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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by djaccel » Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:24 pm

cleanexecution wrote:this track is sick, big ups! feelin those kromestar vibes. everything seems EQ'd well also. :r:
Thanks mate :R:
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Nice job, the synths in the intro and the samples are top. Like the one guy said, the beginning just sounds a bit cluttered with both the bass and the synth at once. Try dropping just the bass for emphasis, and then add the synth in later to add energy or variation.
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by djaccel » Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:25 pm

Muta wrote:Wait a second... That track in that quote of mine, Its not mine... ? :l Somethings wrong here Something wrong happend while quoting maybe?

Also, I am a 1000% sure, and even just checked back, that i had put in my own track :/

which is:

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(Still waiting for feedback on this one By the way)

something wrong happend?
No idea what happened up there!
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Post by Muta » Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:43 pm

djaccel wrote:
Muta wrote:Wait a second... That track in that quote of mine, Its not mine... ? :l Somethings wrong here Something wrong happend while quoting maybe?

Also, I am a 1000% sure, and even just checked back, that i had put in my own track :/

which is:

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(Still waiting for feedback on this one By the way)

something wrong happend?
No idea what happened up there!
Me Neither, Ooh well...
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Post by WeBang » Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:11 pm

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I posted this a couple days ago only got one feed back on it. Anyways here it is one more time. Only reason I am posting it again is because if you did hit me up on AIM JrRappz and I;ll give you a 320.
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by antihero » Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:13 pm

Soyaman wrote:
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Soyaman wrote:PLEASE LISTEN TO THIS TRACK! it's mine and i'm proud of it! feedback would be appreciated.

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:z:
I was going to give feedback on this, but posting it repeatedly really pisses me of so... no.
:(
can't you just give it a chance, i'm sorry to piss you of. i really would like feedback.
Aww, aren't you nice, asking so politely? Well okay (even as I did notice you posting this third time.)

My wild guess would be that you're rather new in this production thing? Not that this would be bad, as it isn't. It just seems that you know your way around your tools, but need some work on the how to really make a tune. (which seems to a common problem with people trying to do electronic music in general)

So I pretty much have only one piece of advice, listen to the music you like, and think of what makes it work. The way you have build your tune is rubbish (sorry, but thats the truth) and there's just too much different things going on. Don't take this wrong, you just need to practice more, we all do, myself included.

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Post by The Phantom Banger » Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:25 pm

We Bang wrote:Soundcloud

I posted this a couple days ago only got one feed back on it. Anyways here it is one more time. Only reason I am posting it again is because if you did hit me up on AIM JrRappz and I;ll give you a 320.
this has got some lovely rhythm to it and that sample is sick!

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Post by The Phantom Banger » Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:27 pm

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8) sorry about not really leaving much feedback here, rarely finish tunes. Will start to contribute more

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Post by CollisionCourse » Thu Mar 04, 2010 10:54 pm

@ we bang
big samples to start with and on the drop too. the drums are and bassline are both nice but could be a bit more experimental if you get me - i feel like ive heard those doens of times before. the variation overall is spot on, but i think that vocal sample is rinsed a bit. should take it out for a few bars a let the bassline sit, well i would anyway. the second drop is sick and like i said the variation is sick. its listenable, would go well in the club, good work. :D

@ phantom badger
the synth on the intro is nice but i think its a bit too panned to the left. i love the way the melody builds and the drop is nice, think the sub needs bringing up a tiny bit if im being really picky. i like the break down of the drums at 1.22. despite you working the melody very well and variating it alot, i still think a few background pads here and there wont hurt, to add a bit more depth to it. like the outro too, well done.

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Post by tripwire22 » Thu Mar 04, 2010 11:01 pm

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just fixed 3 songs would love some feedback on either will return the favor

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Post by Plasmic aka Hanlo » Thu Mar 04, 2010 11:31 pm

New track finally finished, 2step vibes, deep and cosmic! Feedback is appreciated!

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Post by bogtrotter2step » Fri Mar 05, 2010 12:00 am

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Already posted this one, but didn't get feedback. Thought i would try again, will return the favor!

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Post by standard-proceduremusic » Fri Mar 05, 2010 12:14 am

http://soundcloud.com/standard-procedure-1

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Post by Bassmagnet » Fri Mar 05, 2010 1:50 am

bogtrotter2step wrote:Soundcloud

Just finished this one, lemme know what u guys think
Oh that is dirty captain! The drop... Is little better then fantastic ;)

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Post by Bassmagnet » Fri Mar 05, 2010 1:53 am

We Bang wrote:Soundcloud

I posted this a couple days ago only got one feed back on it. Anyways here it is one more time. Only reason I am posting it again is because if you did hit me up on AIM JrRappz and I;ll give you a 320.
Killa really suites this track man, I'm digging that sample. Big ups!
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Post by Bassmagnet » Fri Mar 05, 2010 1:56 am

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Just finished this one for a remix contest! I'm mixing on stereo speakers, so let me know if anything is sounding shittay.

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Post by SteX13 » Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:56 am

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ypDuC72XJgE

Hi peeps just finished this track about British soldiers dieing young in Iraq & Afghanistan.

Its my second track and personally I wish I could make decent noises :(

BUT its for my mate to rap over so will hide the failure in production :lol:

Rap & Dubstep, hate if you want :D

Please as much criticism as possible would be gratefully appreciated.

Should I take out my epic fails in grimeyness and just have a nice medolic tune? or try and work on making the noises sound good?

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Post by HicksPhonix » Fri Mar 05, 2010 12:16 pm

The Phantom Banger wrote:Soundcloud

8) sorry about not really leaving much feedback here, rarely finish tunes. Will start to contribute more

I don't know what it is, but something in this track keeps my attention. And i have to say with me, THATS HARD TO DO! because i'm a selfproclaimed f'd up critic hahaha
The overal mixing could be better, sounds seem a little off balance here and there but hey,


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Post by HicksPhonix » Fri Mar 05, 2010 12:19 pm

Bassmagnet wrote:Soundcloud
Just finished this one for a remix contest! I'm mixing on stereo speakers, so let me know if anything is sounding shittay.
the tune sounds nice, not a fan of these bass sounds though. Speaking of bass... where is the sub? There's hardly any low...
I listnen on studiomonitors btw.. If you don't have acces to studio monitors, use a freq analyser to check your low end. I think you will
notice there's hardly any low end.

Big up though!

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Post by HicksPhonix » Fri Mar 05, 2010 12:21 pm

djaccel wrote:
cleanexecution wrote:this track is sick, big ups! feelin those kromestar vibes. everything seems EQ'd well also. :r:
Thanks mate :R:
cleanexecution wrote:Soundcloud

The name of the song isnt final.. But heres my latest work!
Nice job, the synths in the intro and the samples are top. Like the one guy said, the beginning just sounds a bit cluttered with both the bass and the synth at once. Try dropping just the bass for emphasis, and then add the synth in later to add energy or variation.

Word, nice tune but loose the lead synth it doesn't fit well with the basspart.

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