally shown here, its what i like though as i was into rap before i discovered the ultimate force known as dubstep so this is a hybrid.
What do you think?

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by hakka » Mon May 31, 2010 11:07 am

This is near enough finished now, maybe some slight EQ'ing to do but thats about it! Comment on soundcloud for a 320!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by infrasound » Mon May 31, 2010 2:25 pm

@ Tylerblue - Liking your tune mate, nice summery vibes. Snare's a little too quiet for my taste but other than that very nice. Production's really good.

@ Reignz - Again, nice tune. The bass sound could maybe do with a tiny bit more work, sounds a little bit stock at the mo. You using Massive? Like it a lot though, keep at it.

@ Trike12 - Real liking your style. Not usually my sort of thing but real nice. Definitely interested in the remix, would be interesting to hear what you'd do! Check your inbox...

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by youre_strooly » Mon May 31, 2010 2:59 pm

The Strooly Sessions Live Mix v.2 :: The Goat v. The Machine (Filthy Dubstep Edition) CHECK IT OUT! LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK!!!

There are a few rough spots, mainly because I don't think my old ass laptop and process some of the heavy ass bass so it kinda lags out in a few spots, but try to ignore that lol.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Geeza » Mon May 31, 2010 3:34 pm

ironik wrote:
I know its not whats normally shown here, its what i like though as i was into rap before i discovered the ultimate force known as dubstep so this is a hybrid.
What do you think?
Nice idea and it works reminds me of that rusko kid sister track. only thing id say is up the volume level of the vocals a tad!!! Great stuff :D

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Geeza » Mon May 31, 2010 3:37 pm

hakka wrote:This is near enough finished now, maybe some slight EQ'ing to do but thats about it! Comment on soundcloud for a 320!

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ARE YOU MADDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a friggin tune could imagine this in dmz or whynot? the roof would just tear off!!!!!! That was a joy to my ears sir!!!!

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My colab with H@NX , check it out

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by hakka » Mon May 31, 2010 4:08 pm

Geeza wrote:
hakka wrote:This is near enough finished now, maybe some slight EQ'ing to do but thats about it! Comment on soundcloud for a 320!

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ARE YOU MADDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a friggin tune could imagine this in dmz or whynot? the roof would just tear off!!!!!! That was a joy to my ears sir!!!!
LOL thats gotta be the best ever quote ive had, biggup!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by zonetrooper5 » Mon May 31, 2010 5:56 pm

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Finished off another song, about time although I could use some feedback. :D

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by tripwire22 » Mon May 31, 2010 7:32 pm

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just literally finished this. i kinda like it but i feel like the mix is shitty

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by kontigobeats » Mon May 31, 2010 7:39 pm

@zonetrooper sounds alright but i think needs a mixdown, turn down those hats especially.
@tripwire nice use of sounds in this, has a nice soundscape, good drums and percussion, keep it up.

Heres mine, some more future garagey style, some nice synths and chopped vocals, feedback appreciated!
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Not mixed down at all so ignore that, but maybe some feedback on the structure too coz im working on that as im getting into djing my tracks so want them to fit well with each other and others . Thanks!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by GRAYSKALE » Mon May 31, 2010 8:37 pm

@kontingobeats - left you some feedback on the work in progress page bro - again I'm loving the synths and percussion on this one!!
@tripwire - beautiful tunes as ever bro - loving that subby kick especially really adds some flavour to the drum pattern - maybe turn the snare down just a touch - other than that shit hot stuff!
@zonetrooper - got almost a jackin' house vibe to this one - its a fucking cool tune though - sub is fucking penetrating - sweet tune bro!!
@vertebrae steraliser - love the intro but think the bass needs more flow - really nice progression though - keep at it man!
@ironic - big fan of the hip-hop dubstep crossover tracks (bar snoop dogg - snoop dogg millionaire, lols) track as a whole is sweet vocals definately need a bit more juice though - looking forward to more of this sorta stuff from you bro!!

just finished the mixdown and master of this one - hope you like it - also free downloads on soundcloud if youre interested!!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Abiotic » Mon May 31, 2010 8:40 pm

DannyH93: Some of your elements need a small touch of reverb and delay to make them more smooth... They sound too dry to be honest.. The wobble is very trivial.. Try something else! :) You also need to turn down the hi-hats abit, otherwise it's acceptable.
Ironik: That constant wobble is getting annoying in absolutely no time.. The vocal is quite.. I would prefer a low banging sub bass instead of that wobble! Like it though!
Kontigobeats: Nice pad! The drums could be really smashing if you just equalized them a little more.. I like the synths slinking through the track! The vocal reminds me too much of Justin Timberlake or something :cry: That's negative!

This is my first dubstep track made alone! :) Some feedback would be awesome..
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Depone » Mon May 31, 2010 8:55 pm

want some filth?

Heres one from me (UK) and boot (OZ)

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Leave any comment you desire
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Enjoy!!!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by ResetTheAtari » Mon May 31, 2010 9:04 pm

hakka wrote:This is near enough finished now, maybe some slight EQ'ing to do but thats about it! Comment on soundcloud for a 320!

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That is massive. Will take a 320 for my new mix.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by EraREdux » Mon May 31, 2010 10:05 pm

Depone wrote:want some filth?

Heres one from me (UK) and boot (OZ)

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Leave any comment you desire
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Enjoy!!!
Sounds nastyyyy. I enjoy everything about this. Great production!

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Don't be surprised if I leave tons of feedback on your soundcloud, I hope you do the same for me.

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